7.6/10
here's Ali if you wanna
@alex-is-sad
??????/10
I didn't really have much to work with so- have this instead.
I stare at my computer in silence as Lee- the blank bastard that they are- stare at me from their timeout corner. Their eyes wide with curiosity.
They have made no opportunities to speak with me- that or they do not understand english- and It lets me rest easy knowing that I don't have to be this unwanted guests entertainment.
However, it nerves me to the max when they try and fiddle with my picture frames on the wall. Its as if they are just asking for the glass to shatter into their eyes…which wouldn't be a bad thing…for me.
I shake my head in disappointment and turn back to my screen. It's taken a lot of effort for me to even think about pulling up their profile, but I can't just let it sit undone any longer.
It must be finished.
Sweat drips down my forehead as I click on the link. The circle of death swirls in my pupils as I await my fate.
Lee stares at nothing.
Suddenly, the circle of death stops and I am greeted with a page of…of…well, nothing.
My face goes slack and I relax back into my chair.
" Nothing..huh?" I turn around and make direct eye contact with Lee. " Get out."
@alex-is-sad
??????/10
I didn't really have much to work with so- have this instead.
I stare at my computer in silence as Lee- the blank bastard that they are- stare at me from their timeout corner. Their eyes wide with curiosity.
They have made no opportunities to speak with me- that or they do not understand english- and It lets me rest easy knowing that I don't have to be this unwanted guests entertainment.
However, it nerves me to the max when they try and fiddle with my picture frames on the wall. Its as if they are just asking for the glass to shatter into their eyes…which wouldn't be a bad thing…for me.I shake my head in disappointment and turn back to my screen. It's taken a lot of effort for me to even think about pulling up their profile, but I can't just let it sit undone any longer.
It must be finished.Sweat drips down my forehead as I click on the link. The circle of death swirls in my pupils as I await my fate.
Lee stares at nothing.
Suddenly, the circle of death stops and I am greeted with a page of…of…well, nothing.
My face goes slack and I relax back into my chair.
" Nothing..huh?" I turn around and make direct eye contact with Lee. " Get out."
i made him a long time ago so i probably didnt put much info and I havent checked up on him in a while
8.3/10
is her spirit animal a bee or somethin?
Ah a virgo i see?…Not a very good one though.
I would humble her to the MAX if I met her. Be like " oh, you're the super cool person thats super strong and stuff, right? Can you please give my number to your brother?". Just to mess with her.
If she lies to me, I'll kill her. If she roasts me, I'll kill her.
She should of drowned.
SHE SHOULD HAVE DROWNED
God, that's amazing.
PS: If you asked her to give your number to one of her brother she wouldn't anyways lol
@Nathan U.
hmmm…6.5/10
I would chain him up to a light post and leave him there. Needs to get a life.
woof woof, bark bark, awoo awoo, bark snarl
I like the back story
Judy would kick his ass though
pretty good character overall. Not much to say otherwise
@Laffy-Taffy
personality wise she is a 4/10
overall as a character he is a 9.1/10
I would beat her ass so hard if she tried me- fuck her family, I am boss.
I'll give her a condition if she tests me.
why does her father have a hatred for british people? cringe.
I would eat her.
I like the back story.
@casualassasin
7.2/10
Twat.
I picture her as a librarian. The one that does nothing but read magazines.
…I'd put her in a wall….with my fist, if you know what I mean ;)
oh my god, she is a librarian, of course, I am a genius
does she just guzzle bottles of siracha sauce?
Whats a librarian doing with a throwing kninfe? Wouldn't her weapon be knowledge? or something?
nice.
I would chain him up to a light post and leave him there. Needs to get a life.
:0
Well in our defense he does get recruited into a super team and undergo character development throughout the story
woof woof, bark bark, awoo awoo, bark snarl
owo uwu
I like the back story
Thx, I put blood, sweat, and my vengefulness towards the abusive father of my suicidal friend into it :3
Judy would kick his ass though
[gasp]
We'll see about that when I get further into writing the story =-=
Thx for the review tho 👍
why does her father have a hatred for british people? cringe.
reasons that are explained in the story
I would beat her ass so hard if she tried me- fuck her family, I am boss.
lmao, i doubt that
I would eat her.
