forum I need this critiqued!

Started May 31, 2018 by @SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group

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I was wondering if anyone would be willing to look at something for me. First off, let me explain that I took a different approach to witing the piece than what I usually do, so please take that into account.

Sure I will!

Sure I will!

Great! I inboxed you… Not sure if it went through though.

I got it! I'll look at it tomorrow, I have to go to work in an hour.