@Robin_Jones
He's cute! Do remember to write him as a 12 year old and not like he's an adult (idk why people sometimes end up writing child characters like this but it happens)
The whole talking to animals thing has been done many times, so remember to keep it original.
Other than that, look more into him as a person with his likes and dislikes and such. Once he's fleshed out he'll be an even better character.
Camille Marie White Here she is, she is one of my favorites:)
@Eren Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep that in mind ^^
@WritingWizard
You have a pretty well developed backstory for her, which is good.
Expand upon what exactly "knight" politics are.
Maybe explain somewhere what exactly dragon knights do? (this isn't particularly necessary, but if you're making this profile to show to people then please do add in what a dragon knight is)
What kinds of blade weapons does she favor? Knives? Swords? Specify a type of blade. (also if it's a sword, specify what type of sword because there's a lot of different ones)
While annoying people is a motivation, it feels a little shallow. Maybe expand on it. Why does she annoy people? Is it out of pure spite? Is it for attention?
Other than that she's an interesting character, and you seem to know where you're going with this, so keep at it.
Thanks! Those are some helpful things to think about.
I am working on a story for a game, and wanted to know what you think of this guy, Fos Psychí
Here is my child Lucas. Thank you.