0.0
I like the back story.
Why thank you. And thank you in general.
hmmm I wanna see ur opinion on him
https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/971519#!
(Is it okay to post another character?)
( Yeah, you're gucci : ) )
(Nice :D)
Please rate my boi Theo :)
@Hey_Its_Snowy_And_Im_Generally_Confused
8.6/10
Idk why, but when I was reading the overall page my eyes started watering. So Ben gets a point docked for emotional trauma. He should not be a psychologist if thats hwo it gonna be every time i read his profile.
But anyway, I hate people in suits too. Me and Ben could be bros.
I would deprive him of sprite and always fill his glass with sierra mist just to screw with him. I woke up choosing chaos.
Dogs aren't high maintenance. Ben is just weak. Weak and tasteless…but cats aren't that bad.
I'd help him fist fight trump, too.
I'd kill Ben and anyone else for Marshmellow.
Pretty good guy overall :)
@tired-sock
I've seen Theo in a couple of threads, but I haven't really had the official chance to properly examine him so, this should be fun :)
hmm, 9.8/10
He's a tall guy- what. For some reason I was imagining him as short.
I don't know if that's a compliment for not but- eh.
I would throw him off the ship side just to see if he could float….and then I wouldn't let him back on. If he wants freedom- hes' gonna have to swim for it.
Theo likes dogs? Muwah. Finally, a man of taste and pure strength.
His design is pretty cool. He kinda has an almost E-boy vibe going on.
Theo looks like he would either be a theater kid or an English nut if he were in now times.
@tired-sock
I've seen Theo in a couple of threads, but I haven't really had the official chance to properly examine him so, this should be fun :)
hmm, 9.8/10
He's a tall guy- what. For some reason I was imagining him as short.
I don't know if that's a compliment for not but- eh.
I would throw him off the ship side just to see if he could float….and then I wouldn't let him back on. If he wants freedom- hes' gonna have to swim for it.
Theo likes dogs? Muwah. Finally, a man of taste and pure strength.
His design is pretty cool. He kinda has an almost E-boy vibe going on.
Theo looks like he would either be a theater kid or an English nut if he were in now times.
Thank u for rating him and for such a high rating ^-^
I think Pira would laugh if you did that but let him back on eventually.
If you have time, could you do my boi, Berthold?
@Hey_Its_Snowy_And_Im_Generally_Confused
8.6/10
Idk why, but when I was reading the overall page my eyes started watering. So Ben gets a point docked for emotional trauma. He should not be a psychologist if thats hwo it gonna be every time i read his profile.
But anyway, I hate people in suits too. Me and Ben could be bros.
I would deprive him of sprite and always fill his glass with sierra mist just to screw with him. I woke up choosing chaos.
Dogs aren't high maintenance. Ben is just weak. Weak and tasteless…but cats aren't that bad.
I'd help him fist fight trump, too.
I'd kill Ben and anyone else for Marshmellow.Pretty good guy overall :)
LMAOO I love you calling him weak ghfhfkdl
and marshmallow deserves the world, i’m glad you know this :)
Perhaps in another life he’d have a dog, but for now he’s gonna stick with cat
overall I’m pleased with an 8.6/10 and you should def be buddies with Ben and judge people who wear suits together
okay this guy is a lot more complicated so let’s see what you think >:)
https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/1024291#!
Invalid Character Could you possible rate Silver for me?
Could you look over Yllmadaya? Yllmadaya Aalsyur
@Stone_King_2931
7.3/10
Pretty good character, but kingdom/lord inspired stuff bores me so me and him would probably not get along.
His flaws do interest me though. I love me a true bitch character who likes to antagonize the main character ( thats' just how i see his role though.)
I am eating a bagel rn, but after reading his prejudices I think I'm craving a taste for the rich. I bet his skin tastes like the after taste of pickles after you take them off a sandwich
mm mmm mm he is handsome though
Loving the self confidence even though I want to punch him in the face
I'd give him the limpest hand shake of his life- I'd die mid hand shake just to freak him out.
" Goosey thinks Berthold should watch his back when Berthold walks home at night."
But, anyway, he's cool :)