forum I Will Critique Characters

Started July 14, 2020 by Deleted user

tune

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could you critique kacey pls?

Yeah, G stands for gay lol.
Duly noted about the name. I might change his nationality or his name. Thank you so much :)

For Theo:
Overview is good. Just one question, does G mean gay?
Looks are good, but I am going to nitpick about this, if he's Italian, his name doesn't sound very Italian. Ashton is English I'm pretty sure (I am part Italian though and my last name is Italian so that's probably only why I noticed xD)
Nature is really good.
Social is good, but if he's a prince, it would be good to have a politics section.
History is good, the story sounds really interesting! It might be good to make it longer though.

All in all really good!

For Kacey:
Looks are really good, and it's not often that you see a character with vitiligo, so that's a good detail.
Nature is really good, could maybe use a little more detail, but is decent already.
Social is good, but why does politics have "but" before it?
History could use a lot more detail, and also more about her instead of just her siblings.
Notes are interesting, a romantic rivalry is a good concept.

All in all good job!

For Kacey:
Looks are really good, and it's not often that you see a character with vitiligo, so that's a good detail.
Nature is really good, could maybe use a little more detail, but is decent already.
Social is good, but why does politics have "but" before it?
History could use a lot more detail, and also more about her instead of just her siblings.
Notes are interesting, a romantic rivalry is a good concept.

All in all good job!

thank you!! i'm currently editing her right now to give her more of a background.