forum Superhero teens with secret identities and obligations. What could possibly go wrong? / Closed

Started June 06, 2018 by @Natasha

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Lolita gritted her teeth. She screamed in her fantasy.

Aaron searched all over the school, but couldn't find any of his classmates that had left the room. They can't have left the school… that's against the rules. They could get suspended. Maybe they're all part of some gang.

Lolita's breath hitched. In her mind, she began to feel lightheaded. Woozy. She moaned in reality.

//yasss

(Yay)

“Please be okay, please be okay….” Pietro murmered, his hands clasped together under his chin like a pleading child. “Please.”

Piper took a deep breath and bit her finger, standing near the door. All my fault…….all your fault. She told herself. You're going to loose her,just like you lost Kierra. And Mack. And Sophia. And who could forget your parents. Your adoptive parents who didn't know who they were raising. A tiny voice tormented her. Piper walked out of the room, unable to take it anymore.

The doctor did his best, finally taking a step back after an hour of treating her. “All we can do is wait to see if her body accepts the treatment,” he said quietly. “We’ll know by midnight.”

Piper was sitting on the steps outside the hospital, not wanting to be in the hospital room but unwilling to leave her new friend completely.

//so I’m assuming Lolita is good?

//lol ok

The meds began to interrupt Lolita's nightmare. While her body stayed calm and motionless on the outside, her mind whizzed.

She began to hallucinate in her dreams.

Piper and Pietro were standing in front of her both blank and emotionless. "Piper?" Her voice bounced off of the walls. Walls? When was she in a room? "Pietro?" Neither one acknowledged her. Black tentacles grabbed her wrists and pulled her down into a puddle of dark slime that she didn't realize that she had been standing on. "Piper?! Pietro?! Help!! Help me!!! Someone, anyone!!! HELP!!!" Her friends did nothing as she sank deeper.

When her head was finally encased in the darkness, the tentacles retreated. A light in front of her lit her way. She was floating, then she suddenly dropped, falling through an abyss. She landed in a room with nothing in it. No windows, no door. She turned in a circle. Nothing about it was particularly impressive. The hairs on the back of her neck stood up and a blood-curdling scream ripped through the air. It was her own. She shivered and turned around again. Still nothing. She looked up. The ceiling was made of glass. It showed Piper, sitting on the hospital steps and Pietro, nervously waiting for her outcome. "Pietro! I'm here! I'm fine, I'm going to wake up!" She screamed at him. He couldn't hear. Her heart pounded. "Piper! Piper, help me! Please, I'm here! Piper, please!" She sunk to her knees in tears.

She closed her eyes and felt something warm touch her cheek. She opened her eyes and looked up into Pietro's warm gaze, his hand cupping her cheek in the hospital room. "Pietro," Lolita sighed and hugged him tightly. When she pulled away, he looked at her intently. "What?" She asked. He smiled and began to whisper in her ear, "Lolita, I-" Suddenly, dark red stains appeared on his chest and his body collapsed. His head fell into her lap, as she was sitting upright in the bed. "NO!!!!" she screamed, turning around to see who it was. She found herself looking at Piper, who was aiming a smoking gun at her. Her eyes were wide and her mouth was parted slightly. Lolita heard the beginnings of a sentence spill out of her friend's mouth, "Lolita, I-" but the scene melted away.

She was encased by darkness once again.

"How does it feel now? I promised you that I would haunt your dreams, Lolita. Don't think that I've forgotten…"

Lolita snapped her head up, but instead of seeing the face she loathed, she gasped and woke up in the hospital room. She looked wildly around. Her eyes were wide, alert, and terrified. The clock read 11:59 PM.

(Sorry this was so long…)

(:O It’s really good.

But I think it would help to have paragraphs?)

Name: Eva Regret Hills
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Role: Villain
Appearance: Auburn hair in a messy bun, pale skin, bored brown eyes, 5’7”.
Personality: Develop.
Backstory: She is very done with college. Now her brother originally wanted to be a villain, but he died and in his will demanded his sister be a villain with his plan to take over the world.
Wearing: An oversized sweater and socks.
Other: Heavily based off of these two pins : https://pin.it/tt5vdewwatsh2v and https://pin.it/lb6nuns5dcr3pg
(… is she okay? .-.

Or does she have to be… more evil?

Also, is she allowed to have powers?)

//awww yasss i love her

“Lolita! Thank god, your heartbeat was irrational for so long…. there was nothing I could do… you were… thrashing… and moaning and screaming and nothing anybody did helped…. are you… do you…. what happened?” Pietro rushed.

(Eva……….
Is glorious…..
Amazing)

Piper finally got the guts to walk back into the hospital room. It seemed as if Lolita had just woken up. She stayed at the door, leaning on the door frame.

“Are you better?” Pietro asked again, before Lolita even had a chance to reply.

"Yeah," she replied, still dazed from her nightmares. She saw Piper in the doorway and thought about how she'd shot Pietro. Lolita quickly dismissed the thought from her head. "Piper? Are you okay?"

“Good,” Pietro exhaled, falling over onto a chair. “That’s very good.” He fell asleep. Using his speed so much had drained him.

Lolita watched Pietro fall asleep, something she wouldn't be able to do peacefully for a while.