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(not really
I'm confused because you said 'Connor grinned wickedly and watched', which makes no sense considering his predicament)
(not really
I'm confused because you said 'Connor grinned wickedly and watched', which makes no sense considering his predicament)
(I thought he could move inside the stuff. If he can't, ignore that. Sorry!)
Raven couldn't stand Connor's pained groans. She knew that there were her father's men trying to corner her, but she ignored them. "Stop! Father, please!"
"Shut up, child!"
"You can break my soul, beat me, hurt me, kill me if you want. But for the love of God, don't hurt him."
"Well, I was planning on it anyway. But since you asked nicely… I'll kill him humanely," Raven's father said, making a gun appeared.
Connor watched.
(? I'm really sorry, I just don't know what Connor should be doing, especially if he can't move.)
(don't worry, I have it planned.
Btw, this reply will be long)
"NO!" Raven screamed as her father shot Connor. She fell to her knees and a blast of chaos was sent out, knocking the men to the floor (like Scarlet Witch). She cried as Connor's body shook as the bullets entered, watching him fall to the ground. She ran over and pulled his body onto her knees, sobbing. With his head in her elbow, she looked at her father. "Bring him back! Please!"
"No can do."
"Take me instead! Bring him back and you can have me!" She looked upwards. "You can take control of my mind and making me fall from up there if you bring him back!"
Her father thought for a minute. "Deal." Almost immediately, Raven felt herself being taken control of as she started walking towards the place she was going to die from.
(so they are currently in a really fancy building with high ceilings.
You can bring Connor back now too. He's not under mind control tho)
Connor blinked. Where… He looked around. “Raven!” He got up and ran to her. “What are you doing? Come on, let’s get out of here!”
Raven punched Connor, then kicked him into the wall. Her father was using her hand-to-hand combat training. Inside, Raven was screaming and crying. She didn't want to do this. But she had to. She started climbing the stairs.
Connor gasped for breath, but he got up and ran after her again. He grabbed her hand. “Raven, no! You know what you’re doing! Stop it! Stop!”
Connor gasped for breath, but he got up and ran after her again. He grabbed her hand. “Raven, no! You know what you’re doing! Stop it! Stop!”
Connor gasped for breath, but he got up and ran after her again. He grabbed her hand. “Raven, no! You know what you’re doing! Stop it! Stop!”
(Sorry, App Error)
Raven then punched Connor with a super speed punch, and her kick was infused with chaos magic. She neared the landing. She knew how high she was.
Connor hit the ground and spasmed once. He was shaky, but her managed to use his telekinesis to fly up to her. He grabbed her elbows. “Raven, don’t do this!” He leaned forward and kissed her. Please work… please work…
Raven broke from her father's control just as she fell. Falling, she only pleaded for Connor. He wings felt like they were nothing as they almost curled around her body. Her arms reached for Connor, and she didn't care if she would die. As her purple hair whipped around her face, she saw tears flying upwards that she didn't know where forming. Everything seemed to be going in slow motion.
"No!" Connor screamed. He jumped off, wrapped his arms around her and used his telekinesis to slow down the fall. He slamming into the ground, taking most of the impact for her.
"You know, Raven. It's ironic," Raven's father suddenly said. "I despise you with everything I have, yet all of my power is stored inside of you. You might ask whe-wait, what are you doing?!" He stopped when he saw Raven clawing at the jewel in her forehead.
Connor moaned and saw Raven through his blurry vision. "Go, babe," he murmured.
Raven winced while taking the jewel out. It had been there for so long, and was almost embedded in her skin. She started to scream in agony as it came off her skin.
Connor spoke louder. “Come on, babe, fight it!”
Raven's screams echoed in the hall. But she finally got the jewel off her skin, though it bled. She put the jewel on then ground and then punched it with a chaos infused fist.
Connor grinned, slowly regaining himself even though his vision was still blurred. “That’s my girlfriend!” he bragged.
Raven slowly stood up. "You say that you're powerless with that jewel. I've been wanting to do something for so many years," She said, breathing heavily.
Connor rose too, standing behind her. "Tell him, Ray," he snarled.
(Rena?)
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