forum Hey, anyone have cringe stories I can read? Lol I want spooptober to be interesting
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XD, it'll take a bit, but I can grab some of my very cringe worthy fanfics from when I was like twelve and into the show Ninjago, if that isn't cringe I don't know what is.

OOF I watched that with my brother, some of it makes no sense. Give me that nice cringe fanfic goodness. I usually read fanfic with my discord homies.

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I made an x reader for one of my character's like two years ago and it's pretty cribe if you want to see.

Yes, i did some of those.

@Rainy_day_artist_classic group 

(Here's trash)

Kai was as red as his Gi vibrantly moving up and down covered in sweat. He was mumbling.
“73, 74, 75…” And so on. He was trying to break Cole’s push-up record of 384. As you can see, he is very far off. He started doing one arm so he could wipe the sweat from his forehead and give it a rest. It was 4:00 a.m. and still completely dark outside. Kai had gotten up early so he could get a head start on training, he was even up before Sensei, which was a surprise to Kai, after all Sensei normally woke up around 3, but no matter. He continued mumbling.
“96, 97,98,99, 100…” He started thinking about hid childhood, remembering the good and bad times.

5 year old Kai was running around the backyard with one of the neighbor hood kids at his parents cookout. They were playing tag not caring about the dozens of people who were eating and laughing. There were mostly adults, and teens, but Kai didn’t care he had his best friend here. Kai spoke to the other boy, stopping.
“Hey Aubrey, this game is getting boring.” Kai said, Aubrey nodding in agreement.
“How ‘bout we go to Melissa’s house! She likes hanging out, I don’t think our parents will mind!” Kai nodded. Now they were off to ‘Melissa’s’ house. They knocked on the door. A young girl that looked to be the age of 7 answered the door.
“Oh hi guys! What are you doing here?” The young girl asked. Kai smiled, Aubrey answered.
“We wanted to know if you wanted to go play at the park.” He said making the young girl grin.
“Ok I’ll come, let me get my shoes, come in!” She said, both boys walked in. She lived in a large house. Both boys sat on the couch in the living room. Kai liked touching things, like any young boy or girl, but he knew not to touch expensive stuff, even when it was hard. But there was this one thing that caught his eyes, it was a dazzling gold gem, on a silver chain, it was broken in half, but still beautiful. He was reaching out to grab it, but Melissa walked down stairs and smiled. Kai backed away and smiled.
“Ok let’s go!” They were all out the door…

Kai continued counting by now he was at 163. He finally fell to the ground.
“That was exhausting, I should probably get breakfast…” He said to himself. He got up and went to his room to get changed. It took about fifteen minutes to get ready, but he was ready to go out for breakfast. He grabbed his keys and went to Nya’s door.
“Hey, it’s Kai, wanna grab breakfast?” Kai asked his younger sister. The door opened.
“Sure Kai! Let me get my shoes you go get the bike started.” Nya said closing the door. Kai tossed the keys in the air as he walked down the hall to the front door. He pushed the door open and walked to the edge. He jumped making a wistful dragon appear. He came to the ground and made the dragon disappear. He walked over to the bike and pulled his phone out. He checked the time as he put the keys into ignition and turned the key. When he heard Nya coming toward him he put his phone in his pocket. He sat on the seat and Nya got on behind him. Kai sped the bike and they were off to Ninjago city. Nya started talking to Kai.
“Hey Kai, where are we going for breakfast? And is it just us?” She asked over the roar of the engine.
“We are going to that little place on the edge of Brick and Main, and no it’s just us.” Kai said loud enough for Nya to hear. She nodded not saying anymore until they got there.

