Hi! Could you take a look at my Michelle for me? I'm especially concerned about the Conditions part; I have some kind of heavy stuff there and I want to make sure I don't mess something up. I'd really appreciate it, your critiques are always so thorough!
Hi! I'm not sure if you're still doing these, but if so and you have time, I'd love it if I could get some feedback on Val. I'm working on developing her character and I'm not sure if I have a full handle on her yet. No worries if you're too busy! Valerie Graves-Okada
Idk if you're still doing these, but if you aren't too busy could you critique Markus for me?
Here's his link owo Major Markus Brown
Thank you for making this forum btw 😊