forum If you're character were to die, what would he/she say before they passed?
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What to put on a character's grave:
Krys: She died doing what she loved, swearing profusely.
Marge: "Hmm, I keep thinking I left the stove o-" (Explosion/Fire/Bad thing in general.)

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reply to the ness post
also that would be great last words
john mulaney's always a win- check out his comedy bit on 'street smarts'

@HighPockets group

reply to the ness post
also that would be great last words
john mulaney's always a win- check out his comedy bit on 'street smarts'

I've never seen one of his filmed routines, but I've seen bits and pieces on Pinterest and he's hilarious!!
He also created the McDonald's Alignment Chart so that's a big plus.

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ooh, yeah
tag yourself- i'm part "we have food at home" and part "MCDONALDS MCDONALDS MCDONALDS"

@Leiko

Scarlett : F the human race
Toby : I loved you
Angela : take care of your (blank)
Dawn : Well, see you in hell

@Say-Hello-to-the-Rugs-Topology

Ada: Probably a ton of cussing before coming to accept her fate and saying, "If anyone asks, Satan just hired me. God, I've been waiting to say that for so long haha..ha…"
Danny: In the process he would go over once, twice, three times, ten times how he would want to be remembered. Would finally open up with, "It was never meant to come down to this, but for the record, I wish I could undo every asshole thing I've ever said or done to you. I'm sorry."
Hugo: Can't stop wishing he had written a will. Starts assigning his most important possessions (His cat, his polar bear rug, his 80's sweater collection or some shit, etc.) to almost just random people, making certain that he includes whoever is gathered around him. "Except you, Dan. You bastard." When he finally feels death's hand on his shoulder, he closes with. "-and the rest, just bury it with me."
Clara: She can't fully decide how to feel when she realized her time was coming. She felt as if there was so much more left to be done, yet deep down, she has been waiting for this. "You know what? It's about time. This old girl has been in this body long enough… Make sure the rest of my crew doesn't have a fate like mine. Take care, soldier…I'm going home."
J: Would probably cry out for Ada and maybe even Danny for a while. Basically anyone and everyone he knows. Even if they were by his side, he would be saying their names over and over again. He'd start rapidly asking all sorts of questions amidst his stuttering; "Can you fix me?", "Why did this happen?", "Will you guys be okay?", "Was I good son?"

@Bandito

Mika: "I was-never meant to be here. N-Never alive. I love you, okay? Maybe we'll go to the same place…in the sky…."
Shaciel: "I'm sorry." Pause. "T-try to bring me back again…? I DON'T WANT TO DIE-"
Repere: "You know, I never really liked this place. To be honest. Who could? Only thing who kept me here was you. So don't go." Takes a deep breath, embarrassed. "Will you hold my hand until it gets cold?"

@Leiko

Leiko: You'll be alright, no one can hurt you now.
Carmen: Don't… everything's on fire.
Demi: Don't worry he's my father, he had a reason for everything.
Bailey: If you love me let me go!
Auveen: It's coming.
Michael: I couldn't love, yet somehow I did
Justin: You don't know what's happening
Kai: I was just, me.
Chapel: Life has to end sometime.
Lissa: Don't tell the father
Rebekah: There was never love, only lust

@Becfromthedead group

Aurelius: My goddess… put in a good word for me, yeah? I'll see you soon… please protect me moving on…
Valkyrie: Please… please no… I've got work to do… a family to take care of… I can't leave yet…
Septima: So, this is the end, huh? The hero's death is… overrated.
Taurin: Take care of Lee for me… and make sure Auri's in good hands… I'm sorry I couldn't pull through this time…
Rosalie: N-n-no… please! I'm so scared… please help me…
Fiera: Laughs. Well… It was a matter of time, huh? The whole kingdom's going to turn it into something it's not… perhaps a political assassination. Good luck with that.
Moreau: At least… my liege is safe… gods save her…
Ignis: I have one final request… Please take my ashes back to the ocean…
Pollux: How unfortunate… I had so many lives to save, and in the end? Couldn't even save myself…
Cyrus: I'm not ready… I had so much left to prove… so many people left to love… and it's all gone.

