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Timeline of the plot

Each item is a scene

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Day #1

#1 Louise leaves the party

Description

Louise leaves a party after being subjected to repeated insults. Myron follows, trying to comfort her.


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Day #2

#2 Facing the council

Description

Louise meets with the council and finds out she has to marry Nicholas


Notes

-Wedding is *scheduled* but won't happen for day 16
-Nicholas arrives on day 4

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Day #2

#3 H2H with Bea

Description

Louise sits down to tell Beatrix, feels nothing and then everything


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Day #2

#4 Telling Myron

Description

Louise rides with and then tells Myron


Notes

-Establish that Louise and Myron are only allowed to be physically close in specific circumstances
-Myron is a pro

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Day #2

#5 Louise & Margaret

Description

Louise discovers the truth about her father's will


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Day #2

#6 Darius, Myron, & Giles

Description

Darius makes threats and Louise talks it over with the boys


Notes

-Establish that the will has been destroyed
-Darius does not trust Louise
-Doubt about whether or not Margaret is ill from natural causes

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Day #3

#7 The Wisdom of Giles

Description

Giles, Louise, Myron, and eventually, Bea, continue to talk about marriage


Notes

- Giles says things that make everyone uncomfortable, it's clear that their marriage is iffy

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Day #3

#8 The Good Old Days

Description

Louise goes crazy and tries to practice spar with Aspen and 3 o clock in the morning. She's terrified.


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Day #6

#9 The arrival of Nicholas

Description

Louise goes to greet her new fiancée, and is starting to become resigned to getting married


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Day #6

#10 Hey, I just met you, and this is crazy...

Description

Louise gets Nicholas up to speed, and to everyone's surprise, he is concerned


Notes

- Nicholas is concerned but promises nothing yet

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Day #6

#11 Confrontations

Description

Louise tries to see her mother and is stopped by Darius


Notes

- The guards that stop her are lowly ones that have been elevated by Darius to buy their loyalty

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Day #6

#12 A modest proposal

Description

Nicholas officially proposes


Notes

Louise is dead inside. Yes, she gets to marry a seemingly nice man, but her heart's not in it at all.

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Day #7

#13 Progress Report

Description

Her uncles + the duke of Fairfox force Louise to have dinner with them, everyone is trying to sus out information


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Day #7

#14 Alterations

Description

Louise is having her wedding gown altered with Bea supervising


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Day #8

#15 It's quiet uptown

Description

Louise wakes up to find that her mother died during the night and Darius has seized control


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Day #8

#16 Confusion

Description

All of the various characters flit in and out of Louise's room with various snippets of news and worries


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Day #9

#17 The Furious Five

Description

The five meet up and toss around the idea of Louise and Nicholas making a bid for the throne


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Day #9

#18 You & I

Description

Nicholas and Louise discuss in private, Nicholas finally agrees to stay a little longer. Just let him handle it.


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Day #11

#19 Safe for now

Description

Nicholas worked out a deal with Darius: the five can stay if Nic provides troops...and the wedding is now back on


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Day #12

#20 Funeral

Description

Louise has a secret funeral at sunrise for her mother


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Day #13

#21 Rebellion

Description

Louise meets with John Cheval and Thorne Whytlock to talk rebellion


Notes

-Drop in that The Five know she's meeting with them

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Day #13

#22 Staffing

Description

Louise overhears Giles and Beatrix in an argument about what to do with the staff turnover, Giles storms out and the two girls have tea


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Day #14

#23 Dinner date

Description

Nic and Lou have dinner, she wants to talk rebellion, he wants to talk wedding plans


Notes

-No date for wedding yet
-Nic is getting really tight with Darius

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Day #15

#24 Shut Out

Description

Louise tries to attend a council meeting with Nicholas but is forbidden. He publicly chastises her and apologizes for her behavior, Giles backs him up.


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Day #15

#25 Discrepancies

Description

Yet another war meeting of the 5 that evening, but what Nicholas tells them is not what Peter told Myron. M & N butt heads a little.


