@hyunjins-eyemole
Heyyy
Heyyy
From Me To You
You have the roar of the lion
And a heart of gold
You have the mind of an artist
With stories never told
You’re filled with desires
And your passion runs deep
You have the strength to move mountains
Yet you stay on your seat
You can start with nothing
And you will still win
When life wants to break you
Stand strong and lift your chin
Stare at life with your eyes
As it tries to kill
The passion deep inside
But it never will
Even if you are down
Listen to my call
Your story’s worth a thousand words
And your life means all
So cut the rope then
Then throw away the knife
You’ll win against this battle
If you’re still willing to fight
Even if no one’s with you
Remember this one man
The one who wrote this poem
Will cheer you from where he’s at
He’ll be sitting in silent
Watching you walk on
From afar, he’ll be smiling
That at last you are strong
intense clapping that's really good!
intense clapping that's really good!
Thank You!! ( ;3;)
So this is a song, the beat and cords in my head are similar to 'Toes' by Zac Brown Band:
My phone went off late Sunday evening
so I answered, being polite.
A girl said "I'm sorry, but we aren't meant to be,
so I'm breaking up with you tonight."
I sat down for a moment, to process her words.
Only one thing that I didn't know…
So I told her: "I'm sorry but could you just tell me
something? Something that I have to know?"
(Chorus)
"I'm sorry, who is this? Did you get a new phone?"
I asked to the girl, who's number's to me unknown.
"I'm sorry who is this? Your I voice might know."
I hope she wasn't offended, but I'll never know now
[This is all I've got so far]
Interesting, I'd want to read more
OwOOOO
Laughing Talking
Shoving Running
In a crowd but all alone
Girls in huddles
Boys in groups
But me I’m on my own
Just like clockwork
As it is
Bells ring every day
In a desk
Hair in my face
Can’t wait till the end of May
Mindless hours
Control my life
I just wanna die
Plain white walls
Empty smiles
Time to say goodbye
Woah. The ending is so abrupt even though it fits the rhythm. It’s a cool effect.
ever heard of Time to Say Goodbye by Tyler Joseph?
your poem reminds of it, like it could replace the lyrics :)
Really? Never heard of it. I was just sitting in the high school library building and was like- imma write a poem for mah friends on Notebook! So I did.
Holding
It's hard to stay strong.
To stay holding on,
Holding on for two.
I'm holding the ledge,
And you're holding my hand,
Hanging above oblivion,
And I'm starting to fall.
The voices of others jarr from above,
Coxing us to let go.
You're deaf to the taunts,
And I'm left to endure,
Their words of scorn and disbelief.
"You're fine."
"It's just stress."
"It's all in your head."
"You have a perfect life."
I'm dying here,
I don't need your words,
We don't need them.
We need help.
A rope.
A lifeline.
You can save her first,
She needs it.
She's starting to slip,
I'm too weak to hold her.
Save her,
Let me hold on.
(My first vent poem, I hope it's good. It's about me and my girlfriend and our depression weighing us down)
o0f shit i rlly know how this feels
i rlly like this one
Cool!
In the heart
Of the dark
Lies the flame burning rain
And it won't die again
At the edge
Of the ledge
Waits the fire
Never tires
Of spitting words out for the liar
By the bed
Playing dead
Sleeps the spark
Scarletly stark
Against a faded, bitter mark
Only with the tragedies
and unheard trees
Dies the hell
Of seeming well
Of watching them plug their ears as the forest fell
Here’s a poem about my life:
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thank you
Beautiful
Thank you
I need y'all to help me make this poem perfect
Ok. I’m here. I’m ready to help.
I'm sorry
That I don't know
How to do
'This'
All I know
Is what it's like
to be
With you
And that
Is not
Enough
i actually hate it but it's literally just my thoughts with no editing or anything lol
Hmmmmm sounds pretty good to moi- but then again every thing I write I keep raw
If that’s your unedited version then I’m jealous
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