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Started June 04, 2020 by @SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group

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((I got bored one day and wrote a parody of "Let It Go". Enjoy!))

Their blood flows red on the mountain tonight;
Not a person to be seen.
A kingdom of desolation,
And it looks like I’m the king.

The rage is howling like the vicious storm inside,
Couldn’t be that nice, heaven knows I tried.

Don’t let it out, don’t let them know.
Keep the beast inside from killing them all.
Conceal, don’t feel. Don’t let them know.
Well now they know!

Kill them all, kill them all;
Can’t hold it back anymore!
Kill them all, kill them all;
Let their red blood hit the floor!

I don’t care
If they’re going to scream!
So just let them scream;
Their yells never bothered me anyway!

It’s funny how some killing
Makes everything seem real.
And the beast that once coerced me
Finally got to me!

It’s time to see what we can do;
To test our limits and break through.
No right, no wrong, no rules for us!
It’s free!

Kill them all, kill them all;
I’m one with the beast inside!
Kill them all, kill them all;
Don’t let them run and hide!

So here we’ll stand,
And here we’ll stay;
Let our anger rise!

Our anger ignites through the air onto the ground;
My soul is swirling in blazing fire all around,
And one thought burns in the night like a fiery blast;
I’m never turning back!
The pain is in the past!

Kill them all, kill them all;
And I’ll rise like the break of dawn!
Kill them all, kill them all;
That weak-ass guy is gone!

So here I stand,
In all of their blood!
Let the beast rage on;
Their yells never bothered me anyway!

what the fuck

Note, I'm not trying to be rude when I say this, but I cringed. I feel some lines are just straight-up kinda choppy, and there was a noticeable typo. Also, I did notice a place where a hyphen is needed. And, the thing about Let It Go is that it had a decent rhyme scheme, which was not kept up very well in this parody.

But whatever, I can tell it was from sheer boredom and you do you, my guy.

Note, I'm not trying to be rude when I say this, but I cringed. I feel some lines are just straight-up kinda choppy, and there was a noticeable typo. Also, I did notice a place where a hyphen is needed. And, the thing about Let It Go is that it had a decent rhyme scheme, which was not kept up very well in this parody.

But whatever, I can tell it was from sheer boredom and you do you, my guy.

I wrote it to where the syllables would match, which can account for the choppiness and lack of rhyming. As for my typos, I don't see them?

And here Iwe’ll stay;

That weak ass guy is gone!

(weak-ass needs a hyphen)

And here Iwe’ll stay;

That weak ass guy is gone!

(weak-ass needs a hyphen)

Ah, thank you! I have edited. I see why I didn't notice the typos; they're the kind of typos that can easily be overlooked!

Yeah, it definitely doesn't really match up with the original song

and this

A kingdom of desolation,
And it looks like I’m the king.

is very repetitive

Like I said earlier, I wrote it to where the syllables would match with the original; I didn't care about the rhyming….

I don't mean the rhyming, I mean that there's a few lines where the syllables don't match either

Huh…. I was sure I got all of them to match. My bad. I'll go through and find them myself.

Thanks for the help though! It was my first attempt at writing (or re-writing in this case) a song; I wrote it sometime after Frozen came out.