As the day turns into night, the villagers run into their homes and fall asleep. But the villagers didn't know their food was disappearing at night and when they awoke they never to see their crops gone. They searched high and low for their crops but they knew it was gone. The villagers decided to have a watch team , the villagers team walked towards the forest and they never returned and the night became day and the villagers that have slept, did not expect to have their brothers and sisters to disappear.
I burst in and kill Dk before the stupid furry has time to react. Thanks bye
(Facepalm my character is not even there)
No I'm killing you
For legal reasons, she means in Minecraft.
No I'm killing you
For legal reasons, she means in Minecraft.
Yes
Definitely Minecraft. Totally.
I & me extremly rippd musles wil sho up too you’re house & kill u painfuly wiff my phantom furry deathifyer 420
I’m tracki g u down rite now
I pikk upp axxx and stabbie stabbiee u ded noa
oh nu im soooooo scarred uff u!!!1111!!!!
I was just trying to write down ideas for my new book on google docs
Which explains why you were using a public thread, originally entitled "Roleplay"
That would be why I said originally
I hoped to do a rp then I changed my mind and decided to do the story I am working on. If you want the link to it I can send it to you right now
That would be why I said originally
What do you think so far of the story?
Eris has an infinite amount of better things to do than critique some newbie's story…. -_-
Why don't you put it on a thread in the Sharing & Critiques forum for someone who cares?
I’m reading it, and I highly suggest no one else explore it with me
can you just explain these to me?
“Nighthunt didn’t know how to control her powers until she was 11 years old. Her mother taught a lot of Wolf Magic, Dark Wolf Magic, even …Suddenly, fully realizing who Betty was and what Betty was, Nighthunt took out her Rainbow Hyperblade, which was what she called her special sword, and slashed right through Betty’s middle so fast that not even Betty expected such a quick and sudden move.”
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Well, because I rather see your reactions when you read the story
That was my friends writing , I wrote chapter 15-17
If it’s not your story/writing, it’s not your place to ask for critiques on it, then.
I just read the words “Hyperdeath soul” and i no longer want to read any more
… I have no words for that.
It sounds like… a children's action cartoon.
so great news, i kept reading and stumbled across… clears throat
”Nighthunt stifled a near maniacal smile. She raised her right hand, and suddenly, eleven Gasterblasters appeared by her. She put out her left arm (to her left), opened her hand, and her Rainbow Hyperblade appeared. She closed her hand, grabbing the handle.
“Is that all you’ve got?” said Undyne, smiling as she summoned a whole army of spears.
“Nope!” said Nighthunt. Her form was changing into where her hair, eyes and tail were no longer brown, but now gleaming silver. Her shirt and skirt were now black. Her eyes were smoothly changing colors in a rainbow. Looking at her now was almost psychedelic.
She spoke softly, “Kumu, show yourself.”
Akumu turned into what his original form is. As he floated by Nighthunt’s side, he smiled at Undyne kindly and winked.”
not even my God man OC is this powerful
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