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@Rainy_is_back

Before finishing his question, he finished up the muffin mix and looked up once finished. "Since it's Friday, I'm assuming it's another one of the senior parties. Would you have any interest in going?" Brad asked, sticking the tray in the oven with a furrowed brow as he thought. "I believe it's a pool party… next week it's a beach luau to finish off."

@Rainy_is_back

"We can go to the store, and get you a tankini." Brad offered, knowing exactly what she was worried about. "Or you can not worry about that, as they're mostly healed by now. Considering it's been over a month." He had clearly thought this through, coming around to the living room. "No one is going to pick on you. And if they do, they're just petty."

@Rainy_is_back

Sighing weakly, Brad sat down besides her. "Fine, never mind then. If you don't want to go, I'll just stay too." He mumbled with a light shrug. Of course, he actually wanted to go, but he wouldn't. Considering he hadn't gone to any other ones, why was this different?

@Rainy_is_back

"No, I don't want to make you. Whatever you want." Brad told her, trying to cover up his own wants. "I want what you want. It's your choice baby-doll." Brad told her, insisting they did what she wanted. No matter how much he wanted something.

@Rainy_is_back

"But you won't be. So why should I go? I haven't gone to any of the other ones." Brad mumbled, forcing himself up from the couch to follow after her. "Come on, I'm not going without you, and I'm not making you go."

@Rainy_is_back

"So you're coming with me?" Brad asked, crossing his arms over his chest. "I told you, I'm not going unless you go, and I don't think you're going. I don't want you home alone… Arrow knows you're here."

@Rainy_is_back

"Look, I'm sorry I'm concerned. I just…" Brad sighed weakly, running a hand down his face. "And what if Thomas goes to the party? I- I'm not going unless you come. I've already made up my mind. I'm not changing it."

@Rainy_is_back

Brad fell quiet, looking over to her with a tight frown. "I'm sorry I want you to be safe, and not be bored alone. I'm sorry I'd rather spend time with my girlfriend, then go to some stupid party. More of your friends would be there anyways." Brad muttered, leaving the room in a bit of frustration.

@Rainy_is_back

Cringing a bit at the slammed door, he sighed knowing she was probably going to go to Thomas's house to cry her eyes out. Lately, she had been so irritable. Brad had no clue why, but he was set to figure it out.

@Rainy_is_back

As Caroline was walking outside, the weather seemed to be nice. It was warm and sunny, every once in awhile a soft breeze floated through. The perfect day for a pool party. Which of course, worked perfectly for tonight. Not many people were out on the streets, the traffic not super busy in this part of town. There were no tourist attractions, so why would it be?

@Star_Girls_puppers_was_attacked

Caroline had decided to go to the party she sat for a while but people eventually did start picking on her so she threw a jacket on and some shorts and sat on a stool not having a great time but brad wanted to come

@Rainy_is_back

(I… but Brad's still at the house? And doesn't know..? I kinda thought it was later in the day that they would go to the party..?)

@Rainy_is_back

(Nor can I. There's actually nothing for me to do right now, and I don't really know how to write Brad in without it seeming contradictory.)
(What I mean is, basically he can't come. Not unless Caroline texts or calls him. And as that would be really random, and out there, we have to figure another way around it. He said he wouldn't go unless Caroline went with him. And I don't feel like Caroline calling him makes sense. She's still frustrated with him. So now she's alone at this party she didn't want to be at, Brad having no clue at all. It just doesn't make sense)
(You could have her go see her friends at the bar, or maybe Collins/Thomas. You could have her go consult with Lilly and or Amber. You could have her go to Emmy. Having her go to the party just doesn't seem to work in this situation. The longer we stretch this out, the longer more entertaining chapters we have. If we keep just cutting straight to the next thing, with nothing in between, it's not much of a story. Just a bunch of scenes meshed together.)
(We need to make sure to think this through logically.)

@Rainy_is_back

(Sorry… I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. I was just trying to make a point)
(Though, wouldn't it make sense to have Caroline go to someone's house?)