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(Okay, so they can travel to other realms through dimensional rifts, which can be disguised as anything, from paintings to books, and many things more. In my story, they only actually visit one specific realm, but they can technically go anywhere.)

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Tamryn couldn't believe he'd gotten thrown in jail! And for helping out people of the town no less! He was outraged (And also a bit horrified that the city government had thrown him into jail for killing rats without a permit. He shouldn't need a permit to help people! Sometimes he wondered how these places survived.). Plus, the guards had been rude and way too mean, and he was sure they'd left big fat bruises all over his forearms.

And jail usually wasn't that bad because the company was the best. In his experience, jail people were the most entertaining people ever. They told great stories, let you worry about the things they may or may not have done, and sang dirty songs way too loud to annoy the guards. Sadly, the people in this jail seemed far less exciting.

There were quite a few people in here, and the only one he knew was Lanaai. And Lanaai wasn't talking because she was pissed at him for reasons entirely (Well, half entirely) beyond his control. Life was so unfair. He was going half insane in here. Eventually, he scooted over to a nice looking boy with bright pink hair.

"So how'd you get thrown in here?

(Sorry I gave such a late reply, my wifi started freaking out)

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( Your fine Love)

Luke heard a cell block door shut a couple cells down.and didn't here her question. He'd been thrown in there because he was with someone who stole and didn't rat them out. Luke kept glancing until it was time for lunch and imediatly walked to her cell to see the new girl.He walked up to her and spoke " Hello? Whats your name? Mines Luke." He said slowly and calmly

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Not again. Clem thought. Could they ever interact with a single painting without it being a portal to another dimension? Probably not, but that wasn't their main focus. They and Romana had gotten thrown in a prison cell with a few others, for quote unquote "black magic" and were now awaiting being burned at the stake.

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(I can't see the pic. Also, I noticed you used she/her pronouns but Tamryn's a boy)

Tamryn huffed in relief, breaking eye contact with this Luke guy to shoot Lanaai a rude look. She rolled her eyes, muttering a long string of elvish cusses under her breath. That meant he'd truly pissed her off because Lanaai was the calmest person he knew. "I'm Tamryn! It's nice to meet you!" He answered, a wide smile splitting his face. "The sour-pus behind me's Lanaai."

Lanaai shot a look now, though it wasn't dirty so much as it was murderous. She was going to kill Tamryn when they got out of here. Well, maybe not murder, but she was going to mess him up and it wasn't going to be pretty. She half hoped she scared off the boy Tamryn was talking to so he'd be as unhappy as she was. Her mood lightened considerably when she saw a girl in the cell next to her. She didn't look too roughed up, perhaps she hadn't been searched by the guards. "You," She called, gesturing to the girl.

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( Sorry and why ummm im what you said nice looking boy why? I thought he was straight?) Luke smiled and checked him out once or twice. " You look nice!" Luke chuckled

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"Woe is me, yet again being trapped in a prison cell. This is worse than back home. At least they had sandwiches." Romana said loudly. "Can you possibly be quiet?" Clem asked.

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(Nah, Tamryn's Gay and Lanaai is Demi/Biromantic).

Tamryn was confused because he was actually looking worse for the weather. Considerably worse for the weather. This boy was awfully nice. "Thank you! " He cheered, brushing a stray lock of hair out of his face. "So do you! So, how did you get thrown in here? You didn't answer that, right?" He flushed, hoping he hadn't asked the same question twice.

Lanaai was a bit confused. What was a sandwitch? The girl must've been from a faraway land. Not that it was any of her concern, she just needed to get Tamryn and her out of here so she could kick his sorry ass. She took a deep breath, doing her best to remember all the calming techniques she'd forced herself to learn. "Did the guards search you?"

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Luke smiled " I know what you are thinkin. i'd been thrown in there because he was with someone who stole and didn't rat them out

( Wait can they have powers

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(Yeah, just don't make them super OP)

Lanaai mentally cheered. She pressed on, ignoring the girl's question. "Do you have any pins?" She could use a pin to pick the lock and then she could escape. Not the most developed plan, but she had enough Ki stored up to smash her way through any problems. She grabbed a rather confused looking Tamry, hissing "We can get out, stop chatting with your friend." into his ear. Tamryn pouted but didn't struggle, giving the pink haired guy he'd been talking to a sad wave.

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( Ok)
Luke looked at him " You look fine, And we'll talk about how i know later!" so exclaimed

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"Pins? No. Full lock-picking kit? Yes." Romana said. "Why the hell do you have that?" Clem said, astounded and terrified at the same time.

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Lanaai tilted her head but resolved not to say anything, only to have Tamryn interrupt her silence. "If you have that why didn't you break out already?" He called, hoping he didn't seem too rude.

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"I dunno. Probably because I wouldn't want to draw attention." she said. "Save yourself and others expect saving. No idea why."

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Tamryn frowned. "But that's so mean."

Lanaai punched him in the arm. They always argued over Tamryn's naivety (or goodwill and moral compass, as he called it). "May we borrow it?" She asked, desperation quietly slipping into her voice. If this girl didn't give her the picks all was lost.

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"Nah, I can get the door. Nobody touches my stuff. Ever." Romana said. "Selfish much?" Clem asked.