forum Finish this Story (help with character personalities)
Started by @CW-BornConfuzzledLeftILoveYa
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@Angel with a music box

Alyssa froze, her heart beating a million miles a second. She felt Anne's hands clinging to her shirt sleeve as they crouched behind the aisle of chips.
She could see the man's legs through the shelves, and if she raised her self up just the slightest bit, she could see his ski mask too.
Honestly, considering her luck, a man robbing the store she was at while she was getting chips should have been expected.
She crept down the aisle slowly, dragging a terrified Anne with her. They needed to get out of here before that psycho started using the pistol he was pointing at the cashier.
But when he started yelling, and Alyssa knew that she had to do something about it before things started getting really dangerous.
Looking around she saw the frozen section. With footsteps as silent as a mouse she crept towards it, letting Anne stay behind. She carefully slid open the freezer and grabbed the nearest item.
With all the strength she could muster, she charged forward, letting out a battle cry worthy of the gods.
The robber was hit head on with a frozen steak.
The cops arrived shortly after.

@CW-BornConfuzzledLeftILoveYa

Otis was looking at some candy for his friends birthday when he saw someone walk in. He didn't think much of it, until someone yelled "HE HAS A GUN!" Otis flipped around and fell into a sitting position on the floor. 8Why me, Lord, why me?* Otis prayed as the robber moved towards him. He took a protective pose and curled up, silently crying. The robber walked away. After about 10 minutes of having their shoes, coats, and phones put in the middle of the floor, the cops arrived shortly after the man was hit on the head with a random frozen steak.

@Wry_Wyvern

Alec walked into the store, looking around at all the terrified customers. I'm not happy to be here either, he thought. To think that I've sunk so low as to rob a convenience store. Anyway, let's get this over wi-
Out of nowhere, a screaming girl charged at him and smacked him in the head with a frozen steak.

That was a couple of years ago, and Jax and Saren still haven't let him forget it…

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Teo was shopping for some icecream when someone pulled a gun out and told him to drop his money."Stap asking me for money you useless paperclips!" he said in his strong italian accent he then walked out of the store

@CW-BornConfuzzledLeftILoveYa

Alec walked into the store, looking around at all the terrified customers. I'm not happy to be here either, he thought. To think that I've sunk so low as to rob a convenience store. Anyway, let's get this over wi-
Out of nowhere, a screaming girl charged at him and smacked him in the head with a frozen steak.

That was a couple of years ago, and Jax and Saren still haven't let him forget it…

I LOVE how you did the POV of the robber