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Name: Nikita Intihar
Gender: Female
Age: 25
Species: Casket, machine casket variant. Human in appearance. Hidden species.
Nationality: Slovenian
Employment: Employed. Previously military in Slovenia.
Appearance: 5’10” woman with dark brown hair going to her shoulders. Nikita’s hair is slightly curly, her eyes a royal blue. Her hair sweeps into her forehead slightly, almost like bangs.
She’s got fair, leaning towards even pale skin. Her build could be described as lightly athletic, more muscle than the average person, but for what it’s worth the ‘muscle’ is artificial as is the rest of her Casket, given she’s mechanical (thus cannot gain or lose any muscle.) She has somewhat of a rectangular body shape.
Her true, mechanical self is quite the web, carefully intertwined wires and gears make up her mechanical undercoat which she rarely reveals. She’s not exactly pretty as a machine either, more so something out of a horror game if anything.
True appearance: Her true appearance is reptilian, although with how she’s built it seems to be mammalian. Typically four, long legs, and a long, crocodilian like tail. Long snout, teeth sticking out of the bottom jaw that’s usually parted. Long quills stick out of her back. Takes on default casket appearance in terms of colouring, with her highlight being light blue.
Clothing: Usually wears long jackets of a dark red colour. In fact, her wardrobe could be easily described as dark red shades. Light boots and long gloves, all her style. Occasionally a black scarf if it’s cold or she wants the extra comfort. When it’s particularly hot, a short sleeve sweater and black pants are all her style.
Personality: While generally reserved, Nikita holds no qualms against going into other’s business. She’s a curious person at heart. Mostly well mannered and calm, it’s a rare thing to be able to completely tick her off, so if you do, congratulations. While she enjoys making new friends, she’s adverse to physical contact of any sorts, and will typically avert from holding or shaking hands during greetings, opting for a simple nod instead. Other than that, once you breach her silent shell, she’s quite sociable, even if she does (sometimes) have trouble with carrying a conversation.
Skills: Tactical stuff. She’s got a few measures in being able to be stealthy, too, as well as combat (with a few different guns and hand to hand stuff.) She can also cook.
Weaknesses: She tends to overthink things, thus miscommunications can happen. She’s also not very loud, which may be a pro, but for the most part, she’s not willing to speak up out of her bubble thus she can sometimes keep valuable information hidden. Has some form of anxiety, correlating to that.
Reason: Nikita came to Lorenzai because it was a new taste of life. After her old job went down, she decided she wanted something else, and thus decided to give Lorenzai, the city she’d heard so much of a visit. Only time will tell if she takes up permanent residence there.