forum Poetry

Started March 18, 2019 by @Knight-Shives group

tune

Wonderful work as always Whisper. I will forever admire people who can make their poems rhyme haha. I love it all, but I think my favorite bit is the last two stanzas

Let’s hope you’re real-estate agent’s sanity is intact after you ask them these questions

I’m already insane, and reading that just added to it. Jeezus kris.

:DDD these are the responses i want babeyyyy thanks guys <3

yes whisper h o w. h o w r h y m e. and have meaning?? incredible

I uh…. well, it depends on the given situation. If I being ENTIRELY freakin’ honest, in this poem, searching up rhymes for certain words on the web was key, and I can easily pick out stuff and smoothly incorporate it. Most times, I am a lazy biatch though, and pull stuff off the top of my head because I have an extensive vocabulary that I don’t always get to use.

👌👌👌

I think my favorite bit is the last two stanzas

Honestly, same. I also loved using the word quintessence. But I also love writing about smoke/ash rising or falling from lips. It’s a recent thing I’ve taken to.

It’s so beautiful I can’t-

<3 <3

wolf whistles

:))) thanks y'all <3

longing shortform or angry shortform choose your adventure

Love the Thelma-and-Louise-ass-ending part. Lol

Hahaha yes angry shortform all the way lol

my blatantly inspired by @Relsey piece

Aww, I love it. I'm glad you felt inspired

anthology anxiety

There is a callous on my left hand
It says
“This person is a writer”
It lies.
I am not.
I’m a mess;
A recorder of thoughts,
Using words to cope
With the melancholy thoughts
That invade my brainspace
Until they spill over
And case a tsunami’s worth of damage.
i just want them to stop…
My callous lies;
I am not a writer.

_{i read this at the open mic last night! it's definitely not my best work but uh- i like it}

OOOOOH, I LOVE IT!!!

YES ITS BEAUTIFUL

don't mind me
i'm just sweating through my eyes-

Kek. But, there is seriously a lot of good poetry here, I was so happy to find this forum. I didn't read all 15 pages, you read all 15 pages

don't mind me
i'm just sweating through my eyes-

Oh dear….

hi so i don't really come on notebook much atm, but if you miss seeing my poetry ig you could dm me for my discord tag? anyway hope y'all are having a lovely time on this planet

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