forum +Clans Divided+ (Warrior Cats roleplay redo - closed)

Started July 19, 2020 by @ZephirFox8812

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I would like to think so! now all i can imagine is Flamekit rolling out of some bushes– ))

(Flamekit was running around, playing with his sister Quailkit. He was practicing hunting. "I wanna be a Warrior when I grow up!" Flamekit said, Running after Quailkit. "Sure you do, Flamekit. And you'll be the best!" Darkspots, Flamekit's mother said. Flamekit Smiled "I know I will be!" He toppled over. "But It's so hard! I'll need to train for so many moons!" Flamepaw said, Frowning.

Darkspots smiled, "And then you'll be the best!" Darkspots got up and looked at Flamekit. "Be careful! I don't want you falling into the river! I need to go do something." Flamekit nodded and then Darkspots walked away. Flamekit continued to play-hunt with Quailkit until his foot slipped and he fell into the river. "Ahhhhhh!!" Quailkit yelled, Trying to help him. "Mommy!" Quailpaw called. Darkspots quickly ran over but Flamekit was nowhere to be seen.

Meanwhile, Flamekit was on the other side of the river Trying not to drown. A waterfall. Just great. Flamekit was swimming as fast as he could but the current was too strong for a kit like him. He ended up falling down the waterfall and landed in a bush. He heard something. Another kits voice. "Hey! Are you ok?!")

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Mistkit ran over to Flamekit and her head tilted. "Who are you? Where did you come from? You looked like a bird! An-" Mistkit got cut off by her sister, Vixenkit cut her off. "Calm down! Calm down! He's hurt! Leave him alone!" Vixenkit hissed. Mistkit frowned and backed away. "What's your name? Im Vixenkit." Vixenkit said with a smile on her face. "I-Im Flamekit… Nice to meet you.." Flamekit said, walking out of the bush he was in. "You too! I think you're my sister, Mistkit. She's very energetic." Vixenkit Sighed. "Anyway, you look hurt! Let's go to my clan and they'll fix you up!" Vixenkit smiled. Flamekit nodded and followed the ginger she-cat to her clan.

They entered the kit's den where Vixenkit and Mistkit's mother was waiting for them. Springheart's eyes widened as she saw little Flamekit walk in with her kits. "Oh! Oh my! Are you ok? Vixenkit, what happened?" "He fell from the waterfall…He was hurt, so me and Mistkit helped him." Springheart Shook her head. "Ok. I'll take care of him, you go and play with Mistkit." VIxenkit nodded and walked out with her sister. Springheart looked at Flamekit and smiled. "What's your name, kit?" "F-Flamekit…" He answered. "What clan are you from?" Flamekit tried to think. What clan…What clan… He thought. "I…I don't remember…" Flamekit looked down. "Ah…Don't worry! You'll just stay here. With my daughters and son." Springheart smiled. "Ok!" Flamekit ran off, After the other kit's.

Flamepaw had really got mad. He quickly pounced on Cloudypaw and pushed her to the floor. He scrached her several times in the face and then backed down. He knew that he was doing something wrong…But he couldn't help it… It felt so good to fight…

Cloudypaw forgot about impressing Scorchfeather and shrieked. She covered her head with her paws and curled into a ball.

(I changed his backstory- Again-)

i felt this on a personal level ))

Scorchfeather's green eyes widened, she fought to urge to stand up and fight Flamepaw and her own apprentice herself. Cloudypaw! Stand up and fight back, you coward! she growled as she notice Rainfrost give a smug grin. This rat….when these kits are done fighting i'll have to teach him a lesson…maybe i'll go with the river side walk. he seems to behave more when his heads underwater… she curled her large tail around her paws and narrowed her green gaze. "Cloudypaw." a deep, deep growl escaped her throat and she could see the young molly flinch at her tone but didn't move, except the molly just tremble like a scared little kit when they hear the booming noises from the thunder. Scorchfeather didn't want to escalate this further but apparently she had to take it into her own paws.