There on Brick and Main was a motorcycle parking at ‘The Red Mug’ with dozens of shining signs with the words ‘Now Open’ and glistening windows reflecting the image of multiple people eating and drinking coffee either alone or with friends and family. Kai walked up to the door and opened it. He put a red ball cap on his head and let Nya go in first. She was wearing a Gray beanie and fake glasses. They walked to a booth big enough for the two of them. As they sat a young lady came to them, she had mostly light blonde hair, but with pink ends. She came and set menus and silver wear on the table. She greeted them with a smile.
“Hi there, I’m Sarah and I will be your waitress today, anything I can get you to drink?” She said still smiling. Nya spoke first also smiling.
“Can I have a water please?” She asked and the young lady wrote it down.
“And for you sir?” She asked politely. Kai smiled.
“Can I have some coffee, no creamer please.” He said to her. She jotted it down and walked away. Kai smiled and Picked up the menu. Neither Kai or Nya spoke they each just read the menu.
“Ok here is your drinks, are you ready to order?” She said whilst she set the drinks on the table. Kai set his menu down as did Nya.
“May I get the Cinnamon Rolls and eggs, with a side of bacon?” He asked receiving a nod.
“And what can I get for you?” She asked turning her head towards Nya.
“May I get the flap jacks, with a fruit salad and sausage?” She asked, again receiving a nod from the waitress. She took the menus and walked away. Kai watched as she did.
“Ok Nya, does she look familiar to you? I can’t place it…” He said to Nya. Nya looked up from her phone and looked at the young waitress. Nya nodded scrunching her eye brows together.
“Your right, she makes me think of that girl that used to live not to far from our old house, you know the one you always got into trouble with.” Nya said smiling. Kai rolled his eyes and took a sip of his coffee.

Now they were just finishing there breakfast and laughing whilst they were talking. Kai payed for the check and they both got up and went outside. Kai got on the bike Nya close behind. Kai revved the engine and they pulled out of the parking lot. Kai turned into another parking lot rather close to the restaurant and got off the bike. Nya razed an eyebrow to Kai.
“Come on Nya! I need to get a present for Jay for his birthday!” Kai said making Nya get off and run over to him. They walked into the electronics store and went to the back, where the video games were. Kai walked up to the shelf labeled ‘J-P’ and ran his fingers over all the labels.
“I need a few things, I’m gonna grab it whilst your looking ok?” She asked receiving a nod. Kai still ran his fingers over the games reading the titles.
“Come on where is- AHA! Here we go!” He said pulling it off the shelf. Now in his hands lay ‘Ninja Warrior 5’ and a grin spread on his face. Kai walked up to the counter and slapped the money and the game down to pay for it. The man took the money and bagged the game. Kai walked away to go find Nya whistling a wordless tune….

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You gotta admit, for someone who was ten, its not awful, even though it’s cringe.

@Shadow_Knight group

I made an x reader for one of my character's like two years ago and it's pretty cribe if you want to see.

Yes, i did some of those.

(Here is my cringy writing. Warning there are mention of depression and suicide.)

Y/N's POV

I can't take it anymore. I've been depressed for so long. I don't want to go on. I get up from my bed where I had been laying down. I grab my jacket and slip on some shoes before heading out the door. I shivered from the cold air and pulled my jacket closer to me. I start walking to Blackberry bridge. It was a bride in my town with a steep drop. 'Should be enough to kill me.' I thought as I rounded a block. The wind tussled my H/C hair. I walked onto the bridge. Once I got to the middle of the bridge I looked over the edge. It was a long drop with a river at the bottom. I slowly got up onto the railing and looked down. It was quite a drop. I sighed.

"You don't want to do that." A feminine voice to my left said. I turned to see someone there. Had they been there a second ago? They had a black hoodie on, hood up, blue jeans, and a dark blue bandana across there face. They also had a bat that looked like it had been through a lot.

"Why don't I?," I asked, looking back down at the river. "Because I'll go to hell? Not a single person would care if I jumped and I know my life's not going to get any better so why shouldn't I?"

"Because," The person replied. "It hurts like hell when you land." This answer surprised me, causing me to look back at the person.

"You've jumped off a bridge before?" I asked after a moment of silence. The figure turned to look at me. I could now see a small section of red hair that wasn't fully tucked into the hood.

"Jumped? No. Fell when I was at a low point in my life? Maybe." She said, her voice slightly muffled by the bandanna. "And believe me, it hurts. The river here is shallow enough so that when you jump from here you hit the bottom." She explained.

"You survived a jump from here?" I asked.

"Yep. Kinda wish I didn't though." She said. " I wouldn't want anyone to experience that pain. So at least sit-down and think about it before you jump."

I stared at the water again before sitting down on the rail, my legs dangling off it.

"What's your name?" She asked.

"Y/N," I said, swinging my legs back and forth. "What about you? What your name?"

She didn't answer, almost as if she was trying to remember something. "It doesn't matter. Why do you want to jump anyways?" She asked.

I sighed. "I just want the pain to stop. I don't want to be alone anymore." I said, looking down at the water.

