forum A detective, a criminal mastermind and an ex-police officer walk into a bar.

Started June 14, 2018 by @PeaceWillWin-FearWillLose

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((Hey, what time is it for everyone? For me it's 6:43 am))

(are you an Aussie? Cause adding the 11 mins since you posted this you're on the same time as me)

((Yes I am :D ))

(yay I have an Australian friend!)

"Oh, he plays soccer?" Lix: "I'm not a soccer mom. Nicola looked at the girl in wonder. "Are you a soccer mom?"

"I'm 21. I'm not old enough to be a mum, let alone a soccer mum. No, my stupid brother Nazir is too lazy to catch the bus he normally catches, so of course he calls me. You should probably come with me Gen. You're not old enough to even be here."

"I'll be fine."

Do soccer moms have a specific age? Interesting. "My friend wants your number." Nicola blurted out, stealing quick glances at Lix.

"Now she looks old enough to be your mum. I'll be back soon Gen. Don't leave until I get back."

"Okay." Genevieve smiles and swings her legs on her chair. ((does that make sense? I hope it makes sense.))

"I'm 18," Nicola pouted, looking down at the floor.

"You prick," She whispers to her self, "Your supposed to get it for yourself." Nicola my child… I look at most twenty five, B— She felt strangely offended by the comment.

"Miss, can I borrow a pencil?" Nicola tapped the girl on the shoulder. (Gen)

"I… um… sure!" Genevieve started looking through her bag. "I'll see if I have one."

"Thanks. I lost all of my pencils, so I might need to use this one until the end of the day. I'll return it, I promise." Nicola placed a hand over his heart and nodded. "Cross my heart, hope to die, stick a cupcake in my eye."

Genevieve handed him the pencil, confused.

Nicola took the pencil, smiling. "I'm have to have your number if I'm going to return this."

Genevieve laughs. "It's just a pencil, you can keep it."

((argh why do I keep changing between past and present tense?!?!?))

((I need a name for an antagonist in a script I'm writing. Any suggestions?))

(i can help, but it depends on what they're like/their abilities and powers)

((Um….. he's a murderer. Not sure why yet. He's kinda an undeveloped character……))

(ok………what's his background? his ethnicity? what were his parents like?
typically parents will base their children's names off parts of their lives or just intrests
what their background/ethnicity is always comes into play
the name doesn't have to match the person)