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@Sugar-Lover

This isn’t really a short story but more of a start of my book but I don’t know where else to put it and I need motivation so, here it is:

Tae POV

Beep

Beep

Beep

I sigh as I wake up to my annoying alarm clock. Another boring same old day here. It’s always the same, wake up, go to school, go home, do homework, sleep, with food breaks in between. No time to play games, watch tv, and what are friends. Here it’s always work, work and just little bit of extra work.

I drag my tired body out of bed and into the bathroom. Another sigh escapes my mouth when I look into the mirror to see my blonde hair a mess. I died it blonde instead of my boring black hair because I was tired of everybody being the same. I just want to different. But no. Everyone has to be a doctor or lawyer or something smart like that. Me, I want to be saxophonist. But, I guess I’m going to inherit my parents business and run that.

I finger comb my hair quickly and run out of the bathroom to get some clothes. I grab the first thing in sight and throw it on, which is my adidas pants and my red, black, and white Gucci shirt. Almost tripping down the stairs, I yell goodbye to my parents and grab something random for breakfast.

@WriteOutofTime

i love it!
i just adore the general idea of two heroes working side by side
and finding out they've been close as civilians too
and you've pulled it off so well
great work :D

@Imperfect_Autumn group

i love it!
i just adore the general idea of two heroes working side by side
and finding out they've been close as civilians too
and you've pulled it off so well
great work :D

Thanks so much! XD

@Natasha

(I KNOW THAT CHARACTER AND HAVE READ THE EXCEPT 20 BILLION TIMES)
(Lol)

(I'm guessing that means you liked it? In which case, thanks! Lol.)

Yes, Emma
I have already told you I loved it
Like
A trillion times

@kat_i_am

This isn’t really a short story but more of a start of my book but I don’t know where else to put it and I need motivation so, here it is:

Tae POV

Beep

Beep

Beep

I sigh as I wake up to my annoying alarm clock. Another boring same old day here. It’s always the same, wake up, go to school, go home, do homework, sleep, with food breaks in between. No time to play games, watch tv, and what are friends. Here it’s always work, work and just little bit of extra work.

I drag my tired body out of bed and into the bathroom. Another sigh escapes my mouth when I look into the mirror to see my blonde hair a mess. I died it blonde because I was tired of everybody being the same. I just want to different. But no. Everyone has to be a doctor or lawyer or something smart like that. Me, I want to be saxophonist. But, I guess I’m going to inherit my parents business and run that.

I finger comb my hair quickly and run out of the bathroom to get some clothes. I grab the first thing in sight and throw it on, which is my adidas pants and my red, black, and white Gucci shirt. Almost tripping down the stairs, I yell goodbye to my parents and grab something random for breakfast.

ooh I like the second paragraph (not counting the alarm clock beeps lol)
I feel like that's gonna be v good for your story
some solid characterization there
sorry that's all the feedback I have rn lol
it is v short, you're right, lol

@Imperfect_Autumn group

(I KNOW THAT CHARACTER AND HAVE READ THE EXCEPT 20 BILLION TIMES)
(Lol)

(I'm guessing that means you liked it? In which case, thanks! Lol.)

Yes, Emma
I have already told you I loved it
Like
A trillion times

…Did I already send it to you…?
Or did you read it on Wattpad?
Omgoldfish, my memory sucks…

@Natasha

…Did I already send it to you…?
Or did you read it on Wattpad?
Omgoldfish, my memory sucks…

Both Emma, both.

@Imperfect_Autumn group

…Did I already send it to you…?
Or did you read it on Wattpad?
Omgoldfish, my memory sucks…

Both Emma, both.

…Oops…
Like I said, my memory sucks.
I literally can't remember so many things…

@kat_i_am

I ONLY HAVE BAD VIBES ABT MYSELF RIGHT NOW

LIKE

SERIOUSLY

HELP

HEY HONEY
I LOVE YOU
so we're gonna do a few things to help you out
first of all- change your username
you are not broken, at least not permanently. so don't label yourself as broken. don't stick yourself inside a box. they can be hard to climb out of.
you are wonderful, and I know you are a woman of faith. So rely on God. He will heal you.
Matthew 11:28-30
28 Come unto me, all ye that labour and are heavy laden, and I will give you rest.
29 Take my yoke upon you, and learn of me; for I am meek and lowly in heart: and ye shall find rest unto your souls.
30 For my yoke is easy, and my burden is light.
Second, listen to your gospel/christian music. It will help, I swear. And listen to other songs that make you happy. Drown out the negative thoughts with positive music. Sing along. Don't let the bad thoughts take up any real estate. They don't deserve it.
You are going to be okay, okay? I love you a lot, everyone on here loves you a lot. Storms never stick around forever. Cry it out, ride it out. You'll be okay and pretty soon a rainbow will be shining down. : D

Deleted user

Okay, this one is really short, but here goes!

Change the Past

I was cold and unfeeling until I met him. I was a freak.

And now, I may never grow old with him. I may never see him again.

I was shy and afraid to do anything out of my comfort zone, until I met her. I was a useless idiot.

And now, she's dying from a gunshot wound. Dying in my arms.

If only I could change the past.

Deleted user

Wow…
That was sad but really good.

Bit of a prologue to a novel I'm writing, actually.