"Well you're not alone now, are you?" She asked.

"I guess not but I'm alone quite a bit."

She went silent. "How about I walk you home tonight and if you really want to jump you can do it tomorrow?" She asked, standing up straight.

I looked down at the water and back up at her. "Alright," I said as I climbed back over.

I began to lead the way home, her following with the bat hung over her shoulder. She looked like she was in a gang. The way she walked, held herself, the bat, the bandanna. She looked like she could kill someone and not bat an eye.

We arrived at my house and I opened the door.

"Thank you for walking me home," I said looking back at her.

"No problem." She said turning away and walking off. "Ignore your demons. They get annoyed when you do that." She said as she disappeared from my line of sight.

I was confused by what she said but I went back inside to the warmth of my home and plopped down on the bed. "I never got her name." I thought as I slowly drifted off to sleep.

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Not as bad as the other one, (you guys have cringe and it’s still better then my writing)

@Rainy_day_artist_classic group

I had something else… but I can't remember what it was! It was honestly really bad if memory serves me- wait no! It was alright actually. If I wrote it better then it's gonna be alright. I'll probably just get it up here and get criticized to see how bad I really am at writing.

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I'd be interested to see it! In the meantime, I just found an old crossover fic I did when I was like thirteen. Artemis Fowl meets the H.I.V.E books (which honestly aren't half bad if you like stories with lots of action and Cool Spy Stuff in them.) I'mma just drop the prologue and first chapter here since it's pretty lengthy and convoluted ^^;

Part 1
Prologue

"The meeting of G.L.O.V.E. will come to order," said Dr. Maximillian Nero, rapping his knuckles sharply on the table.
The other members of the Global League of Villainous Enterprises stopped chatting and turned their full attention toward Dr. Nero. He looked around at the, frankly, sinister array of faces in front of him and said, "Today it is with sorrow that I report the loss of Mr. O'Gordan, our representative from Ireland. He died yesterday at nine o' clock from natural causes, or so we assume." There were a few quiet snorts from around the table. "And now, it is my pleasure to introduce to you the new representative from Ireland, Mr. Artemis Fowl."
The double doors behind Dr. Nero swung open, and Mr. Fowl himself strode purposefully into the room and stopped silently beside Dr. Nero's chair, bowing slightly. If one had looked closely, one might have seen him cast a rather significant glance at the chair on which Dr. Nero was presiding. But no one noticed. They were too busy staring in disbelief at the new council member.
"He's just a boy," whispered Ricardo Chavez, representative of South America. Mr. Fowl heard, and gave Mr. Ricardo a look that ran his blood cold. He knew he would never forget that look.
Dr. Nero had viewed the council's reaction with keen interest. Now he rapped the table again to dispel the low murmurs of consternation. "Mr. Fowl is the latest in a long line of noble figures involved in rather below-the-radar activities. If I may have the liberty of saying so, I believe that Mr. Fowl would have made his ancestors proud. He has engineered and carried out successfully around one hundred noteworthy plots to date, runs and maintains the entire Fowl manor virtually alone, and has designed, created, and patented more than twenty-seven very significant inventions, all under separate identities, of course." The others nodded. Of course. "In fact, I believe that all this qualifies him for a seat at G.L.O.V.E.'s ruling table. All in favor."
Dr. Nero sat back. He hadn't told them that one of the main reasons he had even considered Mr. Fowl was because Fowl himself had managed to discover the existence of G.L.O.V.E. quite by himself, and had in fact offered himself up as a member. Then there was the fact that he had managed to avoid being noticed for so many years. Such potential would have been eagerly snapped up by recruiting squads before now. No, he wasn't going to tell the rest of the council this. He didn't need that kind of panic.
There was a pause as the representatives made their decisions. Then almost simultaneously, they set down their votes. Dr. Nero counted. Mr. Fowl had won by one vote. Very close. Rather too close, in his opinion. There would be arguments about this in the future.
"Very well. Mr. Fowl has won a seat at the ruling council. Congratulations, Artemis."
He shook Artemis by the hand. Mr. Fowl looked him right in the eye and said, "It is a priveledge to be chosen, Maximillian."
There was an awkward pause. No civilian was supposed to even know Dr. Nero's first name, let alone speak it aloud.
The pause lasted another few heartbeats, then the boy gave a small bow and took his seat. Everyone else conversed in low murmurs for a moment until Dr. Nero called for order once more, and the council got down to the day's business.
Watching the other representatives, Artemis smiled quietly to himself. Finally, a seat at the ruling council of G.L.O.V.E.! Surely this was the peak of his career. Then he scolded himself. Of course it wasn't. Soon he would be sitting in the very seat that Dr. Nero was now occupying. And the world would be at his feet.

