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( So just magically appear out of nowhere?)
( So just magically appear out of nowhere?)
(You were on Essar's ship. It took off and joined up with Jana's)
Jana put on hand on her hip as she turned to face the window, keeping an eye out for any imperial ships. "We're rebels. So did you get the package Admiral Ackbar asked for Shay?"
" Yup. "
"Excellent."
(Fixed.)
( I don't know what I am doing so sorry for the crap.)
(I forgot what my character's name is and is too lazy to look.) sat on the chair waiting for (People, idk.) to jump on. The imperials were getting too close for comfort. "Anytime now people." She said nervously.
:)
Essar arched an eyebrow. "Hmm. You're mighty foolish to be throwing that word around at this time. I mean, what with patrols and everything increased and bounty hunters offered large sums for handing in rebels."
( I don't know what I am doing so sorry for the crap.)
(I forgot what my character's name is and is too lazy to look.) sat on the chair waiting for (People, idk.) to jump on. The imperials were getting too close for comfort. "Anytime now people." She said nervously.
(Is your character on her own or what? Your paragraph isn't very clear.)
(Your character's name is Kulia)
( IDK whats happening….sooooo im making things up so sorry if I am wrong.)
" Hey guys there are imperials coming. what do you want to do." She shouted.
( I don't know anymore………………………………………………… frick my special needs are getting the best of me.)
Essar turned. "Make the jump to hyperspace!" He hollered.
( Letme do my homework and take my pills. One sec.)
Jana sighed. "Yes, I know that all too well. But, seeing as Shayeve and I have learned out lesson before, we have taken precautions."
Jana sighed. "Yes, I know that all too well. But, seeing as Shayeve and I have learned out lesson before, we have taken precautions."
"Oh yeah, like what?" High-5 muttered.
Kulia nodded immediately "Alright, hold on tight." She yelled back as she pushed the controls forward and made the jump to hyperspace at random. Now relaxed she headed down to where the others were. ( Soooooooo….. watcha characters talking about?)
Shayeve pulled them into hyperspace. "Craters, Jana your new friend is pretty jumpy." Jana snorted. "Tell me about it."
(Jana and Shayeve just revealed they're rebels)
( I am confused are y'all on seperate ships?)
( ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh and essars the bounty hunter?)
(No, their ships are connected.)
Name: Jya (Pronounced "Jee-Uh")
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Species: (Please post a link to an image of your species if you aren't human.) Twi'lek http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Twi%27lek
Planet of Origin: (If it isn't a well known planet please link image) Tattoine (Will add backstory)
Appearance: Green skin color, amber brown eyes, taller than most.
Clothes:
Weapons: (Please put type of weapon and again, please post image) found a lightsaber, purple in color. https://orig00.deviantart.net/7599/f/2011/019/8/3/mace_windu_lightsaber_by_hardcoredrummer-d37kv7d.jpg (Saber looks similar to that) Uses a blaster instead because she is afraid of her abilities. https://i.pinimg.com/originals/c6/67/49/c6674929a5f946cece63f7765f01276a.jpg (Blaster looks like that)
Backstory: To be revealed, involves a visit to an ancient Jedi temple…. dun dun dun.
Other: Has a "I don't do anything for anyone except me" attitude but is a real softie at heart. Force sensitive, is travelling the galaxy for answers about her fate. Rarely uses her abilities/saber to keep a low profile. She would rather use a blaster anyways.
(Yep, Essar and High-5 are bounty hunters)
(Is she okay or should I change it?)
(Nice character, but I think the odds of her having a lightsaber are kind of slim.)
( So are they speaking through a comm or like are they talking somewhere. Sorry, I am confused. It's been awhile.)
(Nice character, but I think the odds of her having a lightsaber are kind of slim.)
(Okay when I say found I mean found in a black market and stole it. But I could edit if you want. It's just an important part of the backstory.)
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