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@Althalosian-is-the-father book

He raced away frantically, his heart pounding in his chest, feeling as if it was going to explode. In his hand he held a notebook. It looked unassuming. It was blue, smaller than most. And it was the most powerful book in the world.
As he ran he flipped through it’s pages furiously, turning the pages as quickly as possible without tearing the precious material.

“C’mon c’mon c’mon!” he muttered to himself. Where was it! He needed something quickly. At this point he didn’t care what it was as long as it was able to protect him.
He stopped and gasped with relief as he found the page he was looking for. There was a loose drawing of a scaled creature. Not very good, but enough to convince anyone looking at it that it was not a beast to be taken lightly. He held it close to his face as pain flared in his side.
He read the beginning lines, his breath becoming labored as he fought his inevitable collapse.

The Korroman, or dragon beast is a dangerous enemy to any that get between it and its young. It has been known to withstand a blow with a club unnoticed and its hard leathery scales have even have been said to stop small bullets. It has been proven to be friendly to humans, and in extreme situations act as a human protector if it feels the human to be a part of…

He stopped reading. Perfect.
The pain was becoming unbearable. He stopped breathing heavily. He reached into the book and tore out the page. As his attackers came around the corner he carefully crumpled it up behind his back.

One of the men -at least he thought they were men- stepped out.
“No more running.” he said. He had a high clear voice. It rang out coldly against the stone floor of the place. He reached into his hooded robe and came out with a shining dagger that looked like it had been cut out of a diamond.
The voice inside the boys head screamed Now! and he threw the crumpled paper at the man’s feet.
With a roar the beast sprang into the existence, its skin covered in hard scales, its eyes a fiery yellow with a single black flame in the center. It looked at him, and with a bellow it leapt at his attackers.

Livvy55

I love it. The way you added a bit of description at the started without taking away any urgency from the situation, it rlly good. Avoid not telling the reader a character's name because just using he or him etc can get repetitive, I get that sometimes you have to and it can add mystery. Other than that, great job.