forum Sliding into the roleplay forums

Started February 23, 2018 by @_sleeby_rat_

tune

(sort of? I wanted to introduce him as this loud, angry demon person, but so far he's a quiet, sophisticated rich-looking man.)

(pfff I'm sure he'll show his true colors eventually XD)

(haha yeah. He's currently robbing a convenience store whoops)

(but he's doing it quietly)

(haha sounds like the best way to start a story ^^)

(haha, thanks. I'm probably going to post it in the critiques forum once I finish the first page lol)

(cool! Will you let me know when you do? I'd love to see it if that's all right)

(same here please?)

(lol okay. It's not very good though, just so you're aware. I'm the worst at writing and it takes me a really long time to produce something that's actually good)

(here you go: https://www.notebook.ai/forum/sharing-critiques/yo-come-critique-this-lit-opening-scene)

(Don't worry about that! I'm sure it's great and I'd love to read it ^^)

(Oooh! yay!)

(haha thank you)

(ok hang on lemme write down what I think on that thread)

(hi hello I'm back)

(yo)

(now that we have everybody I think we should be able to continue)

(Ok, headcount do we actually have everybody?)

(welp I know for sure you don't have me cuz I gotta leave for a while ^^; sorry)

(lol im in english class and my teacher gets triggered by chromebooks)

(ugh I had to weld sorry)

(had to watch and critique other english projects lol sorry)

(lol guess we were all busy)

(I had math rip)

(I've got history right now lol. I never pay any attention in this class)