I just had a mental breakdown because of my physics test (yay) and really wanted to distract myself, so… Tell me about your characters! I really want to learn about your stories and could even give some feedback and constructive criticism (If you want me to)
Yo. I don't have time to type up something, but I think all my characters are public. Go ahead and click on my username and check out whatever you want. If you want to ask questions that is honestly great.
Ok! Thanks
Oh, hi :0
I dont really know how to start since there's a lot of info, but the story im working on is centered around 4 protags. The main two are an elf and his adopted younger sibling who somehow get dragged in this adventure due to the younger sibling being the last specimen of their specie (i use the pronoun "they" for the sibling because, even though they look like a girl, in reality they dont really have a visible gender).
Later on, they meet a shy artist boy and a moody witch, who choose to stick around the main two for fun. But because the MC's sibling is the last of their kind, they inadvertedly attract trouble like a magnet. The only reason they havent been captured yet is because of a special sword they found ditched in an abandoned place (they initially took it for the younger sibling, Narion, to use as a cane, because they're blind). The sword itself houses a daemon, a creature that was once from the same specie as Narion, but was downgraded to what it is now by humans, in an experiment that took place in the past. The daemon, named Rin, is a bit different from the other daemons (he has no voice at all and he's kinda dead inside), but he manages to save the protags from whatever trouble they get into. For a large part of the story, the protags are periodically teased by one of the secondary villains, Hiryur, who does what he does for fun.
That's pretty much all i can type for now (tis late asf) qwq
But if you want, you can also check out the characters (id really appreciate if you could give them a brief critique as well). Here are some of them:
Tanis –> Theyon (his backstory was recently changed, but i didnt manage to type it out yet, you may skip it if you want)
Narion –> Narion Krysmenor
Alphonse –> Alphonse Randegger
Phoenix –> Invalid Character
Rin –> Rynn
Hiryur –> Hiryur Akoai
If you want to learn more about the story you can ask, or check out some of the other characters if they spark your interest
Hope it's entertaining enough qwq
Well, Thank You! I'll take a look at them and make some comments when I have time! Have a good night