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//Hey @NessieTheMonster, Is my character ok?
( He looks awesome )
(GTG)
( He looks awesome )
//Thanks, how should I bring him into the story. I was thinking that maybe he had been captured and was being taken to a secure facility when the rebels find him.
( Sure.)
(GTG)
//aww, bye
(So uM, @NessieTheMonster, I have planned out a “death” for London.
And by “death” I means it’ll seem like he died, but he’s not actually dead.
Can I
Can I tell you my plan?)
( Sure.)
(So
The Lily (was that her name???) is gonna shove London off the drawbridge into the castle’s moat.
So the fall is quite a distance. Now the fall won’t kill him, it’s the impact to the water. So London of course, panics, because he knows he’s probably going to die. But he get’s into the diving position, head first into the water, and he lives.
Okay that’s probably not scientifically accurate.
That will be corrected as needed.
So then he’s down there, and he’s treading water now, so he’s trying to muster his energy to get out.
But then oh no. There’s a monster. And then they fight. London somehow wins and is alive. But the poor boy is utterly exhausted, he finds either a little ledge down there or a floating piece of wood and lays on it. He passes out.
And he somehow gets out (woah this plan is very flawed.. I’m sorry. ;-; It sounded better in my head.) and the battle is over. Everyone is in the meeting room. And then people are sad because London “died”. (I mean you don’t have to be if you don’t like him)
And then London being the dramatic little crap he is, busts down the door and proclaims, “hELLO PLEBS. You thought pushing me off a drawbridge would kill me? WELL YOU THOUGHT WR-“ and he passes out.)
( I love it! Especially when he walks into the room.)
(Thank you! :D
Yes that’s my favorite part too. :p)
//it’s great
//What is the story now that the king is dead
//basically the exact same thing except lily is queen and they have a few days of grace beceflre she’s coronated
//If you guys need a new antagonist I could modify my character
//someone help i don't know how to add my character. she being overlooked!
//pop in, make up a scene
it depends on if she’s already a rebel or someone else or if she’s going to be a rebel at all
// im not caught up yet so all i know is how the lovebirds were in the hospital
//Okay so is your character
//a rebel
//okay, so they’re probably going to have a meeting or something soon, you can jump in there
Suddenly a scout rushes into the room and runs up to Cal "Sir I have a message for you"
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