As a counterpoint to Yarrow, here's Nate - he's kind of unfinished.
Nate, Nate
sounds like a bit of a twerp
looks nice enough, but i think he should grow a man-bun. he'd look fantastic.seems to dress a lot like Yarrow. i fidget constantly too! tell Nate to get one of those PopIts, but the mini size because you can put them on lanyards. i like that he works in IT. extra point for Nate. i am feeling frustrated because he won't just tell Yarrow how he feels, but i'm literally aro/ace so i'm just going to shut up.
in any event, 9/10 points deducted because MAN NEEDS A HAIRCUT
Dunno why Nate likes his hair as long as it is, but it might be because he does run his hands through it as a nervous habit too. He just thinks it's normal because his mom used to do it herself.
lmao i'm writing him and i'm also frustrated that he won't just tell them. Getting to that scene is going to feel so cathartic.
Here's my MC :D I acknowledge and accept that he's a piece of shit. Go hard at him. (also sorry for any big blocks of text)
cracks knuckles and readies baseball bat
first off, we have the same fashion sense, (and it's absolutely horrendous), minus one. homie needs therapy and he needs it now. i can give him a phone number if he wants. in the music category i saw Fall Out Boy, so plus one. minus half a point for the fact that The Kids Aren't Alright is a song that describes him.
avocado toast? are you kidding me? what's next, a messy bun and a hydroflasksksksksks end me
knives are also my favorite weapon, and with the deer thing, he's got a point.
what with Danica, i think that Garret should get like a cat or something, because cats actually enjoy obsession.
anyways, i don't hate him, 8.5/10, i hope he gets therapy and some character development
Here's my MC :D I acknowledge and accept that he's a piece of shit. Go hard at him. (also sorry for any big blocks of text)
cracks knuckles and readies baseball bat
first off, we have the same fashion sense, (and it's absolutely horrendous), minus one. homie needs therapy and he needs it now. i can give him a phone number if he wants. in the music category i saw Fall Out Boy, so plus one. minus half a point for the fact that The Kids Aren't Alright is a song that describes him.
avocado toast? are you kidding me? what's next, a messy bun and a hydroflasksksksksks end me
knives are also my favorite weapon, and with the deer thing, he's got a point.
what with Danica, i think that Garret should get like a cat or something, because cats actually enjoy obsession.
anyways, i don't hate him, 8.5/10, i hope he gets therapy and some character development
this is better than I though it would be. Considering he lives in a post-apocalypse society, I don't see him getting therapy any time soon, but don't worry! He gets character development and progressively becomes worse :D
Discord is a bit rough around the edges, but deserves love all the same. (Discord or $|.?~¥$)
alrighty!
first of all, i cannot deal with disorder, but that doesn't mean i hate them.
actually, i quite like them so far. 10/10 for fashion sense, and generally very cute looking.
okay, the concept of 'the corruption' is really interesting and cool. nice plot addition, my bro.
extra points for the habit of using pet names. i absolutely adore people who use the word 'darling'. i like that they are very set on freeing everyone. they seem to be the type who is very loyal but doesn't want to admit it
anyways, 10/10 i would marry them, even though they'd probably stab me. keeps it interesting!
Aw thanks! Yeah, they would probably stab you, but only if you asked.
righto, sorry i've been gone.
anyways
MADELINE
um, bestie needs to go to therapy and bad. on second thought, she'd probably stab the poor therapist. they need better hobbies and manipulating people. okay, shit ton of enemies. i think an enemies to lovers plot would be fantastic for them. ooo, born on valentine's day! how poetic.
really. therapy would be insanely beneficial. vibing with the idkhow song, though.
jesus, 7/10 because they'd manipulate me into stupid stuff like wearing a chicken suit.
homie is extremely pale. so far he reminds me of Jack Frost. snake boi! i like snakes too, so that's swag. i also hate jello. what the actual fuck even is jello. he seems quite likeable and cute. i don't like french onion soup, so i don't like that.
i absolutely adore him, 11/10, he should put a red streak in his hair though.
homie is extremely pale. so far he reminds me of Jack Frost. snake boi! i like snakes too, so that's swag. i also hate jello. what the actual fuck even is jello. he seems quite likeable and cute. i don't like french onion soup, so i don't like that.
i absolutely adore him, 11/10, he should put a red streak in his hair though.
