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"I also swear on the River Styx that I won't harm you," Tealle promised. After she had finished the sentence, thunder rumbled in the background.
"I also swear on the River Styx that I won't harm you," Tealle promised. After she had finished the sentence, thunder rumbled in the background.
(Hello!)
(I like the first one!)
(And hi! I didn't know how to make Tealle get in the conversation until just now :P)
(I like the first one!)
(ok. I also have to illustrate it which will be fun. My grandmother compared it to Stephen Kings' writing in a good way and im very proud)
(I can see why she'd compare it, it's amazing!!!! :D )
(Okay so the first one was like major creepy and I'm honestly really wondering what lead up to this, but it was really good. And the second one reinforces the whole idea of to be scared of the dark, you build on a primitive fear that almost everyone has. Personally I think you should do the first one since the second one has kind of been done over and over again. That and I really like the first one. So there's my input. But if you have to illustrate it go with the second one it will be so much easier for you, if easy is what you want.)
(Thank you so much!)
(I couldn't have put it better, @ShadeStar!)
(Okay so the first one was like major creepy and I'm honestly really wondering what lead up to this, but it was really good. And the second one reinforces the whole idea of to be scared of the dark, you build on a primitive fear that almost everyone has. Personally I think you should do the first one since the second one has kind of been done over and over again. That and I really like the first one. So there's my input. But if you have to illustrate it go with the second one it will be so much easier for you, if easy is what you want.)
(I actually like the first one better and easy is not what im going for. and thank you)
(No problem. Glad I could help!)
(That was a really well put reasoning, nothing lead up to that i just watch a crap ton of creepy stuff. and in my friend group we are all different 'deities' and so im Satan but im not really mean or evil or anything)
//omg i thought i was going to pee myself those were both good idek what they were for
(Sounds good, if anything it adds to the creepy factor. Also it's like undisputed that I'm the Slytherin in my group soo…)
(Hello my fellow Slytherin)
(Slytherins unite! :D )
(I'd go with the first one.)
(SLYTHERIN!)
//I’m slytherclaw or whatever :)
(are all of you slytherins?)
(Wait, is everyone here a slytherin? Because then I head cannon that all writers are slytherins because of the torture we put are characters through. We're all just various types.)
//yes. Yes. I agree
(Wait, is everyone here a slytherin? Because then I head cannon that all writers are slytherins because of the torture we put are characters through. We're all just various types.)
(thats a great head cannon)
(I mean………………………………………….. I wouldn't be surprised………………………………………………)
I'm a slytherin.
(Head Cannon formed and Accepted!)
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