forum --i'd love to critique some characters! bring me your unfinished lads--

Started March 31, 2020 by @darling-velocipede group

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Hello there I know I’m late but if you are still doing these could you criticize this character Ales Bastion or Sebastian Altimore

Could do these few?

@darling-velocipede Thanks for the critique, i appreciate it! Gabriel has been my struggle for a while now, trying to come up with the road between point A to B. I have him envisioned in my head in a way its hard to humanize but I see what you mean as far as why he would need it. Thanks again!

I usually have her brother critiqued so there may e a few empty spaces. If you have questions about her they might be answered with him if you find its not inconvenient to look. You are amazing for offering up your time and i thank you so much! (btw her name is Aloisia (Ah-loy-see-uh) and her bro is addox (add-ducks) Addox (Add-ucks) (for if u wanna give him a looksie)

yo nerds! just so y'all know, i'm still watching this thread but have been pretty busy with school stuff recently. i'll still critique your darlings as soon as i have a chance, but be warned it might be a bit.

I would love for you to critique my evil boy please.

This is my urban fantasy OC Jim Invalid Character, I don't have any specific things I want to work on with him, but I'd love to flesh him out more in his personality and early life.

This one is for a new story I'm writing. The character is going insane and believes she's in a post-apocalyptic world that was actually all in her head. https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/942220#

yo nerds! just so y'all know, i'm still watching this thread but have been pretty busy with school stuff recently. i'll still critique your darlings as soon as i have a chance, but be warned it might be a bit.

take your time! Its amazing that you've offered to do something like this so there's no rush!

Hey, your character isn't public (you need to make it public)

My character is now public!

Hey, your character isn't public (you need to make it public

It is now public!!!!

Hi! I know you're super busy, so if you never get to this guy, that's 100% okay! But just thought I'd leave him here, since I just beefed up his profile. But again, 0 stress, take care of yourself and your commitments first <3

If you have the time, I'd appreciate it if you could critique my main :) Garret De La Cruz

시 기생 (Shi Kisang) um im not sure how this forum works but here.

could you please critique my girl nabila??