I'm new and would love advice for my character

@PetiteGrumpyCrepe

New to this and just need advice on a character im trying to develop more

here's the link, thanks

I tried to look at it, but I think the link is still private!

Hi there! Welcome to notebook! There's a tutorial on how to make a page public in this thread by the ever-spectacular @Riorlyne

My bad, should be public now

Okay, here comes the list of points I found.

how long is her hair? shoulder length? hip? floor?
What is an average body type?
what does the birthmark look like?
what criteria does she (unconsciously) use to decide whether someone is worthy or not?
what do you define as black magic or white magic?
what are those insecurities? in what field can they be found? appearance? intelligence? personality?
what did she study at the university?
why did she cast the non-dying-spell on herself?

Feel free to ignore or incorporate as much as you want.

@"M.W.Poel" I really appreciate your help, I followed these to the best of my abilities so thank you for pointing those things out :)