Can I just say that I love your initial physical description of Mig? The juxtaposition of how he looks now compared to what Yana remembers, the way her assessment of him ("You look well") flows from what she's noticed most. Your characters feel alive.

I have to add that this simile is so visceral it has me cringing with Yana.

Everything was odd, and the past few days were spread across her memories like sticky, rancid slime.

(I came online to check something, fondly remembered our discussions, wondered if you were still active and voilà, I care what happens to Mig and Yana already. <3)

@Riorlyne 9 months ago