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I've never heard of that series. Is it good?
I've never heard of that series. Is it good?
Divine Comedy is an old Classical poem written by Dante Alighieri, it's about how he has to go to the deepest depths of Hell, ascend Purgatory, and then travel up Heaven as a means to redeem himself…
That sounds amazing! I'm gonna read it someday.
Yes it is… But it's long as hell.
No pun intended
Lol, I was thinking of a book title and I'm thinking The Psychopath's Diary, does that sound interesting to you?
Yes… Very much so in fact…
Thanks, I was really unsure about it.
You got this…
I really needed to hear that thank you soo much!
Hey, it's fine… Titles are hard as fuck to come up with you know, they really are…
I know, trust me I know
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Yeah, when coming up with a title, misery is eminent.
Sitting in front of your computer, pulling at your hair ready to cry cause it's just a stupid title. I've never actually done that but I was close.
I am usually good with titles though, but sometimes…
I get it
Yeah…
What are you working on?
Oh, not much…
Just this sci-fi thing
It's called 24th Century Madhouse, and it's about a group of mercenaries who travel to other planets looking for jobs.
@shurikenwolfbadass_13, my internet was bing very weird last night. Anywhozit, thank you! I have four siblings, Angelo as the oldest, then Clara, Roane, and Andrea as the youngest. Their ability are all different, based on their personalities.
In their family, their father favored Angelo moreso than the other kids, and it showed.
Angelo liked the attention, but not when he screwed up and his dad got mad at him. Not helping is that Angelo is very volatile, to the point that he struggles not to get angry all the time. His ability is to absorb the auras of others, which can, depending on how long or malevolent/benevolent Angelo is at that moment, take their life-force, memories, and/or powers. I'll most likely retcon this a bit later, since it's a very 'all powerful' power.
Clara, as the second-oldest, always has a bone to pick with Angelo and the war tactics to do it with. She really likes to fight, but her father never noticed because he was grooming Angelo, and she was a girl. Clara can use her own aura to make different kinds of weapons, like a dagger, axe, sword, etc. Very useful.
Roane is the peacemaker. He always at least tries to stop Clara and Angelo from fighting, and tries to keep Andrea away whenever they squabble. Roane is the other half of Clara, so to speak. He's the brains, Clara's the brawn. His ability is to channel his aura inwardly to gain higher intelligence. This was vey useful in high school and college, or Roane hoped.
And finally, Andrea! My sweet naive babe. She's the very opposite of your usual youngest. Very sweet and quiet, she loves the outdoors and hates for people to fight. So her siblings stress her out almost all the time and she then retreats to the woods. Andrea can actually see people's aura, and sometimes cleanse them.
So yeah, those are the four Vigorus siblings! I love them so much.
Hey, that's badass… I don't think it's too overpowered a power.
How long does it take him to drain a power?
To what extent can he do so?
Depends on how hard the person is fighting against him. If it's for their memories and/or life-force, usually it's somewhere around five to seven minutes, in which he's completely vulnerable. If it's their power, well, it's upward to fifteen or more.
I think you've got it wrong… That's probably not powerful enough.
How would you suggest I fix it?
Maybe three minutes… Hey, but do what you want…
No, no, I'd prefer getting feedback than not :) It's hard to view my own characters with an outsider's eye, y'know?
Does he win any fights with it? Is that considered powerful compared to the usual?
Yeah, actually yes! When he would go into battle, he would immediately head straight for the commanding officers/person in charge. Draining them, and half of the time killing them, meant that the enemy soldiers would be without orders, and thusly fall apart. (I know this isn't how war works /exactly/, but I'm still trying to figure out my universe, soooo…)
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