Chapter 1

Three weeks later
Artemis was rapidly achieving his goal of impressing on the other council members that he was not to be taken lightly. Already Mr. Chavez had had to be temporarily replaced after he had made a rather cutting jibe to do with Mr. Fowl's age. A few days later he had woken in the night to see a man mountain looming over his bed. Not one of the security systems had been triggered. On the way out he had finally been sighted only to vanish into thin air. Most unnerving. No one had even got a good look at his face. Not that it mattered. Everyone knew who had sent him. That was the point.
Everything in his plan for world domination was running smoothly until that fateful day when he became interested in H.I.V.E., the Higher Institute of Villainous Education.
He instantly suggested at the next council meeting that he be introduced as a substitute teacher, flaunting his record as proof that he could probably teach any class except ones to do with the Henchman stream. The members reluctantly agreed, and just like that, Artemis was in.
On his first day as a teacher, he was teaching a class on practical technology. He took it a little bit farther than that.
"Today, class," he began, steepling his fingers in front of him at the desk, "we will be asking questions."
There was a bit of murmuring, then a girl with freckles, red hair, and a business-like expression stood up and raised her hand.
Artemis consulted the other teacher's notes. "Yes. Miss Brand. What is it?"
"What about the Professor? Where is he?"
Artemis smiled. Not a very reassuring gesture. "Professor Pike is unable to teach at the moment. I believe that one of the other teachers required his assistance."
She sat down, looking unsatisfied.
"Now, back to today's lesson. I have reviewed your progress over the past month and I must say I am impressed. But have any of you actually attempted to design a device completely by yourself? I think not. That is for sixth years. Ridiculous of course. You are just as intelligent as any H.I.V.E. graduate out there. You simply need to exercise your creativity and ingenuity. Now. Since we don't seem to have the materials for a full blown design straight from scratch, I am going to supply you with an already designed device and I want you to pick out any flaws in the make and see if you can improve it at all. You may come up to collect your assignments."
He gestured to a neat stack of papers on the desk next to him and went back to his textbook, occasionally writing a note in the margins and chuckling gently.
The students nervously took a paper from the desk, quickly discovering two things. One, no two papers were alike, and two, these gadgets were unlike anything any of them had ever seen. There were several confused glances at Artemis, who studiously ignored them. Then Miss Brand's lab partner, a sharp-looking boy with spiky white hair, stood up and raised his hand.
"Sir?"
Artemis felt a glow of satisfaction at the use of the word 'sir'. He looked up, rewarding the student with his full attention. "Yes, Mr. Malpense?"
"Who made these? Professor Pike never mentioned them."
Artemis stared steadily at him. "And for good reason. Professor Pike is not aware that these particular instruments exist. I made them."
There was a pause as the two of them locked eyes. For a long moment they sized each other up, then Artemis raised his eyebrows and Mr. Malpense reluctantly sat back down.
"Very well. To continue. Is there anything else I have to take care of?"
Everyone hastily shook their heads and returned to their projects.

At the end of the class everyone came forward and turned in their papers. Artemis viewed each one briefly, snorting at particularly far-fetched ideas. When he came to Miss Brand's paper he nodded approvingly. When he picked up Mr. Malpense's contribution, he raised his eyebrows and stared at it for a moment, before quietly stowing it in his pocket once the class had left. He was about to leave when he paused, went back to his desk, quickly graded all of them, wrote the results in the logbook, and dumped the papers in the trash, except Miss Brand's and Mr. Malpense's, which he took back to his office and tacked on his bulletin board. He must have a closer look at them sometime. Who knows, maybe he would even make the alterations they suggested. He'd have to think about it.

(It only goes downhill from here, although Artemis's attempted coup ended up being quite a wild ride. TL;DR: The Artemis Fowl series and the HIVE series fit together way too well and I couldn't resist XD)

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It’s great but there is a cringe fanfic I wrote, it was a joke fanfic but still.