forum Hey, anyone have cringe stories I can read? Lol I want spooptober to be interesting

Started October 25, 2019 by Deleted user

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when i was really edgy i wrote MANY variations of the infamous milk fic, whoever has read any of them needs god in their life XDD

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oh my god. this was made for 9 year old me. unfortunately the computer i was writing it on (it was in notes lol) has disappeared but i think i remember it enough. tw for absolute 100% cringe B) (pretty much all of the names were google translated from japanese, so brace yourself). here we go-

Hoshi (star in google translate japanese) is the absolute biggest Mary Sue to walk the earth. she goes to this magic school where shes supposed to suck at magic when she literally has what i called "celestial powers" and a chosen one arc, which are apparently very rare and were like physics. anyway she goes to this magic boarding school and goes to her dorm to find 4 OTHER STUDENTS (what). she immediately gets acquainted with them to find-

Sparrow (literally a Roblox rp description like half demon/secretly vampire/daughter of satan tsundere except shes just mean to everyone but everyone loves her anyway. also apparently can sword fight), citrus (just Amanda from LWA, sparrows friend, polar opposite tho, idk why her name was citrus bc she had fire powers), sakura (name 100% stolen from CCS, apparently mute and had "speech cards" (just like notes or smth) N, (I just know her name started w/ an n, like a Mary Sue part 2 and just played dumb blonde).

hoshi endured physical and verbal assault from sparrow and everyone else loved her because she was the main character. she also met some boring character who was supposed to be a love interest named Doragon (dragon in google-translate japanese).lots of little things that had nothing to do w/ the plot and were about a half paragraph long, so I'm skipping that. anyway, sparrow goes out of character and is very optimistic and happy because she found a sword-fighting elective, which she and hoshi sign up for. hoshi immediately KOs a hologram in front of her class with zero skill at sword fighting, so i don't know what was up with that. soon hoshi has hallucinations/"visions" that she learns is because she has celestial powers and, according to her teacher, "are always correct". she witnesses, in her vision, her mom dying by a demon setting her house on fire, which hoshi does nothing about. she talks to her teacher about this and her teacher says she has to go into an alternate dimension where she faces her greatest fear. she does this with her friends without hesitation and enters some nightmare world. they quickly scatter, which wasn't a good idea because hoshi fights some illusion version of herself and dies, then sparrow goes to hell to fight her sister and wins. I didn't write anything for the other characters but doragon is still there so obviously he's upset. they find the hoshi died in that dimension and in theirs too, so they go back and tell the teacher. the teacher explains that the only way to revive hoshi is to give her "the gift of life". upon request, dragon volunteers to die which the teacher kills him, which is definitely not allowed but I didn't like world building of any kind. hoshi is revived and is in a coma. apparently sparrow is very shaken by dragon dying even though she hated him so…?

sorry this is so long haha i hope you cringed