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idk, either like fantasy or romance probably
idk, either like fantasy or romance probably
Yeah ok. I had a weird sort of universe ideas though I don't know if it could work
what are they?
So it isn't sufficiently thought through but—
A planet far into space and the people are physically linked to the planets . So, instead of Virgo, Capricorn and so on, there is Lunar, Solar… and they have powers connected to the planet. Also, there are physical characteristics according to your planet and some are more ‘noble’, as in higher social class, then others.
cool! I like it!
Oh awesome! So, characters I guess? Then plot
ok sounds good! do you have a template or do you want me to make my own?
Right sorry ^^'
Name:
Age:
Sexuality:
Gender:
Planet type:
Appearance/outfit(keeping in mind the characteristics of their planet):
Personality:
Fears:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Family/background (optional):
Other (optional):
it's fine
Name: Holly Stevens
Age: 16
Sexuality: pan
Gender: female
Planet type: Saturn
Appearance/outfit(keeping in mind the characteristics of their planet): Fair skin, blonde hair, dark gray eyes, lots of freckles. She's average height with an athletic build. She normally wears a hoodie and leggings or a t-shirt and jeans with sneakers.
Personality: Friendly, kind, and happy-go-lucky. Holly likes making friends and is a good leader.
Fears: being alone or unwanted
Strengths: social skills, leadership, lots of control of her abilities
Weaknesses: she doesn't work well by herself, insecure, easily jealous
Family/background (optional): it will be revealed throughout the story (aka I can't come up with anything rn)
Other (optional):
Name: Lucie Turner
Age: 15
Sexuality: Lesbian
Gender: Female
Planet type: Pluto
Appearance/outfit(keeping in mind the characteristics of their planet): Ocre streaked blue very smooth and straight (always down) hair, beige/green eyes, 5'5, thin and fragile frame, very tanned, sharp and hollowed out features, usually wears a simple long sleeve fitted grey dress with black torn tights and black work boots
Personality: selfless, unblinkingly prioritizes anyone and everyone over herself, quiet, efficient, sweet and caring in quite a motherly way, extremely trustworthy, street smart and resourceful, down to earth and not scared of the truth
Fears: failure and blame, death
Strengths: extremely fast and fast reflexes, quite a good hand to hand fighter, skilled liar and thief, can easily power through pain, hunger, heat and cold
Weaknesses: the twins (see family), very powerful but her powers are uncontrolled most of the time, not very physically strong, intimidated by the higher ranks, limited education
Family/background (optional): two 7 y/o twin siblings, one boy Soren and one girl Amaya. A nomad family (Lucie, Soren, Amaya, and their mother Gail)
Other (optional): her father Abraham was a Mercury, cast out for marrying a Pluto (her mother) so Lucie can read people's emotions quite well but that's the extent of it
Ugh wait I just realized the social ranks are doing something weird. Here's the right ranks:
ok cool! do you mind starting?
Do you want to hash out a quick plot or anything before we start?
Or are we doing straight romance?
oh plot duh! yeah we should probably get a rough idea of one.
Might be best
Have you got any ideas or preferences?
is dystopia too basic? maybe they could go on a quest of some sort, or my character could discover yours, originally planning to turn her in or something like that, but Lucie stops her and they become friends and then eventually more?
We could do something like a combination of those last two? It makes sense if Lucie is such a low social rank as opposed to Holly. Maybe some sort of political take-down when Holly realizes the condition Lucie's rank lives in?
sounds good to me.
Yeah? Good to hear. Here we go!
Lucie crept down an empty alley, hugging the brick wall behind her. She knew there was a small bread stand just around the corner who's owner was partially blind. As much as she knew it was wrong to take advantage of this, they needed to eat.
She got to the end of the alley and found herself facing a crowded cobbled street, bustling with a variety of merchants, performers and pedestrians.
It was perfect cover.
(wait I thought this was going to be in french? it’s fine if it’s not, I’m just confused.)
(oh shoot you're right I completely forgot! Imma just rewrite ^^')
(I've just got to go now sorry! Be back in about an hour)
(it’s totally fine!)
Lucie avancait sans un bruit dans une allee deserte, longeant de pres le mur de briques decrepites derriere elle. Elle savait deja qu'au coin il y avait un marchand de pain partiellement aveugle. Bien qu'elle savait ca cruel d'en profiter, il lui fallait trouver de quoi manger.
Elle arriva a la fin de l'allee et deboucha sur une rue pavee bondee d'une variete de marchands, artistes et nobles.
Parfait pour se dissimuler.
(I won't do any accents cause I haven't got them on my phone)
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