forum ~Hospital to Forget~ {what happens when you start to remember?} (CLOSED for now)
Started by @blue_topaz
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@blue_topaz

Please keep in mind that if your characters fell and hit amnesia, the fall was staged by the hospital so they could forcefully remove their memories)

@blue_topaz

(I hope she's okay)

I love her! The clothing is fine, just keep in mind that they are usually wearing hospital clothing, but when my they wear their own clothes)

@Lenered

Name: Marya Neviks
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Ethnicity/Race: Ovek (wait, that's her own race?)
Sexuality: straight
Religion: will leave blank
Appearance: dirty blonde hair, brown eyes, three freckles across her nose, 5'9.5"
Clothing: navy blue riding habit
Personality: Cold, harsh, puts up walls, doesn't know how to social
Province of Origin: Cezza
Reason for being at the Hospital and severity of situation: She got shot for reasons she can't remember
Other: later..

@blue_topaz

Name: Marya Neviks
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Ethnicity/Race: Ovek (wait, that's her own race?)
Sexuality: straight
Religion: Modeian (own religion I made?)
Appearance: dirty blonde hair, brown eyes, three freckles across her nose, 5'9.5"
Clothing: Denim overalls, striped long sleeve shirt
Personality: Cold, harsh, puts up walls, doesn't know how to social
Province of Origin: Cezza
Reason for being at the Hospital and severity of situation: Her whole organization (basically family) was basically killed by her traitorous lover.
Other: later..

How modern is her clothing? Also, could you describe Modeian for me, I’m not sure if it would fit with the story)

@Desvelarse pets

Name: Vaughn Finley
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Ethnicity/Race: Mix of various Caucasian heritages
Sexuality: Bisexual
Religion: None
Appearance: Black, comb over style hair, pale skin, slate grey eyes, slim build, around 6’1
Clothing: Fitting white button up, black trousers, preferably some sort of black suit coat like top, black combat-like boots
Personality: Agoraphobic (Look up more about the mental illness if you aren’t sure what it is), untrusting, defensive, can get aggressive, rude to most, but tends to be more polite to women, clever, logical, takes long for him to open up to others, cynical, once he gets to know you, he get’s very protective and gentle.
Province of Origin: Dani
Relationships with officials: most are not fond of Vaughn, considering his closed off personality and his tendency to snap at others when he feels anxious
Reason for being at the Hospital and severity of situation: Amnesia, head was hit during the night of his families murder (or so he was told.)
Other: For basics, when he was 14, his father came home very intoxicated. His father went crazy, murdered Vaughn’s mother (Dania) and toddler sister (Adelina). More will be told

@Lenered

Name: Marya Neviks
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Ethnicity/Race: Ovek (wait, that's her own race?)
Sexuality: straight
Religion: Modeian (own religion I made?)
Appearance: dirty blonde hair, brown eyes, three freckles across her nose, 5'9.5"
Clothing: Denim overalls, striped long sleeve shirt
Personality: Cold, harsh, puts up walls, doesn't know how to social
Province of Origin: Cezza
Reason for being at the Hospital and severity of situation: Her whole organization (basically family) was basically killed by her traitorous lover.
Other: later..

How modern is her clothing? Also, could you describe Modeian for me, I’m not sure if it would fit with the story)

(Ahh, don't worry, I'll change it)

@blue_topaz

Love your Character @Opia, just one thing: I said above that the amnesia was ‘forced’ into our characters by the Hospital in secret, but in yours it says that it was caused by his father. Is your character ‘Unfixable’ or not then? All info is above)

@WriteOutofTime

(Yay)
Name: Nyir
Age: 20
Race: African-American
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Religion: Used to be Deucusian, but after her boyfriend's death, her faith faded away
Appearance: Dark brown hair tied back in marley twists usually worn in a low ponytail, dark, heavyset eyes, full lips, high cheekbones, a scar that disfigures the left side of her face, perpetually frowning or neutral, frown lines in between her brows
Personality: Serious, witty, bent on revenge, never shows emotion, intelligent and strategic, closed off, extremely loyal to those she cares about, not quite suicidal but a bit careless about her own life, disrespectful, authoritative, quiet. The quieter she is, the more angry she is.
Province of Origin: Cezza
Reason for being in the hospital: She and her boyfriend were attacked by … someone, and she was left with amnesia and a wound on her face.
Other: Her sense of humor is very dark and usually only unveiled when she's not sober.

@blue_topaz

Love your Character @Opia, just one thing: I said above that the amnesia was ‘forced’ into our characters by the Hospital in secret, but in yours it says that it was caused by his father. Is your character ‘Unfixable’ or not then? All info is above)

@Lenered

Awesome thanks @Nerd! Just one thing, how did her family being killed end up with her in an amnesiac hospital?)

(I FIXED THAT TOO)

@ShadeStar

Name: James Fleetfoot
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Ethnicity/Race: African American
Sexuality: Bisexual
Religion: Deusucian
Appearance: Athletic build, black hair swept to his left side, hazel eyes, and stands at about 6'11".
Clothing: A dark green tunic, leather vest, and gray pants.
Personality: Stubborn, Loyal, and Kind
Province of Origin: Cezza
Reason for being at the Hospital and severity of situation: Parents used to beat him up constantly. That is the only memory from before the hospital he has and that was a year ago.
Other: Refuses to worship St. Palonsaa