Standing up she saw Rainfrost look up at her in his slouched position, his icy blue eyes narrowed in a questioning manner. Scorchfeather just curled her lip and stormed over to the apprentices, she could see Flamepaw step back, his ears pressed tightly against his head, and his tail bristled slightly as it curled around his side. Scorchfeather noticed the patched tom's long claws shimmer in the scarce sunshine that filtered through the tall oaks. She lifted her head as the two locked eyes, her lip still curled, revealing her thorn sharp teeth. "don't try me, kit." she spat, her pale green eyes in slits as she took another step towards the apprentice. "And don't even, think! that just because you're some puny apprentice that I wouldn't attack you. Everyone is my enemy and I won't hesitate to-" she stopped, "nevermind." she mewed, turning her gaze on her own apprentice. "you." she mewed sharply, "we'll have to practice some-more…" she growled. "this time im positive that it'll be till dawn…" she lashed her tail. "I can't believe we were "granted" such, DISAPPOINTMENTS, as apprentices!" she growled through gritted teeth.

words are confusing– I have to re-read this like 8 times and fix it to my liking qwq ))

edit - I edited this bc– words are fun to put together! ))

bump? ))

oof. im waiting for either Z or Mosis to responds lol ))

Cloudypaw stayed curled on the ground her head under her paws, sobbing. Once Scorchfeather was done yelling, she unrolled and ran from the clearing and into the forest.

this entire rp is just D r a m a XD gotta love drama ))

XD ))

(I kind of want her to run into Mistpaw and Owlheart while they're training(with Stormpaw and Barckclaw maybe). Like, Cloudypaw accidentally ran across the border, and now she's there. Maybe some more drama could happen? Maybe Flamepaw runs after Cloudypaw, because Rainfrost tells him to finish the fight, but then Mistpaw's there, and everything gets dramatic and heartbreaking. Yay! (Just some thoughts about dramatic plotline. :D))

i want this to happen– this is so smart lol ))

(I kind of want her to run into Mistpaw and Owlheart while they're training(with Stormpaw and Barckclaw maybe). Like, Cloudypaw accidentally ran across the border, and now she's there. Maybe some more drama could happen? Maybe Flamepaw runs after Cloudypaw, because Rainfrost tells him to finish the fight, but then Mistpaw's there, and everything gets dramatic and heartbreaking. Yay! (Just some thoughts about dramatic plotline. :D))

i want this to happen– this is so smart lol ))

(So let it happen-)

(I kind of want her to run into Mistpaw and Owlheart while they're training(with Stormpaw and Barckclaw maybe). Like, Cloudypaw accidentally ran across the border, and now she's there. Maybe some more drama could happen? Maybe Flamepaw runs after Cloudypaw, because Rainfrost tells him to finish the fight, but then Mistpaw's there, and everything gets dramatic and heartbreaking. Yay! (Just some thoughts about dramatic plotline. :D))

i want this to happen– this is so smart lol ))

(So let it happen-)

we sha'll let it happen. uwu ))

Cloudypaw stayed curled on the ground her head under her paws, sobbing. Once Scorchfeather was done yelling, she unrolled and ran from the clearing and into the forest.

Scorchfeather went to go grab and tackle Cloudypaw to the ground but the young molly managed to slip past and continue running out into the forest. "Fox-dung." she spat. "well, come on then! we need to catch her."

Rainfrost flicked his torn ear and stood up, "alright, lets go." he mewed, giving Flamepaw a somewhat threatening glare. The three walked out of the training hollow and raced after Cloudypaw. he could hear Scorchfeather growl under her breath about how she'll have to punish her later.

Cloudypaw ran blindly, hitting two trees and tripping thrice before she made it to a open area. The light on her eyelids was brighter. She guessed she was on the moor. 'WindClan' she realized, a second before she hit someone, fell over and stayed down.