forum Magic Highschool remake? (Closed)

Started September 21, 2018 by @rot-baby-rot!

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Ladon hurled the legless table at the thing with amazing power and speed grazing the creature, before hinting as if he were running off, attempting to get it to chase him.

Leon had frozen. He dropped the table leg and was practically cemented where he stood.
"Jesus christ…" he muttered.

Ladon hurled the legless table at the thing with amazing power and speed grazing the creature, before hinting as if he were running off, attempting to get it to chase him.

(Just a heads up, they don't actually have their powers yet)

Jamie could barely hear the creature's movements over his own harsh breathing. He reached down blindly, feeling for the table leg, when he felt something grab his arm. Blinding pain shot through him as he was pulled to the ground, and the creature bit down on his leg. He let out a loud cry, and soon enough found himself passing out from the pain. The creature threw his body against the wall and continue to stalk around the room.

Ava looked at the beast with wide eyes. She slowly backed up and made sure Kaitlin was safe behind her.

Leon saw what happened to Jamie and right away went to help him. He was still breathing, but he was bleeding, and Leon was scared of whatever had done that. He scanned the room and his eyes set on the creature.
"Hey… hey… you okay there?" Leon asked frantically, even though Jamie was out.
He trembled a little as the creature came back his direction, and he knew the best option would probably be to divert its attention from Jamie.

Ladon threw a computer monitor at the thing to distract it. The thing charged him with uncanny movement, ramming into him and biting down on his shoulder. He punched it in the face to no avail, before it tossed him into the wall like it had done to the smaller kid. He tried to get up, but by then it had moved on.

The monster started to move to Ana and Kaitlin. She looked at Kaitlin “hide,” she whispers before moving away from her and standing up straight. She wanted to give the others time to take cover. She got ready and threw the table leg at it.

(I know. He is already unusually [although not superhumanly quite yet] strong.)

(Okay, well try not to make him too OP. The way you're describing him and his actions is making him seem like he's indestructible. He's not freaked out whatsoever by the events that are happening, and somehow he's already unnaturally strong. Please don't make him some sort of god, because it's not really that fair to the other characters. There really should be some sort of drawback to his power)

Leon cursed under his breath upon Jamie's unresponsiveness, but the creature was getting closer. He stood up and away from the other boy and started running. He was fast, but the monster was much faster. He didn't even hear it coming up behind him. Leon was just taken. Grabbed by claws to the abdomen. He let out a wail of pain and hit the floor. His breathing quickened as he realized that he was probably about to die.

Ana cursed as she saw that the leg didnt affect the monster. So instead she just stood here in shock for a moment. She had no ideas on what to do.

(Yeah, definitely.)

Ladon struggled to get up, his lungs burned as if on fire, and his heart was seemingly about to burst. His joints gave out. His vision seemed blurry, but he couldn't tell due to the darkness.
He was none the wiser when he slipped into unconsciousness.

Kaitlin swallowed and blinked, fighting away the tiredness that became unbearably overwhelming. She reached out a hand which rested on Ana's shoulder, "Ana…"She couldn't say more before her legs gave out and her vision left.

Ana caught Kaitlin right before she reached the floor. She quickly dragged her and placed her safely behind a bookshelf. When she stood up straight she saw that the movement must have attracted the monster. It walked over to her. It’s arm swooped amdien and picked her up. Her eyes swelled up with tears and she screamed. The monster threw her at the wall like all the others. She passed out before she could scream again.

I think so.

(Alright cool)

Jamie groaned as he woke up, his back stiff. He shifted, trying to get more comfortable, before realizing he wasn't in his bed. He opened his eyes blearily, and noted that he wasn't even in his house. He was immediately hit with the overwhelming scent of blood, and he gagged at the sight before him. There were bodies thrown throughout the room, some missing limbs and others heads. A small few of them looked unharmed, and he looked down at himself and noticed he was too.

He sat up, one of his shaking hands coming to cover his mouth. He could feel his own panicked breathing, and he flinched when his back hit the wall. He hadn't even known he was leaning back. What happened here? he thought, gazing at the horrific scene before him. What could have possibly- his eyes widened when he finally remembered. The creatures. Jamie let out a choked sob, trying not to throw up. If he hadn't been panicking before, he certainly was now.

Leon hadn’t realized he’d passed out in the first place. All he remembered was the pain.
Pain?
He sat up. He was entirely intact, although he was sure he had taken tooth and claw to vital organs. Leon’s first instinct after this was to go check on the boy he’d been trying to protect. He was alive, but certainly panicking.
“Hey, it’s… it’s going to be okay…” Leon muttered, leaning down next to Jamie. He wasn’t really convinced himself, but he had to try comforting Jamie. After all, he seemed fairly calm on the outside. He was trembling a bit, but still functional. The sight and smell of death were shocking and painful, but this was an emergency, and he couldn’t back down now.
“Uh… I’ve seen you around some. What’s your name?” Leon asked, trying to do anything to distract Jamie.

Ava’s eyes flickerd open and as soon as she pressesed what happened she sat up. She looked around at the reck around her breathing heavily. She didn’t seem to be injured which was good but she couldn’t say the same for some of the people around her.

(Rebecca, Maya, and Sara are his sisters btw)

He shook his head, desperately trying to take in breaths. The room felt like it was spinning, and he couldn't breathe- oh god he couldn't breathe- his name felt like the last thing on his mind. He let out another sob, trying to remember the breathing exercises Sara had taught him after Maya and Rebecca had disappeared. He heard someone yelling from out in the halls, and then someone running. "No no no no!" He cried. "They- they can't be back!" He buried his head in his hands, shaking.

"I hear someone in here!" A police officer yelled, gesturing to the other cops around her. "Come on!" The group of them ran into the library, taking in the sight before them.

Ignoring the police officers, Leon kept his focus on Jamie. He placed a hand on his shoulder to let him know he was still there, and had no intentions of leaving.
“It’s okay. They’re not monsters. They’re police officers. E-everything’s going to turn out fine, yeah?” Leon reassured him, “Just breathe. We’ll get through this. We’ve made it this far.”