forum The Best Quotes from your Characters?

Started January 20, 2020 by Deleted user

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(context: Stepmother from cinderella talking to a narrator of her story. She's self-aware)

You have no idea what it is like to lead your family to a miserable end time after time, and I hope you never do. You must understand that it makes me sick, telling this story over and over, again and again, being the only character with any recollection, being forced to abuse and cause pain, cry yourself to sleep because you’re the monster, and then wake up the next morning because the show must go on!

(gets up) I have done things no mother should do. I’ve been forced to beat my own stepdaughter, to disfigure my own daughters, for CENTURIES. We had a life before this story, did you know that? I loved Ella as if she was my own. Yes, I had married her father for his money and land, but I never intended to harm the innocent little girl that offered me flowers when I arrived each day. I thought of her as my own daughter, albeit a much kinder one. I treated her well. Isabella taught her how to sew. Mariella taught her how to sing.

And then those Grimm brothers and their twisted minds came and rewrote our story. And now, I am forced to be a cruel, unloving, villainous character.

Thus, imagine my joy and bewilderment when we reached The End and the story didn’t begin anew. We began a new chapter. I fixed my relationship with Ella. She forgave me, despite all that I’ve done to her.

And then we reset. Every year, we had only one reset when your company came in. And for fifty years, I managed to feel better about my sins. I felt like a real mother. Suddenly, we had no reset for 5 years. And then things began again. Things were slightly different. Background characters weren’t showing up on time.

With the reset, I had to return to the story. I had to harm Ella, disfigure my daughters…There came a point where… my girls, they… They didn’t change back. We were back at the beginning and their eyes were… I saw the tears of blood dripping from their sockets and.. The story went on as normal. And it only got worse. The resets continued, but something broke. Each reset resulted in more and more corruption. I am the only one now that is mostly free from glitching.

So, now I ask you to fix my story. Give us the happy ending we deserve. Rewrite our story. Please.

Persona: Clark I swear to non- existent Jesus if you start monologuing I will riot

Persona: Not gonna lie darling but your a fantastic kisser

Persona: Honestly I didn't think this plan would get this far, it was more of an impulsive decision but we can roll with this

Persona: Jude?

Jude: Yes my Lady?

Persona: For the love of Universe please stop talking.

Now here are some of my other characters:

Caiman: Hey is anyone awake?

Jax: Nope

Esme: Babe?

Lea: What?

Esme: I'm glad I didn't end up brutally killing you

Lea: You know what? I'm pretty glad that didn't happen too.

Sam: DAMMIT SUNNY YOU CAN'T KILL HIM THAT'S ILLEGAL.

(that last one is a mood)
for my FNAF (don't judge)

Vex: MIKA!
Mika: In actual office WHAT!
Vex: TURN THE FREAKING FLASHLIGHT ON FOXY'S AT THE DOOR!
Mika: flicks the light on OH SWEET MOTHER OF JESOOS! He ate his face

(more fnaf)

Mika: slaps Mike
Mike: shook why did you slap me? pouts
Mika: Oh I slapped you… I thought you were Vincent
Vincent: half way across the Pizzaria with a knife in hand I'M RIGHT HERE

God of Madness/Chaos (Still debating name): "Such poor, sane individuals. Complete bores to this world. How about we spice things up a bit with a little spark of chaos and a breeze from the winds of insanity."

Hellauder: "Strong words for such a weak human. I want to see how confident you'd be if I ever were free…but, I can already see you running off…or at least trying too."

Lupinus: "Leave it to Narcissus to play with 'fire' which even he can't stand…and to think he's the eldest…idiot…"

Lady Sheliak: "My sting is worse than my bite darling, better watch how you approach."

Lord Xanthos: "Listen here asshole, you don't Fuck with me or those I protect. Those who have in the past, are nothing but ash now. So I suggest tucking your tail between your legs and getting the fuck out of my sight before I change my mind."

I had a bunch but I like this one the best. Also, for better imagery, Skylynn is 14 and Diana is around her mid-late 20's.

Diana: Well, Little Miss Empress–
Skylynn: Queen. I'm a Queen not some ruthless Empress here to annex your lands- kind of.
Diana: Well, my deepest and sincerest apologies, Your Majesty, your large entourage of soldiers that you came waltzing around with to this hell of a fallen monarchial land gave me the wrong impression.
Skylynn: offended noises

Sita: Macey! Don't worry! We've come to save you! Wait, why are you eating a plate of sausages and mash?

Macey (To the reader): I should eat more. It keeps me stable I guess.

Clemmie: Great. Now I've got two bodies to deal with.

