forum Anyone else have a shitty complicated plot that makes zero sense?
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Deleted user

Just wanna know becuz I'm bored at midnight on a Friday.
My whole storyline is one huge mess of things that make zero sense.
Kittens that are dead people
FRiking body control
weird amulets that are cursed
mEgAN
cliche relationships
weird things happening
everyone dying
physics do not apply to what I am writing
death doesn't hurt
returning villain because I'm too lazy to make another full plot
everyone's the main character yaaaaaaaaaay
a cat and a dog have a relationship
an angel fell in love with a bird
no one has transportation because the story takes place in one small town and im to lazy to make another place.
MeGAn SoMEHow kNoWS AlL

@ravens

my plot:
🔹magical people
🔹non-magical people
🔹2068 so I don't know what that'll be like
🔹PROBLEMS: Divergent, Percy Jackson, and TLC are like 50-60 years old now so idk if they'd be popular among teen literacy
🔹weird & evil magical people who live in a mountain
🔹also 3 people get kidnapped and are found trapped in a lake, which is on top of said mountain
🔹somewhere in the US maybe Idaho idk but the landscape is very different
🔹other things

Saph Sparrow

My plot basically
-guy goes on boat
-dragon kills boat
-everyone dies but the actually don't
-goes to a place where everyone who has magic is killed
-guy tries not to die
-they overthrow the government
-they try to kill the sun goddess
-they dies and chill in the afterlife
INCLUDES
-a technologically advanced city tries to nuke them
-the goddess of the light is evil and all the creatures of darkness try to kill her
-screaming fox deer dragons
-main characters include a murderous dragon who seems like your typical villain but is actually the heroine (sapphire)
and a timid and smol flooffy boi (sparrow) HENCE MY USERNAME 'SAPH SARROW'
-a huge dog named cake
-dragon named 'Granite' owns a pasta shop

Deleted user

I don't organize my plots so I'll just write random ass chapters and then I'll get an idea to add to the story and it just ends up a mess of different genres and impossible/unrealistic siutations

Deleted user

What I wrote was pretty vague so prepare yourselves for the confusion of your life.
~ Girl and boy gets superpowers cuz y not?
~ Boy dawns the name "Rouge Coyote".
~ Girl is an unoriginal shit and just goes for "Ocelot".
~ Boy is a complicated mess and hates his keeper, Hicia. (That's the dead kitten thing.)
~ Girl is chill and rlly doesn't care.
~ They fight a crow girl.
~ Girl almost dies every time and boy saves her every time.
~ Boy's best friend becomes suicidal and the boy becomes a conspiracy theorist.
~ Girl kills boys best friend's sister. (Boy doesn't know this.)
~ And guess who the new villain is????
~ Battle's and filler
~Crow girl realizes she's being used and teams up with boy and girl.
~ Fights
~Boy's best friend realizes what he's done and becomes good.

Book two.
This is from the pov of crow girl (Audra) and boy's best friend (James)
~ Dream scene reveling J's parents died in a car crash.
~J rlly want's to kill Ember (Girl from book one) but, controls himself.
~A has weird dreams about a hot guy in a tiger suit killing everything.
~ A, J E, and H all get called to the place where the got their superpowers.
~ HOLY SHIT the hot tiger guy was E's keeper all along and he wants to murder everything.
~ A rlly has no clue of wtf is going on.
~ Hot tiger guy and his cronies steal their powers.
~J finds out that Hot tiger guy didn't steal all of their powers.
~ A has more dreams showing how the magic system works.
~ E has many mental breakdowns and almost burns down the school when her boyfriend wasn't there.
~ Hot tiger guy attacks school and E is forced to protect the people who are bullying her.
~ A and J get stuck in prison and A uses her dream ability to find their way out of the prison.
~ J want's to kiss A and she conveniently wakes up.
~ Battles
~ A yells at J to stop being emo cuz his parents died and it's revealed that her father was the other car in the crash.
~ J hugs A but he rlly want's to kiss her.
~ Battles
~ Another argument and A accendently says she likes him. She ignores the fact she said that and continues to harass him.
~ J is getting rlly annoyed and he shuts her up by kissing her.
~Battles
~ Hot tiger guy is about to kill E but one of his cronies turned on him.
~Hot tiger guy died and the cronie killed herself not to pass on the curse.
~ Everyone gives up their powers.
~ J can't and he goes to the only thing he knows how to do. Suicide.

Book three.
From the pov of two side characters that were never relevant in book's two and one. (Megan, Ember's best friend. And Tom, Audra's twin brother.)
~ T is tired of A being emo and runs into the woods. He finds a thing and touches it.
~ M has seizure like thing and sees multiple worlds.
~ T starts hearing whispers in his head.
~ M learns about all the events of the last two books.
~ T's eye starts turning dark blue. (He only has one eye. It was ripped out when he was attacked by coyotes.) His scars dissapear and he grows a new eye.
~T loses control of his body and it turns out Hot tiger guy is possessing him. Controlled T finds the thing he touched and puts it on gaining all the powers they gave up in the last book.
~ M learns that Hot tiger guy want's to rule all the worlds, the real and the fictional.
~ M tells every one of her findings and that they're in a book. Literally, everyone gets triggered.
~ T kills E and brings an extremely emotional moment between her, her brother and her boyfriend H.
~ H goes on a killing spree.
~ T struggles for control.
~ M is all powerful and wise now and she see's a weapon in the mountains that can defeat Hot tiger guy.
~ Snowy journey.
~ Hot tiger guy beats them to it but, they end up getting it anyway.
~Battles
~They pry the thing off of his neck and break it with the weapon they got. Hot tiger guy leaves T's body and T's scars come back and his eye disappears. He bleeds everywhere.
~ The magic of the broken thing goes back into everyone's body.
~ There's still some remaining magic left and it's turned into J.
~J never died! YAY! And now he looks like a blonde Matt from VLD.
~ A cries in his arms.
~ M says his soul was sucked into the thing before he died completely (If that makes any sense.)
~ H and B (E's brother) are a mess because only J got brought back.
~ J gives his condolences to E's grave resulting in and EXETREMELY EMOTIONAL scene.
~ M sends a message out to the other worlds telling them to look ot for the amulets because they're evil.

~THE END

Deleted user

@"Three Ravens"
Glad you like it. Nonetheless, it's a confusing mess at the moment.

@iEchoX

It was pretty odd… a lot about his father wanting lots of babies (because Voldy's mother got his father to love her with a love potion)… then the mother had a miscarriage and died and the father did a romeo and juliet… not one of my best works… xD

Deleted user

We all have our bad but hilarious works.

I once tried to make a Warriors oc story when i was 11. It didn't work out. I only got two and a half pages down before I got bored of it.

Deleted user

@Saph Sparrow

No matter how complicated at first glance it seems, it's still a better plot than the Emoji Movie.

Also, I didn't know boats can be killed.

Deleted user

All plots are better than the Emoji Movie. I almost went to see it once bc I had no idea what it was.

Deleted user

That is the truest thing i've ever heard. I almost fell asleep during it it was so boring and weird.

Deleted user

Haha I never watched it. My friends wanted to see it but I looked it up and I was like "Oh hell no pick a different one"

Deleted user

My little sister by a year forced my whole family to watch it. Worst two hours of my life. I really didn't want to see it, at all.