100 Words A Day - Day 001.
As we're writing, we notice that there is a lot of pronoun usage that just pops up over and over again. Words like he, she, or it occur frequently, and when we're writing, it seems a bit excessive. Why all the rush?
Would we rather have these words replaced by labels, such as, 'the sister', 'the warrior', or 'the queen'? Now, THESE words are the ones that can get mighty excessive. When we're reading it over again, these labels can get annoying.
So, it's best to stick with your good old pronouns - even if it seems like it's wrong.
I just want to be alone at times but the world backfires at me and leaves me in ashes
Tom's hands shook. Seraph kill me! Kill me! Please!
"Shut up."
"Tom's no more little lady. I'm in control now." Tom's neck twisted sideways. After Sycore was done speaking, Tom used all his might to regain some little control. "KILL ME SERAP-!" Sycore cut him off. He could only watch now..
Sycore aimed the gun at her.
(rp stuffs)
9 Do not repay evil with evil or insult with insult. On the contrary, repay evil with blessing, because to this you were called so that you may inherit a blessing.
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Hi
(Seriously the last thing I copied)
Met glanced over his shoulder over at the bar, where the lady stood looking disappointed.
"I… I don't know… thank you… for that…" He inhaled deeply.
Something my brothers would do
Just because you’re trash doesn’t mean you can’t do great things. It’s called garbage can, not garbage cannot.