Yet again my chaotic FNAF ocs (also Mike and Vincent are actually cannon)

Mika: MIKE!
Mike: right beside her WHAT! _{Did you have to scream in my ear}

Mika: Yes I did and hi walks off
Vincent: Watches Mika as she walks
Mike: slaps the back of Vincent's head Stop

Vex and Pheonix: laughing
Vincent: turns to his daughter and wife WHAT!
#Vex: Your hair is what hands Vincent a mirror
Pheonix had dyed Vincent's hair pink while he was sleeping
Vincent: Screeches and throws the mirror

Also Clemmie: You can't put a corpse in a princess contest and expect no one to notice.

Cameron: I've been many places in this universe but I don't think I've ever met anyone as dumb as you.

Samuel: You think you've beaten me just because you got me on the ground? You're probably right but that won't stop me from getting back up.

Ali: I didn't mean to burn down to foster home… it kind of just happened.

A-Blade: And now I have my best friend and a bunch of idiots to deal with

Arcana mischief with some OCs and Canon

Jade: Hey Asra
Asra: Yeah Jade?
Jade: An apple a day keeps the doctor away…
Asra: grabs an apple then throws it at Julian
Julian: OW rubs the back of his head what was that for??
Asra: To keep you away
A-ya: Pffft…walks up to Jade what did you do?

Tristan: "Since I don't have you Jason, I'll make you succumb to me."

Jason: "Why are you doing this!? Why me! Oh God- You made me kill her!"

Xiu: I would stay away from the Kates twins, once they see a new hottie…Another fan club is in motion."

Ruby & Lucy Kates: "Do you ever imagine what Tristan is thinking about? He's just staring down Jason for three minutes now. Sexual tension?"

Johnny: "Sorry, I only speak non-homophobic? Can you repeat that in queer?"

(my sides kinda like Thomas sanders)
Peyton: SCREECH there's a spider!
Rain: Jumps up on a chair in fear SPIDER!
Vex: picks the spider up May there you are! clearly happy
Rain and Peyton: Look at each other with confusion
Riley: Laughs at them
Loki: Riley stop

Protagonist to antagonist: " IF YOU WANT TO HATE ME THAT MUCH, THEN I'LL GIVE YOU A REASON TO HATE ME!!"
Stabs villain with a spear in the head

Stardew: What? Is some ‘crucial human element’ lost? I told you both, I am not going to be your friend, I am going to be your mentor. I am not human, do not treat me like one. I am competent in my field, which is action, and if you want to do it, go off without me, but if you want me back, by the Tree you’ll have a trek, and even then if you find me, I will not be ready to forgive you. Do you see the way I burn? I am part fae, which is akin to feeling the power of the raging elements through you, and now I dare you: choose for yourself your next path. I will not tell you your business, so do not tell me mine.

" From a young age, I learned much about this world! I have learned that using science I can create organic or mechanical bodies! I can create portals to other dimensions! Hell! I can create gates to other universes! But in the end none of this matters to me… what one must be able to do is synthetically create souls…" ~Peter Grymm Vasch

(i'm probably using this all wrong, because I'm literally putting a monologue here. The quotes don't fit together without the context. the quotes will be in italics.)

(context: A character is going through a glitched/corrupted version of Cinderella. The character speaking is the Step-Mother. My first attempt at writing a redeemable villain. This is all on a stage.)

LADY ROSEWARN: Is it so hard to believe that I hate seeing my home become a scattered mess?

You have no idea what it is like to lead your family to a miserable end time and time. It makes me sick, telling this story over and over, again and again, being the only character with any recollection; Being forced to abuse and torture; Crying yourself to sleep because you’re the monster and then wake up the next morning because the show must go on!

I have done things no mother should do. I’ve been forced to beat my own stepdaughter, to disfigure my own daughters, for CENTURIES.

We had a life before this story, did you know that? I loved Ella as if she was my own. Yes, I had married her father for his money and land, but I never intended to harm the innocent little girl that offered me flowers when I arrived each day. I thought of her as my own daughter. I treated her well. Isabella taught her how to sew. Mariella taught her how to sing.

And then those Grimm brothers came and rewrote our story.

One day we reached The End and the story didn’t begin anew. So we made our own chapter. I fixed my relationship with Ella, despite all that I’ve done to her.

And then we reset. Every year, we had only one reset when your company came in. And for fifty years, I managed to feel better about my sins. I felt like a real mother. There was no reset for years. But the story began again. Things were slightly different. Background characters weren’t showing up on time.

I had to return to the story. Return to being a cruel, twisted, hideous mess that calls itself human. I had to harm Ella, disfigure my daughters…There came a point where… my girls, they… They didn’t change back. We were back at the beginning and their eyes were… I saw the tears of blood dripping from their sockets and.. The story went on as normal. And it only got worse. The resets continued, but something broke. Each reset resulted in more and more corruption. I am the only one now that is mostly free from glitching.

So, now I ask you to fix my story. Give us the happy ending we deserve. At least. the ending that Ella deserves.

Cello, who never realised that manipulative behaviour doesn't make you a good person:
"What would you have me do? Not manipulate people to gain power?" scoffed Cello. "Would you have me let people make their own mistakes and potentially destroy themselves? Absolutely not."

