forum Speak Notebookians about your horrible villains!(or antagonists)
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@Morosis group

One of my favourite villains is probably a character called Sicarius
He was born in 1950 Sighisoara (City in Romania) as Cristofer Ioniță in a poverty-ridden area. He grew up surrounded by street crime and the consequences of a struggling economy. At the age of 23, he moved to Budapest where he started to work low salary jobs. In 1979, he decided to join the army but was rejected to the communist rumours beginning to orbit the Romanian state. In 1981, the Romanian revolution was beginning to start and revolts in major cities were on the rise (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Romanian_Revolution). Cristofer began to join the revolution against the dictators of Romania and led gangs down the streets of Bucharest. His skills and courage were noticed by the Facility, how a kid raised from a background of irrelevance now is beginning to become an icon of his people. He trained himself to a sufficient level of fighting, handling and understanding of artillery and studied the mechanics of army vehicles and tactics to stand a chance against their resistance.

The Facility decided that on the day a major movement of political hierarchy would be the perfect opportunity to claim Cristofer as their own. During the Ceaușescus attempted helicopter extraction and the storming of the Communist party headquarters, Cristofer was present and was able to overpower the bodyguards alongside his fellow rebels. However, during this event, he was injured and knocked unconscious by an anonymous armoured militia but everyone was too focused on the fleeing leaders rather than a single individual.

Cristofer awoke to his limbs being tied up by rope and attached to the back of a truck being driven out into the Rural parts of Romania, far away from Budapest. The date was Christmas day, the same date that the Ceaușescus were to be executed therefore he must have been immobilised for a long time. In a desperate attempt to escape from what he thought were communist rogues taking him hostage, Cristofer was able to cut the loose bonds via a piece of sharp metal in the truck, grab a service rifle and started his escape into the forest of the country. The next hours consisted of a manhunt. He had to get out of their sights without been seen or heard.

However, luck was not on his side as the Facility is always five steps ahead. It was revealed it was all a test. The kidnapping, cat and mouse through the forest as they swiftly subdued him with a perfect shot to his left thigh. They just wanted to see if he was just as dynamic and resourceful as they needed and if he had that driving survival instinct buried deep within.

The next decades consisted of human experimentation, brainwashing, a human enhancing system far beyond any other scientific attempts assigned to Project Lambda as X-41. They gave him the codename Sicarius and his entire history, identity and memories were wiped. They removed his fingerprints from any system and his hand, they made him kill his family to eliminate the opportunity of weakness. They were making him obedient, loyal, an assassin who could do whatever it took to keep the order of society and work within the threads of humanity, stitching them appropriately. They were also preparing him for something greater, ascended but it was revealed his obedience was what made him flawed for the experiment. Instead, it was Bruce, X-42, who would become the Tau.
Bruce, Cristofer and a woman called Amelia had formed a dying friendship within the Facility but that is a story for another origin…

During Insurgents Run, no one knew what happened to Sicarius as they all though his loyalty would make him a non/easy target. They were wrong as it turned out he wasn't as thoughtless as he seemed, actually killing a few doctors on his escape to the real world where now he had no identity, past, place or purpose.
He worked rogue, making his way through the spiral of anarchy and killing any criminal or heathen he could find. His path kept entwining with Bruce's but his existence kept being denied by everyone.
Eventually, he decided to make a group of his own, acting as the "supervillain" group of Bruce's heroes. Here he became the leader, though still mostly uncooperating and distant from his "allies".

Long story short, he acts as the opposite of the protagonist Bruce and is one of the most complex characters I have made. His ending is bittersweet as he eventually does help Bruce in fighting s shared threat but then decides to leave their problems to rest and is unable to gain his purpose. The last we see of him is the uncertainty of his future as he says farewell and disappears over the rooftops. Forever gone.

He's not really a villain but he certainly isn't a hero, or anti-villain or anti-hero. He kinda has his own alignment.

