forum Welcome to Lorenzai City _ Closed ❌
Started by Deleted user
tune
Edit topic

people_alt 52 followers

Deleted user

City Lorenzai.

A massive, perhaps overpopulated city. Home to creatures humans a century ago could’ve only dreamed of meeting. Or feared, rather. Because not all creatures of Lorenzai are nice.

Not all are mean, either. There’s measures put in place to ensure crime going on in Lorenzai stays in Lorenzai, and when it stays in one city, it’s easier to deal with.

Many go to Lorenzai. Humans, modified humans, Caskets, beastmen, even machines and shapeshifters see a place in the city. Sometimes, it’s seeking shelter, a safer place. Other times, it’s a job. And even then, some just happened to want to live there.

With a foul crime brewing at its shores, what will you do? What will you do at Lorenzai?

———

Salutations! I wanted to try a different style of rp for my first rp on here. There will be no template; not right away at least. I will only ask that you present a writing sample, and that you are comfortable with mature topics.

The way the ‘template’ will work is you ‘registering’ yourself into the city’s database. You get to input how your character looks. At the end, I will have your ‘template’ filled, and ask if there’s any direct modifications you wish to input. If so, feel free to. If not, then we proceed to the city!

I myself will be controlling the inhabitants of Lorenzai. The main plot of this is a crime of some type; your choice is how fast you want to go after that crime or not. Sound good?

Remember; have a writing sample at hand.

Deleted user

Sure! Do you have a writing sample? Preferable one with dialogue.

Deleted user

May I?

If Mojack doesn’t qualify, maybe, but I’m waiting on their writing sample.

@Mojack group

Sure! Do you have a writing sample? Preferable one with dialogue.

“I would use one of these on you,” Tirtan looked at his orange ring, “and as much as I’d like to use this one before Nuranour comes to pry it away from me,” he looks at the ruby ring, “but I think that would be overkill, so I’ll give you the mercy of not.” Tirtan clasped his hands together, looking at what could’ve been the sun in the sky, but it was not that. “You’ve already put on a show with Neohata, unfortunately I was not there to witness it, and neither were my people.” Behind him, his ‘people’ cheer and whir, and Tirtan waits until they quiet down before speaking up again.
“So I’d like for you to put on a show for me. Show me what you can do, Nameless One. Show me your skill. Show me your power.” He leans forwards. “Perhaps we will see a new one joining the ranks?” He asks his crowd.

Deleted user

Looks good!
Sorry to anyone else who wanted to join.

@Mojack Do you have any further questions, or would you like to begin the character creation process?

Deleted user

A Casket is like an alien..they’re only called aliens simply because no one knows where they came from, and they’re so unnatural it seems like the only reasonable response.
Caskets hide their true forms in a ‘casket,’ which is typically a human body, but a casket can be any of the following species I mentioned in the bold section of the main post.

Most caskets are received poorly and thus don’t reveal themselves as such, others are more bold with their identities.

True forms of caskets are typically a black colour reflecting almost all light, with one highlight, a bright colour that marks the eyes, insides, etc. They are more animal like, and usually have a shape they hover around, but can change form at will.

Most caskets will have ‘human’ or ‘Beastman’ on their identification papers written down as opposed to casket; even the ones that are bold about their identity.

Deleted user

Okay!
The character creation will essentially work like this: there will be a question and maybe an explanation. No need to enter anything extra unless needed to explain something, just enter the answer.
———
What is your (full) name?

Deleted user

Species?
(!) The species that you can be are in bold on the main post.
(!) If you choose Casket, state what species your Casket is.
E.G.
Species: Casket
Casket species: Jackal beastman

Deleted user

Nationality?
(!) The countries here are normal. Choose whatever their country of origin was from.

Deleted user

Employment?


Note: some machines have the opportunity to look more human. Are you a more human-like machine, or do you opt to look more mechanical?

@Mojack group

Currently unemployed, though had a previous job in the military of Slovenia.
Looks like a human, for the most part.

Deleted user

Appearance? Your true appearance will be looked upon later.


Note: Some Caskets hide that they are a Casket on their identification files. Will you choose to hide your species?