forum Does this sound like a Weird Motive?

Started March 07, 2019 by @Musical_Queen

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I'm not good at writing creepy stuff, can you tell me if this is creepy?

She put on a mask and hid in children's closets, lying to them, saying she was protecting them from the monsters. After weeks of bonding with the children, she would ask them for two favors, one, to draw her and let her keep it, and two, when she left, to light a candle for her so she knows they are safe. The kids would happily comply to their friend's orders. She would take the pictures and help the children light the candles. Once they had fallen asleep, she would tip over the candle and let the house burn down with everyone inside. She would then take the picture, copy it, and leave it for the police to find, letting them know it was her. What she did with the other copy was unknown.

Hey, that's really good! I think it's pretty creepy and could turn into a great plot.

What about motive though?

I don't really see the reasoning behind why she does what she does, but I think that with a nice fleshed-out backstory an idea could easily emerge.

ooooh that's super creepy I love it

You're right, it is a bit weird, but I think there's a lot of potential in this story. The way it's written out almost reminds me of old folk tales in a way.

I have no clue what to call her thoufh

I personally like it.