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@Young-Dusty-the-Monarch-of-Dusteria group

There are some very interesting villains here! Kudos to y'all ^^
My story's set in a dystopia, so you can imagine that kind of setting brings forth some pretty nasty individuals. The worst one that my protagonists have to deal with, however, is probably Travis of Red Creek.
There's nothing very fancy about Travis. He has no real power or wealth, no hordes of minions or foreboding stronghold. But he's so good at emotional manipulation/abuse, so skilled at convincing others that they are worthless, that even after he abandoned his younger brother for almost twenty years and made no attempts to contact him, he was able to walk straight into the tribe of murderous bandits his brother now ruled and reawaken the subconscious conditioning he'd implanted in his brother's mind without so much as raising his voice, gaining total control of the tribe overnight.
He's a powerful psychopath who knows exactly how to befriend others and subsequently bend them to his will. He has no respect for life and kills both animals and people for fun. All he wants is power over people, and he doesn't care who he hurts or what lies he has to tell to get what he wants. He's the definition of toxic in every way. Imagine a terrible crime you've heard about on the news, and this guys probably done it.
He's one of the few characters of mine that has no redeeming traits. I sort of made him that way on purpose since I tend to be pretty bad at making villains that are actually bad. Basically I don't want anybody sympathizing with this guy, he's a creep, and he only seems cool/nice when he's trying to gain someone's trust so he can stab them in the back later. Those who trust him end up regretting it for the rest of their lives.

@Mojack group

Frax, the main character (at least where the majority of the chapters view the perspective of) AND the antagonist of my universe, Deep Freeze.

Frax in the story kinda just showed up outta nowhere, at first. None of the characters really knew where Frax came from (even then, it took them a while to hear about Frax.) Originally, Frax started out at the bottom of the ‘pecking order,’ targeting those who they knew couldn’t fight back. Those who were weak, and agreed way too easily. Easy to manipulate as well. Frax poisoned the mind of many (at this stage Frax wasn’t really heard of, no one really knew who was leading a rebellion). Once Frax was happy with the destruction they’d caused they went back into hiding.
Some time later we see Frax again who has changed a little bit in personality but a lot in appearance. They are ready for the second stage of their plan, Deep Freeze.
Frax is actually…okay when you talk to them, I guess. A bit weird, but as long as you tread carefully, you should be alright. Frax is a bit genocidal as well. Maybe a lot more than just a bit. Clearly though, something is wrong in the head with Frax. They rarely ever get truly angry but for their ‘last moments’ (which actually wasn’t their last moments) or if something goes very very wrong.

Frax is my current favourite villain. I’m working on them, though.

@Cookies group

My antagonist for the story I'm currently working on is named Crystrell (but normally goes by Crys [Chris])
Anyway, she shows up a bit after my protagonist (Jade) and becomes friends with the resident cinnamon roll, Starry.
COMPLETELY COINCIDENTALLY, shortly after she gets there, Starry starts becoming Sad Boi™ and yet another character's (chronic) disease starts worsening yayyyy
That character happens to die as well-
So Crys killed one character and hecked up another, while pretending to be ~°•nice•°~
Not as diabolical as some of you guys's, but she does like knives so that's cool

@NotSoBeautifulDiseaster group

So my villains consist of:

  • A manipulative, violent jock who see people as puppets and pawns

  • An entitled, two-faced, perverted girl who is extremely obsessed with a gay guy and bullies anyone she views as immoral (mostly other girls)

  • A vengeful ghost that tries to drag her son to heaven

  • A cult leader that obsessed with kitsunes

  • A gold-digging, abusive, cruel waste of space that basically abuses anyone to get ahead, including his family

  • A yandere werecat that possessed his stepson to torment him and kill all his loved ones because he "split" up him and the boy's mother (by that I mean calling the police)

  • An apathetic misanthropic woman who basically just screw over about people to get rich and live comfortably

Also here are some my anti-villains(They most end up being redeemed)

  • A shy yet short-tempered albino delinquent girl she's an underling of the leader of the school gang

  • A street-smart, refined school gang leader who's not apart of this system

  • An energetic boy who's dangerously protective of his younger, trans sister

  • An angry jock pissed at the MMC of the arc for previously bullying him

  • A vampire bounty hunter hungry for bad boy-kun's blood

  • A yandere fairy desperate for any socialization, due to him being exiled

  • A homesick mermaid that has to use to turn back to normal

  • An ex that's been ghosting bad boy-kun

  • A cultist imouto trying to kill her brother

  • A cynical hitman trying to kill his brother

@SpaceCadet_Bongo

I have some villains from my different OC worlds that I would love to share with you guys in a quick summary.

