Do you reflect on others writing? ok let's reflect!!!!!!
but I have 2 rules!
ill start us off with a quick poem I wrote ast week..
You were like a star to me
beautiful from a distance.
But I never got close enough
for I had a fear of being burned
The light you emitted shown down on me
during my darkest nights
you were the one I needed then
but now its time to let you go
(Here’s one I pretty proud of)
I Promise
And for long as I am still alive, I’ll hold you in my embrace
Only death will part us in the dark, I swear the pain I’ll make it okay
For as long as you are still with me through all these stressful days
The hurt will cease, if you just believe that we can make it today
And if I will die today then you shall live on and smile always
No need to cry, keep those tears aside, your future is brighter than everyday
And I promise dear I’ll look at you from the far and destined sky
I love you my life, you are my sunshine, so for now just walk on and smile
(Here’s one I pretty proud of)
I Promise
And for long as I am still alive, I’ll hold you in my embrace
Only death will part us in the dark, I swear the pain I’ll make it okay
For as long as you are still with me through all these stressful days
The hurt will cease, if you just believe that we can make it todayAnd if I will die today then you shall live on and smile always
No need to cry, keep those tears aside, your future is brighter than everyday
And I promise dear I’ll look at you from the far and destined sky
I love you my life, you are my sunshine, so for now just walk on and smile
That's really awesome, you should be proud! i really didnt think anyone would reply tbh! you have a gift i can tell because poetry makes you feel something and this hit very close to home!
both of these poems are super amazing y'all, keep it up
Thanks!
~Quote~
Light without darkness is blinding
Darkness without light is an abyss
but what happens if your in the grey? what do you feel then? ~ 7th grade me
w o w t h a t i s s o g o o d
i used to be so edgy and cringey
heres another quote
"The scientists of today think deeply instead of clearly. One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."~Nikola Tesla
i used to be so edgy and cringey
heres another quote
"The scientists of today think deeply instead of clearly. One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."~Nikola Tesla
OH MY GOD THIS IS MEEEE
This is a poem I wrote a couple years ago. It doesn't flow and it's short…it really sucks, but I guess it kinda means something to me…that's why I like it.
The Game of Life
Life and I are playing a game,
It had to do with my soul and their claim,
They tried to hide that they suddenly cheated,
I started an argument, it became heated.
They refused they ever did such a thing,
I showed them proof, they confessed with a grin.
Their eyes filled with a wicked hellfire flame,
And tells me bluntly, “I never play by the rules of the game.”
Lol
there was this book i used to love when i was just starting middle school, and this is a quote from it that i still haven't gotten out of my head:
Meet me at the edge of the world
Their eyes filled with a wicked hellfire flame,
And tells me bluntly, “I never play by the rules of the game.”
I really like this part
Their eyes filled with a wicked hellfire flame,
And tells me bluntly, “I never play by the rules of the game.”I really like this part
Thank you! I really wanted to make Life seem like a relentless cheater.
ooh this looks cool
(This one was one I made last year, not that great unfortunately)
Past Winter
At last, once again
The song that I sang
Reflected against
The surface of the moon
The scars that I hide
In the words I despise
Hopefully, you will see
All the pain that’s inside
From spring to the fall
From hot turned to cold
My heart and my soul
Couldn’t withstand such a change
The seasons, the cycle
I hope will end
For the winter I hate
Shall never come back again
All the tears that I cried
Have been frozen in time
The lunar reflected
The solar ignited
The fields, the songs
The righteous, the wrong
I don’t care…
Unless you are there…
And I run, and I run
And I chase after the sun
To the endless horizon
Where you were supposed to be
All I see, just a feather
Tender and sweet
As the clouds, pull you away…
From me…
Oh…my…gosh…that is so good. I love it!
From Me To You
You have the roar of the lion
And a heart of gold
You have the mind of an artist
With stories never told
You’re filled with desires
And your passion runs deep
You have the strength to move mountains
Yet you stay on your seat
You can start with nothing
And you will still win
When life wants to break you
Stand strong and lift your chin
Stare at life with your eyes
As it tries to kill
The passion deep inside
But it never will
Whenever you are down
Listen to my call
Your story’s worth a thousand words
And your life means all
So cut the rope then
Then throw away the knife
You’ll win against this battle
If you’re still willing to fight
Even if no one’s with you
Remember this one man
The one who wrote this poem
Will cheer you from where he’s at
He’ll be sitting in silent
Watching you walk on
From afar, he’ll be smiling
That at last you are strong
"Sometimes, the world leaves us behind
Other times, we leave the world behind." - Quote by me.
Your quote has a lot of honesty. It's really good. It reminded me of this quote lol
"When the world turns its back on you, you turn your back on the world!" -Timon (Lion King)
Here’s a thing:
Why do I still come back?
Why do I let you get into my head?
And still I can’t tell
Whether I’m just being paranoid
Or you’re using me like you used others
Is it all in my head?
I want to believe that you didn’t mean it
That it wasn’t your fault
But people talk
And I let myself believe them
As I wait for a reply
I don’t know whether I want one or not
And my feelings still aren’t sorted out
But I can’t tell anyone
Because they wouldn’t understand
And I still can’t decide whether I want to run
Or not
Is it all my fault?
There’s no way to know
So the question remains:
Let you in and risk it happening again
Or shut you out and wonder “what if”?
Why do I still care?
^^^
Are you okay?
(Yet somehow I can relate)
Some poems. I posted them on other threads, though feel like those threads died
So might as well repost them…
Hollow
I am hollow
There is no soul left in this body
Chest open, no heart to be found
I am devoid of all emotions
I am empty
The lives I take have no meaning to me
Eyes cold, no life evident
I have lost all feeling
I am a shell
You weep in sorrow
Scales so cold, no warmth do I give
I do not understand wrong from right
There is no hand to help me
There is no light to guide me
There is no hope left for me
There is no warmth to warm me
I am hollow
I am empty
I am a shell
i love it! the emotion in these is truely powerfull and i probs wont let this chat die, ill just spam yall
^^^
Are you okay?
(Yet somehow I can relate)
i’m fine now, thank you :)
(Title TBD)
The end is nigh
Sparks and smoke rise from below
The battlefield bathed in red
Tired are we
But no pillow to rest our head
Echoes of the fallen ring out
No way for us to live
The beast of the abyss has been released
All is lost
So here I stand, while others flee
I let them down
So here I am to reclaim my glory
The abyss roars
Yet I feel no fear
My mind is gone
Nothing can contain me any longer
I will not fade in silence
Death is the only option
To hurl oneself into the jaws of the beast
i do it deliberately
Nothing left to lose
Darkness consumes me
Yet I feel comforted by its presence
For unlike light, darkness is always there