forum I'll critique characters! I will hopefully respond quickly!

Started February 27, 2019 by Anonymous author

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Hello, could you critique my 2 characters, Willow and Alexa? They’re new characters and they aren’t very good yet, as I’m new to character creating. I’m ok with you ripping them to shreds

Can you critique Jesse? Jesse David Reeves

I know you're probably swamped, but here's mine: Saoirse Sybil Mavor
Feel free to get back to me whenever! Thank you- Jana

Would you be willing to critique a short story?

If you have time do my new prince? (Don't be too harsh he is fairly undeveloped still)

Could you please look at this family trying to overthrow a government for me?

Can you look over my smol?

he's one of the main characters of my story, theres not much info but ill add more :)

You could say this is my first fully formed character, and I want to make sure I'm getting the details of how she would act with age and her disorders. If you could give some pointers that would be great!