Binding wall: Rin Kuro. <- This bitch, after Zuri (My Kenyan home girl) starts a secret revolution within the Academy, snitches her plans to the very person Zuri didn't want to find out, The headmistress Miss Byrne. This goddamn sneaky, racist traitor decides, "y'know what, my life is more important than the lives of some irrelevant kids, Imma sacrifice their's for my own." Throughout the entirety of the story, this JAPANESE THOT keeps eluding to the idea that, because Zuri has dark skin, that means she is by her standard 'lower' then her and less intelligent. EXCUSE ME FCKER! Honestly though, Rin gets her Just Desserts in Osaka when Zuri defeats her, after Rin killed her best friend Chime with her samurai sword….. Despite being my own character……God I fcking hate Rin…..

Creekmouth: Daniel Smith. Unlike Rin (Who I just loathe with every bone in my body for being a racist turd) Daniel is horrible for a different reason. He's creepy and stares you down, making you feel unsafe just from a single glance. He's armed with a cultist dagger and uses it to stab people right through the heart, and take their blood and smear it on the ground for rituals. He speaks with diction, and he enunciates every word that comes out of his mouth…. almost as if he wants you to think their the last you'll hear.

Tigerlily: Icari. He's an angel that believes that the worlds chaos and hectic-ness has lead to more evil than good, and he seeks to purify the land of all abnormalities. He has powerful eagle wings and uses light magic to turn creatures into stone statues, killing them. This guy might look innocent enough but I can assure you he's out to destroy.

Lucida: Jackie. This arsehat is responsible for the capture of the Gifted, Ugandan child (Who has high autism) Tuma Eriyo, who can create any animal he so desires out of his mind. Hired by the government, she is payed to capture this child and bring him back for experimentation. There is this cool fight scene though, where she and Tuma are on a moving passenger train, and Tuma keeps creating dangerous animals for her to take care of.. so its like….

Jackie- Kicks train compartment doors down and loads pistol "Alright you little shit… come out where ever you ar-"

Tuma- Yeets a Python at her from behind a chair

Jackie- "Jesus Christ!!"

I don't know…. Hope you liked my villians….. I hate them with a passion!

Bye (^▽^) - Sunny

@Cassiopeia

My character isn't really a villain, but she ain't the nicest person in the whole world, either.
She was crowned the queen of a huge country at only ten years old, after both of her parents were murdered by wizards and witches. When she was 14, a young wizard training in the capital became friends with her, and she trusted him a lot. He was in love with her, but she didn't feel the same way. He was angry and he cursed her into submission, leaving her pregnant with a child she didn't want…. Yeah. Basically, her life has been destroyed by mages..

So, after she dumps the aforementioned child on a mercenary who had been serving in her army, she outlaws the practice of magic with a penalty of life in jail (though that quickly escalated to public execution, because the jails filled up so quickly….)

Yeah. She's not nice, but her life hasn't exactly been sunshine and roses. And I'd like to think that readers will be able to sympathize with how she reacts to the cards she's been dealt…

— L.C.

@Morosis group

Favourite villains of mine: Sicarius, Puppeteer
Least favourite (personality wise): Forge and Qarinah
Villains I'm legit afraid of: The Union, Vimmensius and Cult, Dr Alsberg

Villains I either can't help but relate to but feel sorry for: Killjoy, Marionette, Tungsten, Cyanide, Blizten
Anti-villains/blurry alignment: Moriah, Blitzen, Cannibal, Ivan