@Celestial-Burst
@Ok_Kaii
Awesome! ^^
Alright, first her looks section. I think you should be a bit more specific with each section. For example, just telling me her hair is "blonde" really doesn't tell me much. Theres so many shades of blonde that I could easily confuse her hair for strawberry blond if it's a bleached color. Same for her skin tone and stuff.
So reading her traits section she seems like a really interesting choice for being the man character! Shes a lot different than most characters I critique which is really nice! Its good to see something unique every once in a while lol. But One thing i noticed about her personality is that she has a lot more negative traits than positive. I mean, its usually okay if theres a few more than positive, but giving the character a lot more flaws the pros can really drive away the reader from liking them, it can often make them seem annoying if you know what I mean lol. So I suggest add some more positive to personality! And explain them. You mentioned shes adventurous and fun loving, but didn't really go into detail about it.
Her mannerisms section is pretty good! But I think you can add some more simpler mannerisms as well. What does she do when shes excited? Sad? Nervous?
Lol I feel her prejudice xD I never know what to put for my characters. Usually its just something or someone they have some type of hate against for not really any reason, since… that's technically a prejudice lol.
For her favorites, maybe you can try explaining why her favorites are her favorites! Why does she love chameleons so much? What's so special about her car?
Well theres not much to critique on her history section, but other than that she seems like a really good character! I can tell you've put much time into her so far! Good job~!
Anyway, good luck!
