Jeniffer is a former thief but now clean. A banished demon gets in control of her and manipulates her into accepting it. It allows her to get hold of the demons power which is really strong and can kill a person in an instant. The power will be exchanged with the victims body. The demon takes her shape, and looks like her but just faceless. It slowly gets covered in blood as more victims succumb to it. She suffers in pain and turns mental slowly. At first she likes it, as she has the ultimate power and the upper hand. But it gets worse. Only one person had survived being in control of the demon, but he was in a mental asylum. She works in a museum and the demon haunts her everytime. I she thinks it's hallucination and everytime she said it to anyone, they'd say that she's gone mad but they're it does actually happen and they just can't feel it. Slowly she realises that she messed up and has to get rid of the demon as she [realises that the demon gets in control of her and forces her extract the blood of her victims.(Optional)] At the end she does get rid of it, even though suffering from severe ptsd.
hm very interesting, I have a character similar to this actually. Does this take place in a modern setting and/or is this more based on horror or fantasy?
Jeniffer is a former thief but now clean. A banished demon gets in control of her and manipulates her into accepting it. It allows her to get hold of the demons power which is really strong and can kill a person in an instant. The power will be exchanged with the victims body. The demon takes her shape, and looks like her but just faceless. It slowly gets covered in blood as more victims succumb to it. She suffers in pain and turns mental slowly. At first she likes it, as she has the ultimate power and the upper hand. But it gets worse. Only one person had survived being in control of the demon, but he was in a mental asylum. She works in a museum and the demon haunts her everytime. I she thinks it's hallucination and everytime she said it to anyone, they'd say that she's gone mad but they're it does actually happen and they just can't feel it. Slowly she realises that she messed up and has to get rid of the demon as she [realises that the demon gets in control of her and forces her extract the blood of her victims.(Optional)] At the end she does get rid of it, even though suffering from severe ptsd.
This character concept sounds awesome! Has a lot of potential. Would be a real joy to read!
May be a little biased, since I too have a protagonist who was possessed by an evil doppelgänger of themselves..
Yeah, idk. Probably a coincidence.
Up until the very last sentence, you crafted an interesting story but passive character. Depending on what this character's role is to be in your story, you may want to look at how Jennifer can be more active in her role. Do tragic things befall her leaving her to just respond and move on? Or does she attack? Carve a new path for herself? Is she responsible for some of the tragedy you have written here? All good things you can consider when making a primary character. Still, I think this is very creative and dark with many avenues to explore for your characters and plot.
