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@Relsey-TheElder

(So far @Althalosian-is-WIZARD-Overlord-of-Emus is the only one to have asked me about further character information, remember I'm a resource you can use when building characters)

@Trix

(Relsey hi! I know I took a bit of a break from Notebook but I’m back… may I join or is it too late?)

@Relsey-TheElder

To all whom it may concern.
I would like to see some character's going up so we can start this, I'm really excited to share Denma with you.

@ZephirFox8812

Questions:
Is there a certain type of name each race has?
If a Feana goes to live with humans cause they failed to complete the ritual, is the creature still alive/does it come with them?

@Relsey-TheElder

Questions:
Is there a certain type of name each race has?
If a Feana goes to live with humans cause they failed to complete the ritual, is the creature still alive/does it come with them?

No and yes.

@Relsey-TheElder

(panic in busy school student)
(I will try to get it up soon, promise)

It's alright! I was just making sure you didn't forget about it :)

@Trix

Name: Rehman Cordius

Age(16-25): 16

Gender: Male

Race: Feana

Appearance: Stone grey skin, 6’ 1’’. His hair is the color of murky ink and disheveled, and often times messy strands fall past his downturned eyes. The irises are black to the core, like those of any pure Feana. In general, his facial structure leans feminine with thinner and softer edges, and his face and jawline form an oval. Rehman’s build is fairly slender and ectomorphic, weighing in at 160lbs. He carries himself with a sense of grace, almost like he’s dancing to a song no one can hear, and he yearns to be swept away. A griffin who has been lovingly dubbed Beak is his companion, and although not bonded, the relationship they share is one of mutual trust. Beak is 5’ 6’’ but struts around as if he towers the population. Amber yellow eyes glint out from behind a distinctively black beak, and he is quite fond of showing off his matching talons. They're shiny. All Rehman wants is to live a quiet life - the same cannot be said for Beak.

Magic Level: Dulled. He didn’t care much for his magical ability, always opting for more thoughtful and whimsical approaches, and he suffered a pretty big blow by failing the Test. Now he hesitates to cast simple enchantments.

Kingdom: Currently in Nonalia

Personality: Not grounded. His words come out hesitant and slow, with an ever-present delivery of stretching out each and every pause. The way he speaks makes it seem like he's going to say something really resourceful… and then he doesn't. Unequivocally clueless. He doesn’t have the experience nor self-preservation skills to be cunning, but if you go deep enough- trust me, you gotta dig deep, a sprinkle of intuition is there. Some might say that he's never really lived. They're right. One very strict boundary he has set is that he won't stand up for himself. Rehman refuses to fight back, and won't take risks if it ensues an argument. He despises conflict and would destroy himself in a blind effort to keep tensions down. Will develop.

Backstory: His parents never paid much mind to their youngest son, until due to a stroke of fate he was provided with a griffin. He had a handful of older siblings that would frequently fight and yell about why they deserved the griffin, and he learned to keep his mouth shut. Rehman grew up his entire life being told left and right that he was unworthy of Beak, so it should've been unsurprising when he failed the Test. But that little hope that he could prove himself? It shattered. Without even so much as a glance to what he knew would be disappointed faces filled with contempt and regret, he left and tried integrating himself into the Claudrel Kingdom. New and naive to the human world. Among the light-skinned people he never felt like he belonged, and that was his second taste of hostility. Rehman’s response was to travel away and withdraw into Nonalia, dragging Beak with him.

Other: I know his character is fairly one dimensional at the moment, but I'll try to see how it naturally evolves. Hopefully it's okay! If anything I wrote doesn't add up with Denma or doesn't fit with this template, let me know, and I'll fix it straight away :D

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

Name: Rue Gentian
Race: Senvien
Sex: Male
Age: 211
Appearance: He has hair that is not as dark as to be black, but most confuse it for such. His eyes also are not black. In direct sunlight they shine a dark amber, but in any other light they are dark dark brown. His skin is a bit dark for his race, a light brown like mahogany. Something of a long, pointed face.
Temperament: Sly but good, quiet and wry when speaking.
Magic: Hiding and woods magic. Light healing powers, but not proficient.
Education: Very high. Is well studied in the history of the past three hundred years.
Other: Very loyal to his queen. The surest way to anger him is to insult her. Caries a leaf that is beginning to shrivel and doesn't mention why. Thinks humans are shortsighted. Isn't good with money. Carries two long knives, beautifully decorated in gold.

@Relsey-TheElder

(Oh my goodness! I love them! You guy's did a really good job! @The-Althalosian-The_Eccentric_Elder It's not an always thing for Senvien's but I tend to name them after plants so I would look through some plant names for him.)

@ZephirFox8812

Name: Medden
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Race: Feana
Appearance: Meddan is 6' 8" and has light grey skin. His hair is very dark and sometimes looks almost purple. He always looks tired and his hair is short and messy. He had a Harpy Eagle but he bonded with it and now has its massive wings. They even grew to his body and he now has a wingspan of around 16-17 feet.
Magic Level: He's good but nowhere near good enough in his opinion.
Kingdom: Nonalia
Personality: He puts a lot of pressure on himself to be the best and to be perfect. It makes him not the best at being in a team and very competitive.
Backstory: He always tried his hardest to be the best and when the Feana didn't offer what he wanted to become better after he completed the ritual, he went down the mountain anyway and headed to Nonalia to try and learn as much as he could.
Other: When his wings are folded they are still very big and he walks into things a lot. He is pretty handy with using them to his advantage when fighting though and can handle knives very well. He owns a few which he enchanted to return to his hands when he wishes them too.

(Is it okay?)