@RJ-world-building

I haven't actually planned for any of my characters to die but if they did this is probably how it would happen:
Rin: "H-huh? I don't… I don't understand. W-why would you…."
Ken'Ichirou: "F-fuck you…Pops…"
Aiko: "Geez. Th-this is a lot more painful than I thought it was going to be."
Akane: "Aiko! Watch out!"
K BF: "I guess this is how it ends….I deserve this."
Daichi: "Heh…I've had a long run….just, l-look after them for me….please…."
Quinn: "Damnit! Just when I'd won…Just when I'd…"
Pavone: "This isn't how it was supposed to end!"

@Really-want-to-disappear

Luna: please don’t let me die.. I-I love you minkei… goodbye..dies

Minkei: fuck the world! stabs himself while he’s already dying oof

Krystalie: find thoever killed me and muted them in the worst way possible; with a pineapple up their ass and choking on a dick! runs and jumps off a cliff

I have some more characters but they wouldn’t be the ones to die, they are the ones who killed the three ubove. (Those three I listed are either annoying or rude as hell)

@Robin

I have been working on a book, I don't have anything actually written out but I have planned a lot of it.
A not so quick preview: Edward and Azai are brothers, they get kidnapped when they were really young and are spliced with animals, after they were kidnapped they didn't see each other so they don't know what happened to the other, Edward was a spliced with a wolf and Azai with a cougar.
Edward escapes after he is (falsely) told his brother died, and lives a mainly normal life in the woods so no one can see his wolf half he has a family consisting of a wife, an adopted son (who is a wolf) a son (who was also part wolf because of the splicing), and a newborn baby girl. He became well known as the hero Wolf.
Azai was never told that his brother escaped and was told if he did whatever the told him to they would free both of them after his job was done. He was ordered to kill Wolfs family and then kill Wolf under the name Cougar, he kills Wolfs family, unknowingly killing his family.

He finally finds Wolf heartbroken and ready to die, he takes off his helmet and takes his katana stabbing him in the heart Edward uses his leftover energy to take of his own helmet both brothers eyes widening "Brother" Edward weakly smiles "you're alive." Azai has tears running down his face sobbing "Brother?" he starts desperately trying to stop the blood flow "No, stay with me!" he cradles his brothers head "stay with me, please… please."

@Musical_Queen

"How, Darling, did you know?" The man said, approaching Absinthe.

"That the Devil was in Los Angeles?" Absinthe said with a laugh, "Well, I can smell the fire and brimstone from a mile away,"

The Devil scoffed. Acting quickley, He lunged ahead and burried a knife deep into her stomach. "Have fun in Hell," He whispered into the girl's ear, before letting her go.

Absinthe gripped his shoulders, "Then I'll see you there," She said, before removing her mouth from his ear. Blood dripped out of her mouth and stained her teeth, "Dad,"

Absinthe collapsed on the ground, surrounded by a pool of blood. Slowly, grey wings unfurled from her back, a mark from a fallen angel. The wings suddenly burned away and all Lucifer could do was stare at the corpse of his fallen daughter.

All he could mutter is, "What have I done?"

Author's note: Not up to my usual standard. It is really bad so I apologize

@Lunar_Eclipse

Tyler lay on the ground staring at me. Something was different. In his eyes something changed. He weakly smiled and me. Blood pooled from his body onto the concrete. The rest of the world seemed to fade away into darkness.
I keeled by Tyler stroking his head, running my fingers through his hair. I knew that I couldn't do anything to save him. The wounds were too much and he already lost too much blood. The only thing I could do was to make his death a comfortable one.
It was like I could feel his pain. His confliction with himself and his feelings. He wasn't ready to die, he was scared. He was in pain. Emotional and physical. He held onto his life with a weak grip.
"Colby," Tyler weakly muttered.
"Shhh," I hushed him and smiled holding back a thousand tears.
"Colby…I love…you." He smiled at me while a tear trailed from the corner of his eye and down his cheek. He finally said it. He finally told me that he loved me.
I couldn't do it anymore, I started to cry silently. "I know," I smiled, my hands now shaking. "I love you too." I could feel his body go loose in my hands. I knew that his time was up. I lifted his head to mine and pressed my forehead against his. I held his body close to me as I said, "I just realized it too late."

@Musical_Queen

Her laugh slowly turned into a cough. Harsh enough that soon she was on the floor. The boys tried to save her, but it was too late. She had died, not being able to breathe. Lies had destroyed her. And everybody ignored her final words.