He’s supposed to be a bit tanner, but all of the picrews I used to make a pretty accurate reference (cuz I can’t draw for shit) didn’t have just the ✨perfect✨ skin tone and the closest one was way paler than I actually envisioned him
homie is extremely pale. so far he reminds me of Jack Frost. snake boi! i like snakes too, so that's swag. i also hate jello. what the actual fuck even is jello. he seems quite likeable and cute. i don't like french onion soup, so i don't like that.
i absolutely adore him, 11/10, he should put a red streak in his hair though.
He’s supposed to be a bit tanner, but all of the picrews I used to make a pretty accurate reference (cuz I can’t draw for shit) didn’t have just the ✨perfect✨ skin tone and the closest one was way paler than I actually envisioned him
Think Mammon from Obey Me, but slightly tanner, that’s the closest reference I can think of
sorry this took so long oh my god
he cute <3 sorry about his trauma lmao same tbh
surprised that he is outgoing but go off ig
pretty swag that he shapeshifts but points off for shifting into a golden retriever instead of a dragon or a whale
uuuuuuuh 9/10 he probably stinks and isn't a dragon
Meet moorie deu'gro
Moorie uses she/her pronouns and is a cis female
Moorie is the wife to a dictator (name undecided) and loves to boss people about.
Moorie loves the colour green and you will never see her in any other colour (unless forced by her husband) she wears long green dresses that will usually be decorated in frills and expensive jewelry along with a straw sunhat no matter the weather.
She is strict and cruel towards anyone "lower" than her yet acts like an angel around her son Lawrence jean deu'gro and husband. Moorie loves sowing and is actually quite good despite her stubborn nature and has 'lovingly' tailored several (questionable) outfits for her rebel son.
Moorie has lots of secrets about her past which is the only thing her people like about her, they like to make up silly stories in spite of her because no matter how powerful she is the people cannot be harmed.
When moorie was little a magic weilder put a curse on her so that whenever she got angry her body would be drained of nutrients to the point of her becoming unconscious.
Fun fact: moorie hates her name because when she was born there was a very special period of time called the moorie glen star, which was a meteor shower that filled the sky (moorie then became a very common name)
Be as harsh as you want I despise moorie with all my guts
back again bois
from the tags, for some reason, i am getting the vibes that he is gay
why this bitch so tall?
he seems like a raccoon? if you get my drift??? i don't know. i think he'd look through trash
'what motivates him' MOTH
eye man
i sort of want to slap him but in a nice way
i think he bites people that he likes also
11/10, precious raccoon man
slap that bitch
already points deducted for uninteresting fashion. bestie. go to abercrombie and fitch or hot topic or something by jesus
anyways
she needs therapy bad. maybe a stint in the hospital
i'm pretty sure she married the dictator of her own accord and plans to murder him to steal his position of power.
in conclusion, fuck off moorie, 1/10
thank you for your time
hnn have a serial killer asshole man: Tomas Selvar
Tomas
okay, already getting wack vibes from you
get a better tan you weirdo
seems to act like a dog. like literally. i bet he likes behind-the-ear scratches.
every character i review needs therapy omg
bro assisted suicide
uh, 9/10, therapy would be nice
hnn have a serial killer asshole man: Tomas Selvar
Tomas
okay, already getting wack vibes from you
get a better tan you weirdo
seems to act like a dog. like literally. i bet he likes behind-the-ear scratches.
every character i review needs therapy omg
bro assisted suicide
uh, 9/10, therapy would be nice
Sksjhxbxhxggsvsggv he needs some major therapy, yes
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Name: Eligor (Or just Eli) Age: 17 Gender/pronouns: He/Him they/them Sexuality: Straight Looks: Cloudy grey eyes with a somewhat long face. His body would be described as perfect when he takes care of it, but generally does not. Outfit: ……Let's just say Eli doesn't give a crap about his outward appearance. He will dress how he wants and if you have a problem, then it sucks to be you. he has fabulous blonde hair (When it's clean) styled in a quiff, and they just throws together whatever is in his wardrobe, which isn't much, and then that's that. Personality: He's a narcissistic jerk who always knows just the thing to say to creep everyone out or push anyone's buttons. They are fabulous and they know it. He can also be a bit of a hothead Hobbies/skills: Violin Other: Apparently his name is a game character's name but just so you know I didn't steal it xD
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