Conversation between two old multi-dimensional time travelers. Rick's from an alternate world where the feminist movement ended in such a extreme split that it's basically men v. women now. Elise is a WW2 bomber, and a war hero.
"Don't you forget why humanity got as far as they did! Men! We did it all!" Rick practically shouted.
"Yes, yes, Man Maketh Fire and all that," Elise replied tartly. "But Woman Maketh Fire Under Man's Hiney if he doesn't stop making sweeping statements that exclude women from world history."

My favorite character, Dakota, in everyday life:
"You thinkin' of picking a fight?" Dakota gave a laugh, then abruptly stopped, all humor gone from their face. "Just. Don't."
"What you donna do, beat me up?" egged on Tam. Dakota shook their head.
"Nope."
"…Then what?" asked Tam, slightly deflated.
"I'm going to ignore you until you give up. And then I'm not going to notice you leaving, because I'm not going to notice you're here in the first place."

Logan: "The words of others aren't you. It's only how they see you." (to Thomas)

Kade: "You know, you're kinda cute for a soaked, beady-eyed quadruped. I think I'll keep you." (to a raccoon)

(i'm probably using this all wrong, because I'm literally putting a monologue here. The quotes don't fit together without the context. the quotes will be in italics.)

(context: A character is going through a glitched/corrupted version of Cinderella. The character speaking is the Step-Mother. My first attempt at writing a redeemable villain. This is all on a stage.)

LADY ROSEWARN: Is it so hard to believe that I hate seeing my home become a scattered mess?

You have no idea what it is like to lead your family to a miserable end time and time. It makes me sick, telling this story over and over, again and again, being the only character with any recollection; Being forced to abuse and torture; Crying yourself to sleep because you’re the monster and then wake up the next morning because the show must go on!

I have done things no mother should do. I’ve been forced to beat my own stepdaughter, to disfigure my own daughters, for CENTURIES.

We had a life before this story, did you know that? I loved Ella as if she was my own. Yes, I had married her father for his money and land, but I never intended to harm the innocent little girl that offered me flowers when I arrived each day. I thought of her as my own daughter. I treated her well. Isabella taught her how to sew. Mariella taught her how to sing.

And then those Grimm brothers came and rewrote our story.

One day we reached The End and the story didn’t begin anew. So we made our own chapter. I fixed my relationship with Ella, despite all that I’ve done to her.

And then we reset. Every year, we had only one reset when your company came in. And for fifty years, I managed to feel better about my sins. I felt like a real mother. There was no reset for years. But the story began again. Things were slightly different. Background characters weren’t showing up on time.

I had to return to the story. Return to being a cruel, twisted, hideous mess that calls itself human. I had to harm Ella, disfigure my daughters…There came a point where… my girls, they… They didn’t change back. We were back at the beginning and their eyes were… I saw the tears of blood dripping from their sockets and.. The story went on as normal. And it only got worse. The resets continued, but something broke. Each reset resulted in more and more corruption. I am the only one now that is mostly free from glitching.

So, now I ask you to fix my story. Give us the happy ending we deserve. At least. the ending that Ella deserves.

(This has strong Into the Woods vibes and I love it?? ITW is probably my favorite musical so that's like the highest praise lol)

Griedan: “Peace is but a dream for us to experience at this point. I have existed for centuries, centuries of war against my own kind. Why? We cannot be changed. It is something that is coded into our species.”

Irorashi: “The party goes everywhere, dear. Be it the skies, the ground, the ocean— everywhere.”

Ahuthro: “It took your species hundreds upon thousands of years to reach this point. This point of technological advancement. But I? A mere clump of cells, that you unfortunately awoke from a block of ice? A block of ice on a planet that you never should’ve landed on? A clump of cells capable of brings a species to its knees. A species that seems to be so good at killing each other. At making new ideas, and using those ideas to gain power. Yet, even a super predator finds a hurdle they can not overcome. Eventually, the tower must be toppled. By yours, truly. Truly sorry.”

One of my favorite scenes between one of my main ruthless antagonist who is wounded severely and the smol young woman who finds him and tries to help him even though he threatens to kill her.

Him: "If you had any brains, you'd leave right now."
Her: "… Well, I guess I don't have any brains then, do I? But I do have a heart, so I'm not leaving you here to die."
Him: "You don't know what kind of man you're dealing with."
Her: "The injured kind."

(context: Ben opens up about his mental illness to his friend)

"Want to know one symptom of borderline personality disorder? No sense of self. No sense of identity. I’m a fucking shell of a person. Do I care if you live or die? Why do I hurt everyone? Why am I slicing my arms with little blades? Why am I so afraid you’ll leave when I’m not even sure I want you here? Why am I devastated that you’re suffering? Do I want to die for you? Does your pain erase me? Can I fix it? Why am I screaming ‘I hate you’? Why am I shoving you away when I wanted you here? Why do you not see what I see?"