hello there! i have a story plot idea that ive been working on and want to flesh out. Mind helping a girl out? I have some characters as well but there will be some room for choices and things you can change. This is a straight relationship romance but some of the side characters(or NPC's for the sake of this Rp are [and can be made] LGBTQ+ characters.)
anyways heres some rules:
-dont take over my rp dude. its not cool, its annoying.
-Cursing is fine but please use semi sparingly
-stick to the plot but dont rush it. obviously this isnt a complete plot so there is wiggle room and room for improvement.
-feed back is accepted and appreciated but that doesnt mean im going to change my plot, dont get offended. i promise im listening,and probably taking note of your feedback, but maybe not acting upon it.
-enjoy yourself!
-For stalkers after rp is closed: feedback is welcome and appreciated from you as well but please PM me instead of just adding in your opinions in the middle of the rp, its a little rude.
Ill give a character sheet and the plot when i get someone to help me out :)
Thank you for your time and reading -Payten
is there anything i need to do?
yes and no. which gender do you prefer to be?
and also here’s a basis if the plot:
This girl goes to a party with her boyfriend and he rapes her, she ends up pregnant. then she breaks up w him and meets a new boy. he’s really nice and then he finds out she’s pregnant. he takes responsibility and tells her mother it’s his when they sit down to discuss it. and basically that but there’s a few things that pop up along the way and upset the plot a little bit obviously in the end everything ends up okay and the pair end up together. it’s basic and the ending is obvious but i think it’ll be good and with little twist and turns every now and again. also it was a christmas party and all the teen characters for the most part are half way through their senior year.
thats cool. i don't care what gender i am.
okie dokie. well i typically play the female characters if that’s alright with you.
okay well let me get a template. i’ll fill in some of it but you can fill in some too
Name: Rylan Anderson
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Clothing: (something nice and/ or sporty plz)
Personality: kind, considerate, caring, over protective of the ones he loves
Hobbies: taking care of Paris, Emma, and his mother.
Extracurriculars: theater, basketball, football
Best friend: Brennan McHale
Siblings: younger sister; Emma: 16.
Background: His father consumes himself in work and is hardly ever around, his mother suffers from cancer and is bed ridden and spends a lot of time in the hospital. his family doesn’t come around much except for his fathers sister whom is 21. Rylan is the man of the house and has done a lot of parenting. Emma is very independent but very close to her brother.
feel free to fill in any blanks and add on to what i’ve written, just try not to change what’s already there.
Name: Rylan Anderson
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Clothing: (something nice and/ or sporty plz)
Personality: kind, considerate, caring, over protective of the ones he loves
Hobbies: taking care of Paris, Emma, and his mother.
Extracurriculars: theater, basketball, football
Best friend: Brennan McHale
Siblings: younger sister; Emma: 16.
Background: His father consumes himself in work and is hardly ever around, his mother suffers from cancer and is bed ridden and spends a lot of time in the hospital. his family doesn’t come around much except for his fathers sister whom is 21. Rylan is the man of the house and has done a lot of parenting. Emma is very independent but very close to her brother.
feel free to fill in any blanks and add on to what i’ve written, just try not to change what’s already there.
shouldn't he be kinda a loner because his father's always gone and his mom has cancer? he seems really popular and kind of like a Gary Sue with family problems? i think the rp would be better if he was like a loner and had to open up to the girl to help her. (not trying to steal/take over the rp. just trying to make playing Rylan easier and more interesting)
actually thats the point of his character more of less. His character is kinda bland but he grows as a person and becomes more complex as the story progresses and he hits more bumps in the road. hes like water in a glass and eventually gets poured out over a gravel pathway, if that makes sense.
Random person here. Just some advice. Ditch the cancer. Cancer is the kind of thing that should take over the plot. It’s all of a sudden the most important thing most of the time. And I doubt you want that.
thank you, @"The Althalosian". i appreciate it. i’ll look into it.