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Day #16

#26 An Accident

Description

Peter is found dead under mysterious and suspicious circumstances, Darius tries to sweep things under the rug


Notes

-Darius is suspicious, but doesn't know everything
-Coronation will be on DAY 22

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Day #18

#27 Minor Problems

Description

After the mysterious death of Peter, everyone in Louise's small circle of influence is refusing to help her


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Day #18

#28 Fathers & Sons

Description

Louise summons William Mercer (Giles's dad) and John Lars (Myron's dad) to see if the merchant class would support her and Nicholas


Notes

She does this without the knowledge of Myron or Giles

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Day #18

#29 Nick at Nite

Description

Dinner with Nick. He proposes staying on at the palace as Darius's right-hand-man for the long con. Louise isn't a huge fan.


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Day #19

#30 Family

Description

Giles and Myron confront her about her meeting with their fathers. Myron is glad but worried, Giles yells at her for jeopardizing the reputation of his family


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Day #19

#31 The con isn't on

Description

The Five meet to discuss coronation day takeover, Nic proposes the long con but is dismissed


Notes

-About 1,000 troops from Seneca arrive "to help"
-First time Louise speaks against Nic in his presence

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Day #19

#32 Audacity

Description

Nic gets testy with Lou for disagreeing with him, but then turns on a dime to being sweet again


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Day #20

#33 Forced, beheaded, died

Description

Public execution of John and William for treachery against the crown


Notes

- Mostly wordless scene
- Louise gets on her knees to beg for their lives but it doesn't work
- Giles is enraged, doesn't think Lou did enough, goes to drink and yells at Bea
- Myron is a wreck, but doesn't blame Lou
- Bea doesn't know what to do

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Day #20

#34 Lost

Description

Myron breaks down in front of Louise, tells her they have to kill Darius


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Day #20

#35 Confrontation

Description

Lou confronts Nic, he swears he had nothing to do with it, kisses her on the cheek


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Day #21

#36 Premonitions

Description

Giles reappears and screams at Louise, claiming that they should've listened to Nicholas and blaming her


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Day #22

#37 Long live the king

Description

Nic slaughters Darius and his family at the coronation, he is coronated instead, everyone flees the church


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Day #22

#38 Wait & see

Description

The Five jam themselves into a carriage, everyone decides they'll prep to run, wait and see tho


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Day #23

#39 Before the king

Description

Lou is summoned before Nic, he's so excited, Lou plays it off well


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Day #23

#40 Summons

Description

While discussing what to do next, Giles and Myron are summoned for an audience with Nicholas, the girls are terrified


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Day #23

#41 Lured In

Description

Giles & Myron return. Giles reports that he's being asked into Nicholas' inner circle, Louise reluctantly agrees, Bea tries to stop him and is shut down.


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Day #24

#42 Bratfest at Tiffany's

Description

Nic informs her that he won't crown her till they're married, explodes with rage when she talks back


Notes

-Nic breaks some objects, and gets too close to Lou, but doesn't hit...yet
-WEDDING: Day 44
-CORONATION: Day 45

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Day #25

#43 forbidden

Description

Nic refuses to allow Lou to attend the funeral of the Hallidayes, calls her a traitor to the crown, and shoves her up against a wall


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Day #25

#44 You don't even, I don't even know

Description

The Four meet again to try and plan something to take down Nic, but the noose is tightening. Giles does not seem to want to help and is now proposing the long con, tensions with Bea


Notes

-Hopelessness
-Lou hides that Nic put his hands on her because she's embarrassed

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Day #26

#45 Before the procession passes by

Description

Lou escapes the castle to view the funeral, Myron and Giles have to drag her back inside


Notes

-Lou's uncles don't acknowledge her, but her aunts do
-First time Louise has demonstrated to the public that she's separate from Nic

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Day #26

#46 Help is on the way

Description

Lou is invited to a ladies gathering with Bea, the noble wives there are hinting at the possibility of support. Bea reveals that Giles hasn't been sleeping in their apartment and doesn't know where she is


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Day #28

#47 Look what you made me do

Description

Nic confronts Lou about the funeral procession, Lou tries to walk out, Myron intervenes, and is beaten into unconsciousness by Giles and a few others


Notes

-Nic hits her in the face, signaling he no longer cares about appearances
-First time Myron calls her "Louise"
-Nic insinuates that he's going to be a prisoner

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Day #28

#48 Hallway Scene

Description

Lou runs and finds Bea and they find Giles carrying Myron's body in the hallway. Giles & Bea have a huge fight that ends in Bea and Louise being ripped apart and sent back to their rooms.


