@Natasha
(Hold on I have a better name for her, give me a sec.)
(Hold on I have a better name for her, give me a sec.)
(K)
Another snap. She was being followed. Shiloh ran. I have to get out of here! Escape. To the Outer Rim. She spotted a Tie Fighter abandoned on top of an Imperial shield bunker. I'll have to disable the shield first the get out of here! She thought, and seconds later her plan went into action.
Jana stumbled backwards. "Oof…sorry." She told the guy who had bumped into her.
(Endor is in the Outer Rim…)
(Wow, duh. Hold on, I'll fix it.)
"Watch where you're going punk." He muttered. He glanced behind and saw stormtroopers heading for the launchpad where his ship was. "Hi-5, go ahead and hide things, I'll distract the troopers." "And get shot no doubt." She muttered, jogging back to the ship.
Another snap. She was being followed. Shiloh ran. I have to get out of here! Escape. To… She couldn't think. A system popped into her head. Lothal. Yes… perfect! She spotted a Tie Fighter abandoned on top of an Imperial shield bunker. I'll have to disable the shield first the get out of here! She thought, and seconds later her plan went into action.
(Is this better?)
(It's great!)
Jana's eyes flared. "Punk? You're calling me a punk?" She whispered. "Hey, get that punk!!" A stormtrooper yelled. Jana sighed. "Always the lucky one, aren't I?" She pickled up her communicator. "Hey Shayeve, you getting to my position anytime soon?"
"Yeah yeah sorry. I'm a little busy at the moment!" You could here screaming from the other end of the com.
"Seems you aren't the only one on the Stormies' bad side." He said, scrutinizing the Togruta before him.
"Nope. My friend and I have been……………….ahh…………..let's say………………..'messing with them'. It's great fun, actually."
He nodded. "Sounds like it." The stormtroopers had come up to them now. "You two! Show your IDs." The leader said.
Jana raised her eyebrow. "Ehh, how 'bout no." She replied.
Essar glared at her. She had no tact. "Uh, yah, give me a moment. Forgive my friend here, she's a bit tipsy." He gave her a look. 'Play along.'
Jana rolled her eyes. Tipsy? TIPSY??? I'll show you 'tipsy'. She thought, but she didn't do anything, seeing as the guy seemed to have some kind of plan.
Yasmin clenched her teeth as her small ship prepared for landing, flicking the manual switch. There were people down there, and she needed to get them out.
The stormtrooper sighed. "Just hand over the IDs." "Yeah yeah, of course." Essar started to search himself in an exaggerated show of emptying (empty) pockets and even looked down his boots. "Oh wait!" He said. He stomped on the trooper's foot.
Shiloh ducked into the bunker, not even thinking. Move, go, GO! she internally ordered herself commands. Shoot! she took out the guards and the operator. She moved quickly to the control panel and activated the Tie Fighter and disabled the shield generator. She raced to the roof and got seated behind the control panel. "Never flown one of these before," she muttered. A second's hesitation. "Well, there's a first time for everything!" She shrugged and directed the Tie Fighter up into space. "Lothal, here we come," she set the coordinates.
(I know that I'm doing this really fast, but I want to get her over to where everyone else is so… And the planet we're all meeting at is Lothal, right?)
(Nope actually Garel.)
(Oh. Ok. I'll get her there somehow.)
Meanwhile on Hoth
Winter knew she was being followed. The strange boy, that she had been seeing for days, was still following her.She decided she had finally had enough. She screamed seemingly to the wind, "WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME? Come out and show yourself. I promise that I won't hurt you too much." As she summoned her armour. Elias knew he was in for it this time. He had to show himself, or else face her when he was already at wits end. He came out from behind the the snowpile that he was hiding behind. He started, "I mean no harm. I lost everything, and you seem to be the only one who hasn't tried to kill me yet. My family has forsaken me, and I was exiled. I have nothing left to do but follow you. Please let me join you. I need someone to keep me sane. Please." Winter relaxed, and Elias calmed down. Winter lets her armour start to melt. She looks at Elias. "My name is Winter. Now, I need your name. If we are to be nomads together, then I need to know." Elias obliges. "My name is Elias. Nice to meet you Winter. NIce to know that I found a friend here on this ice planet. Now how are we supposed to get off? I know a place where we can go. It's the planet Garel. Now we just have to get there…"
Jana jabbed her elbow into the trooper's helmet, knocking him out. "Thanks." She said sarcastically.
"No problem." He said. "We should probably get out of here though. Is your ship nearby?"
( Did I make a character template and second where should I snug in my character?)
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