@Elder-God-Whisper work
… fair enough, and that explains why my poems do not turn out that way….
… fair enough, and that explains why my poems do not turn out that way….
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Your smile
A glow unrivaled
against pure, unblemished skin.
Freckles like flickers.
Hair like the night sky.
A beauty I want to hold onto.
The beauty you hold onto.
Smiling together,
I just want to be with you forever.
But I can only hold your hand for so long
before my forever is gone.
And you sit around
for another 10 billion years.
Then die just to live on.
This fate is so, so painful–
falling in love with you.
Falling in love with a star.
tw// self harm
There’s a bitter-sweet taste on my tongue,
A hellfire burning with rage in my throat,
My emotions are desert-dry wrung,
I’m drowning rather than staying afloat,
And my mind’s dark as charcoal,
Too far out of the realm of my control.
((hi! just wanted to let y'all know since you guys are my poetry gang on notebook, i'm getting a poem published in a pretty prominent online lit magazine! super pumped and just wanted to say thank u for your constant feedback and support :D))
(OOHHHHHHH THAT’S SO AWESOME CONGRATS!!!!)
(thanks darling!!)
(CONGRATS!!, THAT’S SO EXCITING!!!!)
(omg hell yeah, that's amazing!! good job!!!<333)
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(!!! again thank u for all of your kindness)
tw: metaphorical allusion to suicide + depression
You are stuck in an elevator.
All of the buttons are pushed but the door never opens;
You just jolt up and up. How long have you been in this elevator for?
Long enough to have memorized the wood grain, long enough to count the blandly
Geometric shapes in the carpet by sevens: there are nine. (You count again and again).
You used to go to college, or a plastic replica of one.
A teacher once told you, an art teacher you assume, that God was in art. The teacher was fired.
Is there God in these shapes? Or just angles? A bisector of an angel?
How long have you been in this elevator for?
Long enough to have memorized the pastel, pleasant, plinking, promiseless music that pipes
Out from the fist sized speaker. Long enough to count the notes by sevens: there are nine.
…
……
(You count again and again).
The Music Makes A Noose and You Use It Like A Tire Swing
it was fun to write something more experimental n creepy!
Oooh nice
Whoa… that is really, really accurate to how it feels, holy shit.
Whoa… that is really, really accurate to how it feels, holy shit.
ah sick i'm glad to hear it! writing stuff about mental stuff is always a gamble when experiences vary so much.
two thumbs up Well you nailed it for me!
Ooooooohhhhhhh I love this. I’ve definitely felt something akin to this before
If The Lights went out:
If the lights
Suddenly switched off
Would you be afraid.
Would you be so scared
That you’d wrap yourself in your blankets
And lay on your bed
Cowering under your blankets
Hoping the darkness would go away
Or suddenly end.
Would you cry out for help
Hoping someone would come, and turn the lights back on.
Would you wait until your eyes
adjusted to the dark.
Until you adjusted to the dark
So much that the dark wasn’t so bad?
Until you were so used to the dark
You didn’t care anymore?
Or would you immediately pull your blankets back, and get out of your bed.
Even though you cannot see?
You’d trip over your stuff, and bump into your dresser
Knowing that
Would you stop.
Or keep going knowing you could trip, and fall.
Would you continue on.
Until you find your light switch.
Or would you give in
Fearing what could or could not happen?
And what if when you got there
Scratched and bruised
The light switch just wouldn’t turn on?
Would you stand there trying to turn the light on
over and over.
Or would you walk on
Tripping and bumping into things
Until you found a flashlight.
Then would you use it until you could figure out how to turn the rest of the lights on.
Would you decide that what you have
Is not enough, and finally give in.
Or would you use it anyway?
Even though the flashlight is nothing compared to what you had
Before, it at least is light.
So grip your flashlight tight
Do not let go,
And remember
Darkness only lasts however long it takes us to find the light.
-Me
Oh that was long sorry
NO DUDE THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL
I feel like I want to take that beginning, and then take it in another direction….
But yes, that was very cool to read!
@Addie love the poem!! can i steal the first line and write my own with that?
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