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Day #29

#49 The Morning After

Description

Louise wakes up to find Giles standing outside of her door. He is her guard now and the others have been sent away "for their safety"


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Day #29

#50 Power & control

Description

Lou confronts Nic, the 2 are now collateral, and if she makes a false step, they'll be dead


Notes

Lou truly believes that there's no one to help her, Nicholas says a few things that lead her to believe that Myron and Bea might just be under the castle, not far away

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Day #30

#51 Live in consort

Description

At the first feast since the murder of Darius, Lou realizes that the public's on her side, Aunt Adelaide invites her over for tea


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Day #31

#52 Tea time

Description

Adelaide and Alexander invite Lou over for tea, they hint at possible rebellion, rumors are discussed


Notes

-Lou still doesn't trust her relatives

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Day #31

#53 A Fair Fox

Description

Louise is summoned to the house of the Duke & Duchess of Fairfox for dinner, they pledge their support and reveal that they do love Bea after all


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Day #32

#54 Spy

Description

Louise catches Giles trying to read the letters on her desk. They wrestle, she rips them up, and he tries to get her to spill the contents


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Day #32

#55 Struck

Description

Giles leaves and returns with Nicholas. He throws her around, orders Giles to remove all writing utensils, then turns sweet by presenting her a gift of a necklace.


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Day #33

#56 Do you hear the people sing?

Description

Riots outside the palace after Nic raises taxes, Lou escapes Giles to watch from the wall, only to be dragged back


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Day #33

#57 Spilling

Description

Lou has a garden party of ladies, who are pledging their husbands' support, Lou is invited to yet another tea party at her Aunt Adelaide's


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Day #33

#58 Announcements

Description

Nic and Lou have dinner, which goes much better for both. Nicholas has decided to marry her first, followed immediately by a coronation.


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Day #35

#59 Run

Description

Lou considers the possibility of fleeing the country, when she receives a letter from her Aunt Matilda, inviting her to come over.


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Day #36

#60 Who run the world?

Description

Lou's aunts are willing to support a bid for her takeover, and so are most of the nobles


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Day #36

#Stolen kisses

Description

Nic kisses Lou without her consent


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Day #37

#62 This is how we do it

Description

Tea with the aunts, Lou establishes plan to take down Nic


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Day #38

#63 Pretty deadly

Description

Louise ruminates on the possibility of death while turning her hairpins into weapons


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Day #38

#64 Hideaway

Description

Louise has to fend off a sober Nicholas when she goes to bed that night


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Day #45

#65 Hair-raising

Description

Nic brushes Lou's hair before the wedding, threatens her


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Day #45

#66 Wedding blues

Description

The wedding ceremony


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Day #45

#67 Sugar, we're going down swinging

Description

Louise takes Nic down and out once and for all, forces the surrender of the guards


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Day #50

#68 Hello

Description

Louise and Aspen are reunited


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Day #50

#69 Talk to me, baby

Description

Louise and Aspen chat with Nic, who is locked up


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Day #51

#70 I did it my way

Description

Nic is spared, and departs with his troops


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Day #52

#71 Duke

Description

Lou gives Aspen the Duchy of Hallidaye


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Day #53

#72 This is how it's gonna be

Description

Lou has her first council meeting with Aspen as her secretary


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Day #54

#73 Yours

Description

Lou and Aspen have a small funeral for his dad


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Day #55

#74 Mine

Description

Aspen found Louise's tiara and sword, they sword fight


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Day #56

#75 Ours

Description

Louise and Aspen dance at a ball, everything is right with the world